Major Crimes Sergeant

The protagonist has long known that there is a cult. When he went to the abandoned temple for the first time, he knew that it was an organized secret church. Does our country's law still have any tolerance for this kind of organization? Why didn't he contact his superiors to investigate at that time? The protagonist had to investigate by himself. Li Huoming was the same. He knew there was a problem, so why didn't he just detain it and investigate together? The problem in the abandoned temple was so big, why did the protagonist suddenly commit the crime? Individualism didn't wait for the troops to get in. Americans know how to call for reinforcements when encountering this kind of thing. Why didn't the protagonist call? The powder was found later. After the Southeast Asian killer was recruited, the protagonist didn't care at all. That kind of thing is at least a controlled substance. Even if it is not the suspect's hand, it may still be in the hand. Why not be fully prepared at this time? Don't call the special police and go there yourself. Why only There was an old police officer who led two fresh graduates and an intern to catch a suspect who might be possessing dangerous chemicals. The protagonist found a bunch of clues and did not share them. He did not mention this or that, and it was so mysterious that you thought you were making a movie. In the situation in our country, I heard that some religious leaders held secret gatherings, developed offline products, and even killed people involved in murder cases. How about a hundred and eighty people? It's weird to turn that place upside down. Even if the case is handled out of town, can one city bureau's criminal police team be able to handle such a big case? It can only be worthy of this case if it is jointly led by provincial departments or even the central government. Moreover, it involves foreign countries, and the killers are here. So why won't the national security get involved? This kind of serial murder case involving cults and foreign forces is at least a multi-city or even multi-province joint effort. If the publicity is done well, it will be a huge political achievement. The result If the protagonist doesn't seem to care much about it, only a few people are investigating. Even if there is a foreshadowing of the protagonist's previous captain's attack, this is a bit unjustifiable. Is this what the public security officers should do to conceal such a big thing in order to investigate the old captain's attack? This is what happened with the tattoo artist. Obviously, contact the superiors and send a few more people, or even call the grassroots police station to summon people or send someone to take a look. To find out what happened, we had to have three or four people dragging our feet and not having enough manpower to make people die at home. The clues were broken. The same happened to the driver. Even if there were not enough manpower, why not contact the local police station to send a few people? You would rather lead the intern yourself than let a few people from the brother unit come to help, right? I would say that the protagonist's personal heroism is too heavy. There is no communication with the brother unit in investigating the case. At the abandoned temple, that Li Huoming, the tattoo artist, and even the driver could have been avoided. No matter how tight the police force at the grassroots police station was, it would be no problem to have someone follow him. If there was one more person left in the abandoned temple, the clue would not be set on fire. Even if he called the local police or reported the situation, it would not be a problem. For the tattoo artist, why not contact the local police or ask the household registration police to check where the person lives? You have to let another person Did the suspect's son take someone there? The same goes for the driver. He would rather drive there for several hours than let the grassroots police station go and have a personal look or find a reason for the driver to take him back to the police station. Even if he said that he was from the police at the time, nothing would happen. Having said that, if an intern goes on a business trip with him and an accident happens, then it will just go away. If he is not punished, he must at least do a self-examination. In the end, he just let it go so easily? This is not a police officer, it's more like a Japanese detective. In the TV series, Mr. Di is known to bring guards when he goes out, and Li Yuanfang is the one who acts alone. Why do you keep investigating this by yourself? My personal combat ability is not good, and my reasoning is also very average. I have never committed a crime and I will not comment. What abilities does the protagonist have? The grassroots police can do the job, so why should the protagonist join the criminal police team of the city bureau? The clues are not shared, and the interpersonal relationship depends entirely on the veteran police. If the protagonist is a private detective, then there is nothing wrong with it, but the protagonist is a policeman, so why give up? The biggest reliance is on the national government and comrades' own investigation. Even if the author wants to create a lone hero character, it is not appropriate for you to choose this background. The lone hero must be an American policeman. The units are not affiliated with each other and even drag each other back. The case is mysterious and even a bit evil. Zhan not only has good reasoning, he can catch the suspect at the critical moment. Having said that, Although the American police have strong local protectionism, they are very protective of their shortcomings. The protagonist here doesn't even care about his comrades. He doesn't have all the equipment for field trips. He can't even equip everyone with a gas mask. He obviously wants to use spray but he doesn't want everyone to have one. Moreover, the intern fell. Why don't he care much at this time? Shouldn't we attack with thunder? Good American police officers can't learn from them, but they can't learn from them at all. Whose police officers go out in the field and let the interns rush to the front without equipped with equipment? Isn't this child's play? Having said that, if you don't consider that the protagonist is a policeman, this book is not bad, but it is a police novel. Even if the protagonist is a detective, it would make sense.

I would like to ask the author, is there anything unnatural in this book? Why do I suddenly feel a little bit like that when I look at it?

Why didn't I comment later? I saw the latest chapter and it has been revealed. There is no supernatural. It is all about controlling human nature. Although there are still some pitfalls to be filled in, it is still very interesting overall. The rhythm is tense and exciting 🤭🤭🤭

I'm curious about something here. I see that the author has published several physical books. Why did he start writing online articles? Aren't you afraid that you might become acclimatized? And does the author intend to write a web article with a more "web-text" content, form and style, or does he intend to maintain the original style?

The writing is really good. I stayed up late to read it. I used to be dismissive of this kind of criminal investigation novels. Today I still have nothing to do at work. I read novels. I originally wanted to find a suspenseful book. I found this one.

I hope it doesn't involve too much supernatural stuff.

Author, what are you doing because you can start a conversation for a long time just because a gangster says one sentence? It's just because you gave up after an hour and you start it again, the coherence of the story is gone.

The writing is good, but the progress is a bit slow. In today's impetuous and high-pressure society, I don't know how long the author can persist.

Good or not, good. Can I see it? Yes. However, it is not suitable for online writing platforms, alas. This platform has made me too impetuous. For a good criminal investigation article, I prefer to see printed text.

It looks good, but the case is so long that it will take a few days.

The story is good, but it's too long, and it's annoying to wait for updates. Then old man Li Huoming reminded me of Li Huowang 😭, which is a bit strange. A bit too long for a first case

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

From a normal detective to a bizarre one, the detective slowly revealed the truth behind the mysterious case, which made me feel like I did when I watched "True Detective."

It's so well written. It's hard to find such a compact and non-protracted criminal investigation article. As a result, only so many people read it. If I hadn't seen the book review recommendation, I wouldn't have paid attention at all. The author will continue to follow up with more updates.

Why do people who write this kind of criminal investigation police novels either deal with cults or MLMs? I feel like they can't write big cases without these two people. Can't they use small life cases to connect the main thread? It seems that they are from cults and MLMs. Isn't it clear that the national security should not take over this kind of large-scale cult? It is true that there are still dead soldiers in the organizational structure, and there are so many murders involved. This is enough to alarm the central government. Why should the protagonist hide it? Isn't it the best choice to report it directly and let the state machine start to crush the criminals? We don't talk about personal heroism. The most important thing is to eliminate the hidden cult.

I knew this was not a police story. How come people have traveled through time? Your police story can change bodies. Either you changed people midway or it was written by a robot. It is said that it is a cult and behaves like aliens. You can't pull this off in American police stories. Human beings generally cannot do this. Did you input the robot material wrongly?

The author writes about transporting corpses and putting them in clothes and washing machines? So the human body is not contagious?

Aren't the frontline officers of the Crime Unit qualified to use guns when on duty? Don't understand