Beast Controlling Hero

A seedling sprouted today!

I still like the beast-bending style, and the first beast-bending style is not a bad one, so it's very good.

It doesn't look good. I've 100% deleted the review. The first dozen or so pictures have pacing issues.

I hope this book can continue to work hard on this track and reach new heights🤓 New year and new atmosphere, this year is 2025㊗️The author is getting better year by year, and I look forward to the peak moment of this book. I remember that the shortcomings of the previous book were that the description of the supporting roles and powers was not written, and the ending was relatively sudden, but I still support the author. Life is not always smooth sailing, but persistence is the key. Come on, author! 👍 {"TopicId":"884786205291184128","TopicName":"Royal Beast yyds"}{"TopicId":"884786108524527616","TopicName":"Black Pepper Immortal"}{"To picId":"1108681596645212160","TopicName":"Beast Controller"} Finally, I also hope that everyone will have a new beginning, new gains, and new progress in the new year. Those who love life will eventually be loved and healed by life~❤️

I was speechless after reading the new chapter. Since the first generation of braves is so important, and you can also see the scene of the first generation of braves coming, why didn't this country want to go and take over? Not to mention completely protecting them like giant babies, at least quietly helping them at critical moments to prevent the first generation of brave men from dying for no reason. Isn't this normal? It feels like after a new chapter appears, the previous content is very witty!

It's worth a look, it's just that the progress is slow.

So brave? Actually wrote about group wear

I only have one question, why is there no stick Yong in the introduction?

The title of brave is a bit perfunctory, but there are no other problems. Calling him a boxing hero is better than calling him a holy hero, which is a little more serious. Since you already called him that, why did you suddenly come up with a landscape hero? Why not just call him the painting hero?

Go to the old book to promote it, otherwise I won't know you have a new book.

Does the author want to raise a river crab codename: 404?😏😏😏

After reading these three books, can I say that I am full of question marks? You call this the protagonist's golden finger? In the first book, The Master of Pet Beasts, the gourmet food panel, the food the protagonist worked so hard to make, just doesn't permanently increase the attributes of the pet beast. All TM has various negative effects. The better thing is to temporarily add a BUFF, garbage! In the second book Ascension of the Familiar, I don't even know if the protagonist has a golden finger. It's just a qualification that only looks at the number of skill spirit patterns. Is there any use in just knowing that he can't improve? In the end, the protagonist's beloved spirits all mutated by themselves inexplicably. The protagonist is useless at all. From the whole book, the protagonist has one advantage, especially not afraid of pain! The golden finger of this beast-controlling warrior should be the sequence talent, but after loading the three ordinary boss panels of this little takraw crab, a dozen attributes and a small skill are temporarily added. Count your own, your dozen attributes are equivalent to raising the unqualified pet beast to 60 points, and it is still temporary! Normal people won't continue watching this talent sequence after seeing it. They really don't want it! The golden finger of online novels is to know that the protagonist is invincible after reading it, rather than your feeling of being useless! It's really too weak! The protagonist who uses this kind of golden finger is destined to be able to get up only if someone gives him a gift like Xu Zhu and Duan Yu!

In fact, I think the author is not suitable for writing group dramas, and his skills are really not up to it. Like the previous book, Ascension of the Spirits, I worked hard to write about so many disciples in the early stage, but in the end, I didn't even have the strength to shout cheers. It was a complete waste of pen and ink. Author, if you really want to write a group drama, then you have to cheat the group, just like Tang San did in Douluo Continent, why did you cheat your own group? Don't think cheating is unreasonable. The biggest problem in your writing is that it's not cool or cool enough. If you don't cheat on the supporting characters, the end result will be like Ascension of the Spirit. In the early stage, you describe the supporting characters with words and ink, and then change the supporting characters in the later stage. Then you are equivalent to reshaping the supporting characters, which is simply impossible. If you really want to create a group, then write a smaller group, such as five people. Five people grow up together. The protagonist has the protagonist's troubles, and the supporting role can also have the supporting role's adventures. The world view you wrote is so big, but in the end the protagonist is left to face it alone, which makes the readers feel aggrieved. It's better to let the supporting characters also cheat, at least it will help the protagonist in the later stage. And I think your power + beast control system is really good. I don't know why you want to start a new one? I think you should go deep into this system and improve it. I like the military beasts and mechanical beasts you wrote before, so you can continue writing. Write a companion who likes to use military beasts. A spear can rule the country. If you give him a mount and a pet beast to fight together, wouldn't it become a supporting role? This supporting character likes to use mechanical beasts, and the last one to open a Gundam is also exciting. Personally, I prefer novels in which everyone controls beasts.

If the author of the protagonist is really interested in developing the "beast-controlling group portrait flow", I personally recommend studying more about the classic beast-controlling novel "Chong Mei". Personally, I think the writing is very good, both in terms of the protagonist and the supporting characters. Everyone's image is very three-dimensional and vivid. Some plots and settings are also very concise. There are not too many narrations and nonsense. You can really learn more from other good beast-control stories. You don't have to keep studying hard on your own. You can also read more comments (no matter good or bad, develop a strong heart and ask for advice humbly). After all, although the beast-control literature is relatively unpopular, it has been developed for so many years, and many themes have been mentioned. Some of them just change the soup without changing the medicine. Therefore, it is difficult to innovate and it is easy to fall into a dead end, which puts the cart before the horse in some aspects. However, I still find that the author has made great progress, so I will continue to work hard and look forward to more excellent new works. There is a shortage of books and it depends on you to keep me alive 😭

I have finished reading The Lord of Pet Beasts, and I stopped reading it when I saw that the protagonist had just returned to his family with his disciples. As of now, I found that my favorite is the Lord of Pet Beasts that you wrote earlier, which I finished reading last year. This book has many shortcomings. The cover title is not attractive, the popularity of the beast-control novel is low, and the first few chapters are all about group portraits. Zhao Youwei is dead, so what is the use of all the ink he spent earlier? So many descriptions of him and his ex-girlfriend could have been written in one stroke when he died, and these characters were too stiff when they met, as if they were following the predetermined plot "I should be angry, I should lose my temper, and then someone will be the peacemaker to mediate and I won't be angry and everyone will form a group together." Including many subsequent dialogues and behavioral descriptions, they are always very stiff and completely unnatural. In fact, you don't need to carefully write down what each person said and did, just write it down in one stroke. The plot is also too bland, fighting beasts and fighting beasts, why not design some game situations for this, the essence remains the same. The writing style has definitely improved. The writing style of The Beast Master is average, but I like the transition. In the secret realm, the Galaxy Explosive Seed transforms into a Sun Rabbit. Bai Wushang is in a coma, and then he is taken to the palace to transform, and his appearance improves. This is a good transition. Is the story old-fashioned? It is indeed old-fashioned, but I can continue reading. As for Ascension of the Familiar Spirit, the disciple system also has new ideas, but the protagonist's character is so high in the first three chapters. He takes a shower in less than two chapters, and describes in great detail how the protagonist feels comfortable. The character is gone. In the next volume, the elders of the outer sect can be openly disrespectful to a direct descendant, so I stopped reading. Subsequently, not many people have read this new book about the setting of beast masters and brave men. What's more, the problems you mentioned are just out of Novice Village after fifty chapters, and twenty chapters are considered too many. The new book can be written about a modern academic style, or a world view like that of a pet beast. It is easier to write in modern times, and there are more subjects that can be written about a pet beast. For example, you can write that the protagonist is a direct descendant of a top family, but the family is very united, and the base camps of all top families are stationed and explored on the border of the Hundred Thousand Forest. The setting is very large, and there are various powerful and intelligent beasts in it that want to destroy humans and so on. A better idea is to design a poor young man in the outback. What qualities are noticed by the traveling protagonist and then be taken into the side army? On the way back to the family, let's talk about the setting from the perspective of this supporting character. In the later stage, this supporting character can just appear a few times as an excellent beast master. Just for reference, I think the author's writing style can be more concise. What I read is that it is both nonsense and concise. Many words and narrations can be omitted at all, including the voice of the pet beast. If you write howling and shouting, or "whimpering twice", try to minimize the description of the pet beast shouting alone, which is a bit dramatic. It's really complicated. It took me half a month to read Pet Beast last year. In your closing remarks, you said you should humbly ask for advice. How long has it been since you finished it? You've already written a million words halfway through the book, so what's the point of commenting? At least I've caught up now. I hope you can see it. I sincerely hope that you will write a fantasy beast-controlling book like Pet Beast. I feel that this is your genre, and it is also the most comfortable book I have read. Don't inherit a bad book. Pet Beast, you wrote it as if it were a harem, but in the end, it was confiscated and it was unfinished.

The author should abandon the setting of the protagonist's prominent family background. There are also some unnecessary pretense and slap-in-the-face plots. Some of them focus too much on describing these. The imagination system is obviously well written, but it is lowered by these settings.

I've really been following your books. Your beast-control novel is the only one I've been able to read since Chongmei. Some of the settings are really interesting and it's not a mindless novel routine. I really like it.

Pet Beast Master and Ascension of Familiar Spirits are okay to use, but have flaws.

In fact, it doesn't matter if you give up. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch from the front. Try to learn from experience and start over again so that you can create a better theme.

It's no surprise that the author took the plunge. I gave up after reading the second chapter. The beginning of this book is terrible, I hope the author can do better next time.

Yes, the brave man is not a brave man in the traditional sense. The plot and scenes at the beginning are also very interesting. I hope it can be maintained.

A new book sets sail, a brief look at it. At present, the system is still cumbersome. Each of the 99 Brave Braves has specific divisions. It is huge and feels suitable for writing a long story. The main character is a beast, and the first one is a crab. He is biased and cold. Let's see how we can use our advantages to embody some new things in the future. Sequence talents are similar to the equipment dropped by the Peace Elite. The equipment attributes can be added to your own beast control. But why not add some equipment synthesis, decomposition, optimization and other operations of King of Glory. Otherwise, the three equipment slots are simply not enough. For example, the skulls, thigh bones, and tails of the wolf pack can be combined into a lone wolf set. You can also add some exclusive equipment to control the beasts (equipment similar to the special moves of the Pokémon Gathering Network), such as a crab that has a strong body and is immune to damage. Some suggestions, I hope Black Pepper will continue to work hard

How should I put it? Although there are group portraits at the beginning of the book, the scenes can be slightly reduced or passed over in one stroke to turn the situation around. Then I wrote 50 chapters, which may be less than an hour's reading for me. The amount is too small, and most readers may not come in to read it. I think it should at least be written until it is put on the shelf. If there are too few subscriptions, it can be cut. It is too early to cut it now. And if you change to a new book or change the subject matter, you may lose part of the old readers. Nowadays, many authors are relying on their heritage. Several novels I read before were the first and popular second parts. The competition is too fierce and I really can't write the second part of the Beast Master 😃😃😃 (Mainly I want to read the beast-control style. There are too few authors who write well, and I can't stand it. Qingquan's beast-control and immortality is not pure enough and I can't read it)

Ahhhhh, I just saw this, and it suddenly disappeared. In fact, I found it very interesting. I want to read the follow-up 😭. Come on, author.

I put it on the bookshelf and didn't read it. Looking at the resume and the title of the book, it made me feel like I was watching a Japanese comic. It was about the Shield Hero, so I had no desire to click in and read it. But when I saw that the author cut the book, I felt that it was a pity that all the hard work was wasted. I wrote down the reasons why I didn't read it for your reference.

I just found out that the author has published a new book, Chamber of Bones

If you give up this book, we will also give up on you. I have been putting it off for a long time. Isn't it considered that readers are looking forward to reading your book as soon as they come back? The update will stop at sixty or seventy chapters. It is too utilitarian. This is an online article. Everyone loves a certain genre so they gather around the same author. Goodbye, you can either finish writing, or you can change your waistcoat and wait for book friends to pick them out and whip them out.

Start a new book now! The most serious article on beast control. Don't write it like that beast-controlling ascension or something, that's too ridiculous.

There are a lot of Pokemon in the beast-taming novels, which are originally group portraits, but writing group portraits has the problem of multiplying them And now they are popular in white, lighthearted and funny novels or dark style The writing is too Japanese-style chuunibo, and the writing style makes me feel retro every time I read it Isn't it good to have a simple and brainless urban beast-taming, and then slowly expand the settings Every time I come up, the settings are so full that I can't watch it

However, if you, the author, really want to rewrite the setting of this book, you can take it off the shelf and open a new one.