Zhu Xian: Learn from Daying Xian and Rebuild the Trinity Sect

The writing is quite good, but the plot of the Yu Di section is too sloppy, and the sense of immersion is not as good as other chapters. Anyway, they are all on the shelves, and there will be more chapters a day.

The writing is quite good, but the more I watch the plot, the more awkward it becomes. I feel unspeakably uncomfortable. There is a strong suspicion of abuse of the protagonist. Everything about the protagonist seems to be unsatisfactory. It is far from the immortality of the left door leader of Trinity Gate.

Brothers, the last few chapters have seemed strange to me. He killed Qingyun so that his apprentice could kill him, but the tomb was destroyed just because Lu didn't care about it? I can't understand it a bit

I feel like the protagonist has skills but no morals and can't recognize himself! 😥 Doesn't look like a practicing person!

This is probably the book with the closest character creation to Zhu Xian's original work. I'll leave aside the character of the protagonist and talk about it later. Many people called Lu Xueqi a white-eyed wolf. That's how she was in the original work. She chooses her sect or her true love. Her choice is to protect the sect. But you can die for love, and the biggest problem in this book is that the pace is too steady, but the updates are too slow. The protagonist should not be on a personal path. Just like many people who play Guigu Bahuang, they like to fight all the way to the end and then post saying it is not fun, but In fact, after updating a few versions, there is a sect line. You can choose the dragon gun to start and get a bug... The article clearly mentions that the protagonist's bond is with the sect, not personal feelings. His goal in resurrecting his life is to revive the Trinity Sect, not to realize enlightenment. Dao Feisheng, Wu Zhongguang looks quite silly, but he dares to love and hate. I think it is qualified to create a full-bodied character without losing his intelligence. The logic is self-consistent, the combat power is reasonable, and the plot is reasonable. Then the main source of the problem is the slow update.

I would like to ask, what kind of combat power does the protagonist have now that can force the Ghost King to retreat with two charges? Is this reasonable? No matter how strong the third level of rebirth is, how many years has the protagonist cultivated and how many years has the ghost king cultivated?

I'm so sorry for my hemorrhoids😂😂😂

You created a character for the protagonist who is the best in the world, and even had an apprentice die. And then the family has a great business, and I have entered the older generation of outsider masters. But you told me that you kissed Lu Xueqi forcefully, and gave you a chance to talk to each other. Even before that, Qingyun's people broke the ashes of your apprentice's wife... That's awesome.

Is the author suffering from Wen Qing's illness again? New World Lu Xueqi still likes Zhang Xiaofan, can she find someone by herself?

The writing in the early stage was pretty good, and the protagonist looked like a Buddhist monk. However, the subsequent plot involving the big disciple was a bit outrageous, and it didn't have the same spiritual feeling as in the early stage. In addition to getting stronger, the rest is getting further and further away from Zuo Ruotong. Although some of the author's own original plots are far from the original style, they are still acceptable. It's a pity, but it's still worth seeing.

Damn it, I can't stand it. It's such a big deal. The mastermind behind the scenes didn't finish killing him, but committed suicide before he was about to kill him. If you don't give him a knife, stab him to death and then commit suicide, I won't say anything. The triple breakthrough is just one step away, and then I hold it back. It's too uncomfortable to watch. In my opinion, this plot is really not good.

I can no longer understand the meaning of some plots later on. It is both abrupt and unsmooth. It seems that it is trying to bring the plots together to the climax step by step. In fact, the plot is rough and deviates from the characters. It feels very disconnected from the first half of the book. It is not handled very well. I still enjoyed watching it very much. I hope the author can figure out the rationality of the plot and the direction of the plot.

Start with the eldest disciple. The combat power also increased instantly. It just feels abrupt. Then there's the character design. It feels like I'm desperately trying to lean towards Zuo Ruotong. Let yourself go when you put it on the shelves. Also, the name Daying Zhenren came out. Your background is Zhuxian. There is no reason for you to use this name so suddenly. In addition, my personal opinion is that according to Zhou Shengwang's temperament, the protagonist should not be able to learn Feng Hou. Not to mention that he has learned Feng Hou after transforming into a demon of freedom. How can he still show it in the interior scene? Don't be like those in the back of Wudang.

After reading so many chapters, I feel that the author wanted to write about the kind of open-minded chivalry, quick justice and revenge. He always said that he could handle it clearly, but in the end it became different and twisted.

The author uses less trendy words, drama, etc. This makes it less and less like a fairy tale.

Very disappointed to be honest. Apart from the popularity of the original work, there are no highlights.

Although many people in the comment area said that the rest of the series was terrible, I still didn't believe it. The result really hurt me. Starting from the protagonist Tateyamamon, the character design, plot and combat power collapsed into a mess.

As a Zhu Xian fan, the first 150 chapters are simply a masterpiece. The main problem with the follow-up is that it progresses too fast. However, many brothers say that it is because they feel that the characters who have foreshadowed a lot are suddenly gone, and it feels like nothing has been written In fact, Wu Zhongguang and Yan Hong are the ones who wake up. Wu Zhongguang's role as the protagonist's role is to help the protagonist break through the constraints that restrict him, and Yan Hong's child also reminds the protagonist to cherish the people in front of him and not be like his apprentice But why do I say that only the first 150 are masterpieces? Because some of the later chapters may have been affected by some comments, the progress was a bit too fast, and many things passed by like a running account. The disadvantage is that due to the lack of foreshadowing, many readers have a lot of misunderstandings about Xue Qi In fact, brothers might as well think about it carefully, isn't Xue Qi in the original work like this? The Righteousness of the World > The Rules of the Sect Master > One's own love. In the original novel, it is precisely because Lu Xueqi has her own persistence and thinking, and at the same time does not give up on Zhang Xiaofan, that she is the heroine who stands out among many male-video novels. She is not a vassal of the male protagonists in other novels, she is a heroine with her own independent personality and persistence. Isn't this the case with Lu Xueqi in this novel?

This book is so good This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him, but I prefer Zhuge Liang's 108 on Huaguo Mountain The monkey said, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are in place! (The above is purely for entertainment) I hope the author will update it more!

The plot is like this and you still want a monthly pass? I can accept being the protagonist of the mainland gang or not helping each other. I use the skills given by the protagonist to help the Qingyun Sect. The protagonist thinks it's quite normal. What's wrong, love brain? If there is no reversal later, give up.

It's fine in the front, but it's too bad after the middle period.

All I can say is that if it were written according to the momentum of the previous 90 chapters, it would definitely be a superior work. I feel very sorry. The emotional description of the protagonist and Xue Qi in the front is so delicate and profound, but the relationship between Jin Ping'er and Jin Ping'er later seems so deliberate and pale. Although the author forcibly promotes Jin Ping'er in order to open a harem, he spared no effort in describing Jin Ping'er and even described some erotic scenes. In fact, there is also this problem between the protagonist and his apprentice. The protagonist resisted and killed Yun Yilan and forced Daoxuan to death for his apprentice. However, when I read it, I did not feel that the relationship between master and apprentice was deep enough for the protagonist to do this for him. Instead, I felt that the protagonist was a bit extreme there. But I still thank the author. At least at the beginning, I was full of expectations, and there are many merits. I still recommend it.

The writing is okay, why don't you update it?

What kind of update efficiency is this? Is it going in?

Refinement

Is this the revised outline? Can you guarantee updates?