Douluo: Travel Through Huo Yuhao and Awaken the Jiu Sword Immortal

I'm really curious, where did your fanfic come from? With such a high rating, a Soul Breaker Competition occupies 2/5 of the chapter. The first part is like a coward. We read fanfics because the main text is a bit timid. We come to fanfics to find excitement. However, you keep holding it in and finally get to the end. You thought you were going to feel good, but you ended up with a sloppy ending. You are so interesting

The ending is too sloppy, and the final boss battle is not as interesting as the tutorial in the novice village. At first, when I saw Jiu Jian Xian, I was afraid of drinking there. I drank at all times, so I wrote about drinking. Fortunately, I didn't write like that. But it's a pity that I didn't see using soul bones to make wine or Gu Yuena to make wine.

Overall it's pretty good, but the leveling up is too fast. The Soul Master Competition is a bit stained, and the ending is too fast. I can't say it myself. Overall, it's pretty good.

The early stage is quite good, he can hide his clumsiness, the early stage is invincible and the writing is invincible, but the later stage ends too quickly, Yan Shaozhe, Lin Huiqun and Dai Hao's family were not tortured to death. Teacher Qian Duoduo, Teacher Moon, Teacher Electrolux, and Teacher Poison are all the same as the apprenticeship system.

The ending was so messed up, what a mess, Tang San was killed, and then he said that Tang San forced him to practice, and then he stole his brother's wife,

I feel like the writing is pretty good (≧∇≦*), which is considered good among Douer fanfictions.

The plot in the early stage is very interesting. In the middle stage, the plot of the Soul Master Competition is a little delayed but overall it is quite good. The later stage is also quite good. It just feels that the protagonist has just become invincible and has not exerted much power before it is over.

Not interesting

I think the writing is generally good, but I think Gu Yuena can be killed and soaked in wine (♡>𖥦<)/♥ or she can be loved very much

Aren't the 100,000-year-old soul rings two soul skills? Why does Xiaobai only have one?