Hogwarts: from Wizard to God

The introduction is fascinating, but the main text gradually lowers the sense of expectation. At the beginning of the article, he was tortured by a werewolf. After finally opening the Ark of the Covenant, he was suppressed by Grindelwald and took away the scepter. The Bible has gone into my soul, and I am worried that there is something wrong with the fruit of wisdom that comes out of it. What's the use of having multiple talking cats if you give them to cats? A total of 1,000 gold galleons, it is too poisonous to have to spend 900 on a broom that is no longer used! I don't have an adult mindset. When I was assigned to Gryffindor, I often wrote about being moved by my friends. I was so moved! The protagonist is not a real child, and the reader is not 11 years old. Who can still play with children now? It feels weird if there is no resonance! If I go through the plot with the protagonist later on, I will feel sick after reading other fanfics and no longer want to read them.

It's bland and boring, the more I watch it, the less interested I am in watching it.

I have subscribed to many chapters. Tell me your personal opinion. I personally like the writing style of this book, but there are three problems. First of all, the golden finger the author gave to the protagonist is too big. The key point is that having such a cheat and being bullied will inevitably cause a psychological gap in the readers. But a certain bloodline next door has managed to achieve a sense of mystery. Where is the author? When readers see the protagonist, they will only think that Goldfinger is awesome. Secondly, the author did not achieve the ease after admission mentioned in the introduction. Yes, some parts are quite relaxing, but a horizontal comparison with peers will reveal that the author is indeed not as good as others in this regard. As a result, it looks very watery, the content is not substantial, and I write a lot. The result is not as easy as others who specialize in daily life, nor as compact as others who specialize in the sense of urgency, nor even the feeling of controlling the overall situation. Finally, the protagonist's life is too old. Most of the protagonist's dialogue is taken up by the professor. Even if the author writes about the protagonist playing chess with Ron, it would not be like this. Well, if this is the life the author longed for and wrote it, then I have nothing to say. To sum up, out of ten, I can only give this book 7 points.

The protagonist is from the perspective of the author. Some of his actions serve the plot and are logically certain. For example, feeding fruit to a cat. Someone else sponsored 1k and spent 900 to buy a Nimbus 2000. These are things that normal people would not do at first glance. For the sake of plot, the protagonist does not blink, but only glances at the fruit. There are legendary props, and they have religious mystical significance. There are 7 of them in total that are obviously either eaten or not eaten. If you test the poison on the cat, you can also test the poison on the reader. I can handle it in the first wave. But after the cat has obviously evolved, you consider whether to give it another one. It makes me happy. I may not be lucky enough to continue reading. Also, the total assets of 1k are sponsored by others. I think a normal person would not buy luxury things (Nimbus 2000 is quite luxurious, and it depreciates very quickly, it can depreciate by half in a year)

How come you, the reckless man from the Lion Court, fell in love with Solomon? Solomon's title as King of Wisdom means that he can go to the Eagle Court, Solomon's bloodline means that he can go to the Snake Court, his previous life as a Celestial means that he can go to the Badger Court, and having Su Hui as an adult means that he will not be unreasonable and will not be inexplicably impulsive. It can be seen that the protagonist will not be assigned to the Er Fool Lion Court, but will be assigned to the Lion Court to be a nanny. It is really amazing.

The writing is quite good. I hope the protagonist will be less distracted, and don't copy the original work in large sections (a common problem among fans, or a trap and shortcut). The number of words is too small. I'll give it a little rest before continuing. I hope the author doesn't mind haha. I'll give you a monthly pass~

Feed the fruit of wisdom to the cat, take a look at the legendary items and find a white mouse to use them In order to support Ron, I spent 1,000 gold (sponsored by others, not earned by myself) to buy a light wheel for 900. The first 16 chapters were okay, and 17 started to float. Why not buy a second-hand book instead (wait for help and let me tell you: the second-hand book has notes or the quality of the second-hand book is also good) (I can only say that wizards are all stupid🔥, good things are sold cheaply, and they are not as smart as the best ones) It can only be said to be abstract

Is that all you wrote? Forget it, you should go work part-time

There are indeed many beauties in Hogwoods, but they are not worthy of being wives to God. Letting them be maids is a great grace to them. After all, God can make them immortal~

I specially subscribed to one chapter and came to comment. It is poisonous. After reading the first five chapters, how can I say it, it is poisonous. Personally speaking, this poisonous point is quite fatal. I say goodbye. I hope the author's writing ideas will get better and better.

It's quite poisonous, and the protagonist perfectly embodies the author's abnormal way of thinking.

I was attracted by the title and introduction, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. I can only say that I had a big problem.

The introduction is very high-level, Seraph is involved, I thought it was God, but it turns out the main character is just a little Karami, we can withdraw.

Wise Solomon went to Gryffindor. You can't write a book without following the original work, right?

Why would you want to write the Hebrew Bible in this period to take advantage of the popularity of the Jews? 🤔 Writing it two years ago felt like nothing, but now that the Jews are new and writing this thing, it feels very unpleasant.

This book was unbearable after reading the first few chapters. It gave me a feeling of suppressing the mainstream or even abusing the mainstream. It restricted the protagonist through various seemingly reasonable methods. It has been popular for a few years, but I really can't stand it. Moreover, the first few chapters are a bit watery.

I just saw the part about opening Solomon's treasure. She took away your scepter. Why don't you kill her? How about having sex with her directly? When she wasn't paying attention, an Avatar slapped her in the face, then several Avatars whipped the corpse, then picked up the scepter and whipped the corpse severely, and finally burned it to ashes and threw it into the toilet.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist doesn't know anything. He meets a werewolf and Grindelwald, but he still survives. The savior has to rely on Dumbledore to cheat. Why does the protagonist have to cheat?

I divided the fruit into six, but it didn't suit me very well, so I left.

If you have any particularly cool magic spells that you would like to see, you can send them to me for inspiration 😌😌 A fierce black magic spell can also be used. The follow-up black magic is an important branch, and I will also write about it.

The progress of the plot is really messy, and I was forced to quit in three chapters 😒

To put it nicely, it's called caution, but to put it badly, it's called stupidity.

I think the author's writing is very good. Some people in the comment area are really fed up. They give up after reading a few chapters and want to express their own opinions. They pretend to be Shennong every day but actually don't know what kind of chaff they usually eat. If you are really unhappy in life, just vent it out in the comment section of the Internet.

Congratulations to send the author into the palace. The Qidian Eunuch Office has added a new member.

I feel a bit ugly after escaping from Hogwarts. Jump ahead and watch it...

Solomon's treasure was found about ten years ago. It was a glass bead in a cave.

There is indeed a reason for being scolded😒

My front feet are numb, and my back feet are gone.

Why has the update been so slow recently? You don't know how to be a eunuch, but I've already ordered them all!

To be honest, the original plot was not very well written, it was a bit too unrestrained and not sure of its grip. If this is your first time writing, you still have to stick to the original work. After you have your first try, you can add your own ideas later. The original is a bit poisonous