Naruto: I Use My Daughter's Body to Conquer the Ninja World

Not a bad start. But starting from the chunin exams, the original plot was completely destroyed. Later, it even developed into Naruto's father losing his arm and Naruto's mother defecting. It feels like the author doesn't want too many characters to die, and then deliberately destroys the characters. But this takes away the fun of watching Naruto

I think this book is quite good. The beginning of the Kingdom of Rain is quite innovative, and the character creation is also very good. There are many small details. Although it is said to be a system plug-in, it is reasonable. After all, it is difficult to write without Naruto, and there are such The system can also avoid the late sharingan and wood escape formulas of most fans, and write unique features. It can switch smoothly between humor and seriousness; In terms of shortcomings, it seems that the description and shaping of the original plot are a bit in-depth? This is a bit redundant for readers who have read too much. After all, the original characters have a deep impression, and the combat power is also a bit difficult to balance. The protagonist's teammates feel that they will become invisible very quickly. Isn't this a waste of excellent shaping? In general, the flaws are not hidden. I think the data is also good. If the circle is broken, there must be all kinds of comments. I hope the author can stabilize his state and not be affected by his mentality. Finally, ask for a refinement 🙂🙂.

After reading about chapter 146, I was immediately confused. What I wrote earlier seemed pretty good. Although there are many small problems, such as the protagonist being too indecisive, it feels like he cannot survive without the system. For example, when you have just graduated and are on a mission, when you are escaping from a life-or-death crisis, you still dare to take an ordinary person who has no chakra connection with you, just because of compassion. It's a joke about my own life, but the situation I wrote at the time didn't seem too critical, so it doesn't really matter. I've seen too many selfish protagonists, and it's good to have a decent protagonist once in a while to change my appetite. As a result, it gradually collapsed. When I saw it now, I realized that this is not a typical way of writing female videos. There was too much emphasis on the emotional line, which resulted in the plot line being taken over and Hanzo was whitewashed as a master who was not good at words. Then, in order to let the Konoha female character with whom he has a good relationship go to the Land of Rain and fall in love with the protagonist, the author forcibly ruined the plot and wrote a line about the pharmacist Nono U, who couldn't get along with each other after meeting. After a few days, the relationship got better. Later, the plot of the wood escape experiment was forcibly arranged. The protagonist wanted to save the beauty and made a big fuss in the roots. Yes, the protagonist Amegakure genin made a big fuss in Konoha, and then nothing happened. In the end, he successfully rescued Nono U. Later, he could continue to take the chunin exam in Konoha and get the first place. In addition, in order to take Kushina away and forcibly arrange the plot, Mito suddenly felt guilty for Kushina and said that he wanted to let her "free", not the next Kyuubi Jinchuriki, and to appear reasonable, Mito could suddenly seal the Kyuubi outside the body, haha ​​😄, to say the least, in the environment of the ninja world, if a Uzumaki bloodline who is not even a Jonin is released from Konoha, isn't he waiting to be hunted down and turned into a replica of Susuka? So in the final analysis, the only choice is to follow Yuyin. What kind of freedom is this? You don't want to wait for Mu, you just want to release her to the enemy, right? Later, in order to avenge an ordinary person who had only met twice and had no chakra, he assassinated his allies in Konoha, and even though he could get rid of Minato, he suddenly comforted himself that maybe it would be better to keep his life, so he lost an arm. I can feel miserable for him. My wife has been bullied. You kill him yourself. I won't say anything. Typical female channel writing method, suppressing the plot line for the sake of emotional line. We can't make the plot so completely different that it has no logic, so we give up a little bit on the emotional line and a lot on the plot line. In the end, it looks very awkward. In addition, this is not original but a fan, which also leads to the collapse of the original characters. The paid chapters are meant to be tricked into killing, right?

Alien beast stories are all psychological birth Transformation stories are all psychological gynecology Harem stories are all psychological repression Single stories are all psychological eunuchs Danmei stories are all psychopaths Invincible stories are all psychological inferiority Suffering stories are all psychological masochism Group portrait stories are all psychological schizophrenia Behind-the-scenes stories are all psychological distortions ………… To summarize, if you have nothing to do, you don't read it yourself, and you put labels on others. Reading novels gives you a sense of superiority.

I originally thought it was a good read, but I'm scared by what you said. I hate changing to marry the most. Changing to marry is pure spirit and gay. Those who like changing to marry are either rotten girls, gays or drug girls Let's wait and see a few dozen chapters before reading.

The most classic of all, began to appear, describing the plot of a male pairing with a female protagonist who has a crush on or is attracted to the female protagonist. This kind of plot is enough. Some people say that a female protagonist is more attractive when a male partner likes her. In a story about a male protagonist, if the male protagonist is liked by his male counterpart, does it make the male protagonist more brave, strong, and handsome? No, I just feel sick. I didn't come here to see these plots, and the author said it yourself, there are no married people, only fragrant and soft beautiful girls. You don't say it clearly, I understand, I understand everything, but you dare not say it clearly, and you still engage in these plots, do you think you have too many readers?

To be honest, portraying Minato, a good old man in the wood industry, to death really doesn't match my perspective.

New readers can just refer to my picture. The picture the author chose does not match the description in the article at all, which affects the sense of substitution

Behind you, or under your feet. Beneath him... Ten thousand people beheaded the young girl? 🙂

The protagonist faints after the fight, which is classic and embarrassing. I remember that I used the bathrobe transformation spell to fight. If I faint, the transformation spell will be released, right? Became naked. The main character is so miserable.

Is the protagonist and Scorpion getting too close and will it lead to a remarriage if this continues?

It can be a change of marriage, a change of money, or a change of single. The premise is to give an accurate answer. If you have already denied it and still brush aside it from time to time, it can only be said that you are too eager to get traffic from three sides.

If you haven't watched the original Naruto movie, you can read on. Forget it if you have read the original Naruto work, there are too many flaws. After the three ninjas were defeated in the battle against Sansho Hanzo, Sansho Hanzo aloofly gave them the title of Sannin. Afterwards, the Sannin were defeated, and while resting in a cave, they met Yahiko and the other three wanderers who came over. Yahiko came forward and asked for food. After Jiraiya agreed, the three of them rushed up and took away the food from Jiraiya and Tsunade. They decided that the Sannin were good people and followed them out of the cave. Konan folded a paper flower with the oil paper wrapped in the food and gave it to Tsunade. Yahiko took the opportunity to ask Jiraiya and Tsunade to teach them ninjutsu, and Orochimaru said that he would kill them. This is the clear plot of the original work. I don't even know what the author is writing. First of all, I will write about Hanzo's request for peace with the Sannin. There is no butterfly effect intervention from the protagonist. Orochimaru talks more than Jiraiya. He is sarcastic towards Hanzo and appears to be reluctant to agree to Hanzo's request for peace. Later, it was written that the three ninjas were resting in a cave. One after another, Konoha ninjas came to join the three ninjas. Orochimaru also bossed around the root ninjas, being arrogant and talking more than Jiraiya. Let's write about the three Yahikos learning to refine chakra from a ninja named Yamanaka Taiga. Finally, it was written that when Tsunade saw the protagonist's red hair, her eyes were sharp and she was very excited about her identity as a Uzumaki clan member. I was really convinced. Tsunade didn't react at all when she saw Nagato's red hair. When she saw the protagonist's red hair, her eyes were sharp and she immediately asked if it was a whirlpool? ? ? Let me ask again, a large group of Konoha ninjas are looking for the Sannin to join together. Under such circumstances, how did Yahiko and the three wanderers get in front of the Sannin? ? ? In just 30 chapters, without the intervention of the butterfly effect of the protagonist, and the rare plot where the original characters appear, the characters of the original characters have collapsed. Has the author watched Naruto?

It's a bit like I've been paced, but it's okay. I'm just surprised that the emotional line of this male supporting character has developed too fast. I feel like there's no clue at all, so I just wrote it like this. It's a bit weird. Why do I like the protagonist? I haven't described this aspect before. Could it be that I missed it?

When Scorpio is nine years old, some people can see that changing marriage is really depressing.

The emotional development is too fast. The protagonist and the pharmacist only met for two chapters. The pharmacist has a liking for the protagonist. Part of the affection is because the protagonist is cute. The protagonist directly threatened her when they first met. Shouldn't this be a sign of vigilance and treating her as an enemy?

I really don't understand when I see the massacre of civilians in Iwagakure Village. If you want to say that the war between the two countries is going to all lengths, then it is also against Konoha. There is no war on the Earth Kingdom, it is just a preliminary espionage war. Just for the so-called cover of people who have only met once, massacre of dozens of civilians is normal for ordinary readers to not accept it. The main reason is that the protagonist is not an evil character. He is still a ten-year-old child. Killing enemies and killing civilians are two different concepts. Moreover, this is not an ordinary killing, but a large-scale disaster and massacre. Furthermore, the protagonist was probably at the chuunin level when he just graduated. He fought a few encounters, but actually didn't have much experience at all. Most of the experience was given by plug-ins, which led to too fast upgrades. With a bunch of bonuses, a ten-year-old child has already reached the elite Jonin level. This speed is really like Nazuo's age, and he is rushing to the Six Paths level.

The non-subscription chapters are pretty good, but once you get to the subscription chapters, the plot and the growth of the protagonist accelerate like crazy. I was still in the middle of the chuunin exam and tortured the children. I went back to the village and walked around for a while, and then I started to become a super shadow. As a result, super shadow had to fight Hanzo in a jounin promotion battle and lost to him (inexplicably) and kowtowed to Hanzo (Hanzo). The review is really average), and then there is the plot at the beginning of the Konoha part. The subversion logic is quite smooth, but it is also too poisonous. The summary is that none of the damn ones are dead (Hanzo, Danzo, etc.), And all the undead ones are gone (the main characters in the original version are either dead or OOC, or they were never born and had no chance to be born). It's better to go crazy at the beginning to explain what's going on. The ending was quite heartwarming and the plot accelerated and became crazy.

I read the introduction, read the testimonials, and read the reviews. Is it still possible to read this book if I like the idea of ​​becoming white?

It should be posted on a female channel. Okay, it's a new article, and when I looked at the comment area, this sentence didn't appear yet, so I'll do it first (dog head. Jpg)

Can the author work harder to finish this book? Give Suzune, Riko and the three little ones a he, I don't want to see them leaving any regrets! Hey, many of my favorite books have no endings, and I still feel sad when I see them 😢

It's almost over, don't run away

When will it be updated😭

Haha, it's really cool 🤭

Why did the update suddenly stop without saying a word?

Update, author! ! ! ! Give me an ending 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Come on, author, it's almost finished.

I don't want tj anymore, it can't be updated normally.