Douluo: Travel Through Huo Yuhao and Awaken the Jiu Sword Immortal

I hope the heroine will not accept Ma Xiaotao 🙂

Why are Yu Hao and Tian Meng's martial soul slots eaten by the author in all the books?😥

It's a bit of a downer, but it also swallows the settings. Tianmeng can definitely bring a martial soul to the protagonist, but the author ate it, and the soul skill also changed. Seeing that the protagonist goes to live outside and discovers that Wang Dong also goes to live outside, any normal person who knows what Tang San does will think that Tang San must be up to something, but the protagonist cannot think of it. Moreover, normal people know that the original plot should stay away from Shrek, but the protagonist still burrows into it. It feels like the author will not write it if he is divorced from the main plot, so he has to let the protagonist go through the plot, which leads to this kind of intellectually depressing behavior.

Yi Lao did not wake up and gave the protagonist the soul system. How did the protagonist absorb the Snow Emperor and get two red soul rings? Moreover, the red soul rings were one for each skill, which was a waste of soul ring space. Shouldn't a soul ring that is more than 100,000 years old have one ring and two skills? It's not a god-given soul ring. Sometimes authors who don't understand the settings write fan fiction, which is really annoying.

In Huo Yuhao's time travel, 8 out of 10 books will pretend to be shocked when they meet Tianmeng Iceworm. Are you pretending to be nm? Do Tianmeng Iceworm have any choices? You just look like the second uncle, and he has to sacrifice you. You have to put on the show of shock.

With such strength, why do you care about the protagonist group? Just bring in the harem group.

The plot is forced and the main character is like a loser. Ma Xiaotao's part is really disgusting. I can't defeat an evil soul master even if I hang up so much. I write all kinds of disgusting pretentious plots. There is no emotional drama in the emotional drama. I want the plot to be plotless. 💩

This protagonist. . . I can only say that it fits the Tang family continent very well.

He just joined Shrek as a second grader, and with the Soul Emperor cultivation level, he can kill the Soul Saint instantly. Now that you have joined Shrek, you have the strength and know the plot, do you have to kill and injure your teammates and classmates with the corpse explosion technique to be happy? .

There is a fee for 20 chapters, everyone understands

Another Shrek's dog, tied up and fighting for glory with his life. Then he was framed later and deserved it. This is what it should be.

Wouldn't Jiang Nannan accept it, wouldn't Wang Dong Xiaoxiao accept it, a single woman?

Little Huo Niang

Do Douluo people drink? Besides, the protagonist is so young, and the setting of the Wine Sword Immortal is very awkward.

The protagonist's first soul ring has simulated skills without changing the color of the soul ring. You must know that the more talents you can show, the better you can get resources.

How much did you copy? ? ? How much content from other fans has been spliced ​​into it? I believe that those who have read Juezi Fans will be able to tell that many plots, even the scene where Xing Luo eats hot pot and buys ingredients for Wang Yan in the semi-finals, feel like they were directly pasted in. Of course, if those other fanfics are also written by you, then treat me as fart.

This book is positioned as an invincible and enjoyable article, but I feel like the author is just trying to resist the effort, so it would be better not to write an enjoyable article at all.

The absolute strength of the Wine Swordsman in the Dionysus (Yin Yang Crown) plane is beyond the limit

If Awakening of the Evil Sword Immortal I might still watch it

Little Huo Niang