Become a Lord as a Lizardman

I found that the author has a big problem. Most of the people who like to read the Warhammer novel are Warhammer Total War players. Those who play this type of game probably prefer farming. The author's last book was Nobuaki Pure War without Farming, which caused me to give up after reading it for a while. I guess there are many readers similar to me. This book is about lord farming, but the author has committed his old habit again. He uses a lot of space to describe the protagonist's shuttle to complete the mission + adventure, but farming and war content account for a very small amount. When I read it in the early stage, I can quickly skip it. When I caught up with the latest chapter, I saw that the chapter about shuttle mission is still being updated. I have written more than ten or twenty chapters for a small mission and haven't finished it. I don't know whether I should say that I'm lazy or something else? I don't even have the desire to click on it. I'm here to see lord farming + war (the label says lord farming), not to see you take risks. If you really like writing adventures so much, you don't have to worry about farming...

It's very important to catch up on reading every day. It's really important. If you don't catch up on reading, it means nothing. The starting point is here. Thank you all again. If you have any comments during the reading process, you can put them in the post and I will consider them comprehensively and make reference.

Some antiques from the 20th century are shown off, but they are still a fantasy world view, regardless of whether it is applicable... Compared with geography, kinship is much more important. The author understands Warhammer, but in other aspects, don't be half-settled.

I have opened a new book again, I thought who posted the post on the forum about lizard men 😰

At least 100 of the 200 chapters start with human political and ideological content, a bunch of boring content. I would rather read the textbook. . . The protagonist's style of field explosions no longer explodes troops. . . Wouldn't it be nice to do missions and farm explosive troops? . . Doesn't the engine smell good? . . What a nanny. . . The protagonist's grinding tasks are very lazy, with a bunch of three or four stars in the early stage, and then since the Chameleon was introduced, he has only completed low-level tasks. . .

I personally think the author's writing style is good, but the content is too dry, and a major event always ends quickly. In other words, maybe the author prefers the feeling of promoting history and doesn't want to write about those small details.

Guys, have you ever thought about what you want to write? I feel like the story is too confusing. Farming doesn't look like farming, lords don't look like lords, and behind the scenes don't look like behind the scenes. It looks like a complete anecdote with the same number of words. Come up with something.

I want to see the protagonist's progress in farming, construction and development, politics, economy, military, technology, population, etc., Instead of him running around everywhere.

In a world like the Chaos Demon Realm, it's really not good to take some real-world political theories and put them into novels. You might as well write an imaginary cyberpunk novel. Even if you write, you can describe the disputes at the meeting and the verbal battles between the characters, and directly apply the theory. It's better for me to read some novels, write down the process of technological inventions and creations intact, and reinvent the theoretical formulas. How does this help the novel? Just mention it once in a while, and you only need to mention some fork theory, mention geopolitics, mention something, etc. Rather than writing a long paragraph of repeated theorizing, these things are not only fashionable, but also dazzling. After all, I am here to read novels, not to read political books. Although reading political books is useless, that's it. I think readers still need more storylines, not theories.

You should write more about farming, instead of always focusing on everyone else. You should focus on the lizard theme, and don't always focus on the protagonist's strength.

I really don't understand the plot of the human world and the Oracle Revolution. On the one hand, they secretly support a human force and want to be the starting point, but they don't work hard on management. They start the Oracle Revolution, but the protagonist is just a spectator. In addition to making the human forces more chaotic, does continuous bloodletting have any positive effects? Without looking at the identity of the protagonist, I would have thought he was the Chosen One of Tzeentch

Is it a protagonist similar to Othiotan this time?

What I'm saying is that we are here to see the lizard people, not to see some behind-the-scenes drama. Spend more time on the lizard people.

In the mid-term, there are too many global perspectives. You can have a global perspective, but you should add some perspectives of the protagonist and other perspectives, such as civilians, nobles, the protagonist's subordinates, or even a chameleon perspective. Otherwise, it will feel like playing a strategy game. And the most criticized ones are repetition, preaching and private information. There can be several pictures with similar meanings, and they all contain various ideological and theoretical contents. Too much feels too preachy. The reading volume in the middle and later stages should be very average. For water, it is better to use repeated content or to use theoretical private goods. . . It is okay for the protagonist to use the Oracle to replace a little bit of the Chaos Cult ecology and expand its influence on mankind, but the theoretical thinking of Tiantian Water is not necessary, and there is no need to write about this water from a macro perspective. It even feels like the protagonist is acting like a human nanny. Most readers have already learned the relevant content, and there is really no need to read novels to learn it. . . . I feel like writing about this every day is not even as good as the assassination missions of several protagonists, or the protagonist's subordinates helping the protagonist to complete missions. I feel that the protagonist rarely participates in high-difficulty tasks later on, basically only a few times in the entire era. Obviously, the early development often has three or four stars. The speed of the engine in the back depends on it, so the protagonist always asks his subordinates to participate in low-difficulty tasks and does not participate in high-difficulty tasks. Instead of being a nanny for humans, it is better to participate in high-difficulty tasks or even medium-difficulty tasks to gain greater benefits. . . .

Although there have been hundreds of thousands of lizardmen so far, the profile descriptions are exactly the same as those of a thousand. You want to write about how others are shocked by the strength of your group of lizard people, or something. It is emphasized that the quantity is not enough, but objectively there must be positive feedback. These hundreds of thousands of lizardmen can't always be little Karami who are manipulated by others. Salvation is not enough, that is true. But now it feels like it's hard for anyone to beat. It's really a pure farming field. The strength that the farming stream loves most crushes so-and-so.

To be honest, I feel that if Warhammer didn't have a fixed audience, the author would really have no one to read it. The writing is indeed good, but it is too slow to gain popularity and is also slow to update. This was how it felt when I watched sailing before, without that fast-paced feeling.

Why can't the author just keep coding like a lizard for months 🙂

I really don't want the author to end here 😭 But if the results are really bad, there's nothing I can do about it. The author's writing skills, plot conception, and character creation are actually all online. This book is not popular because Warhammer, especially medieval Warhammer, is too niche. I have no relevant knowledge at all, not even Yun Zhui. I came across this book by chance and was attracted by the writing and plot, but the probability of this is indeed too small. The author may consider writing a more popular leading subject for his next book. Don't limit yourself. Your writing is indeed online. The audience for this book is indeed small, so the results are not particularly good.

I have already said that this book is not well written. The epic feeling of the previous book is completely gone. It is almost a running account. I am weighing the strong points and choosing the weak points.

The establishment of Near Water City is the turning point of this book. Before that, there were mission dungeons and some big battles, giving people a sense of steady development. What follows is the author's lengthy commentary from a God's perspective, with some of the main plot of farming mixed in with the many oracles disrupting the order camp and witnessing sessions. Even the missions are not written, and it completely becomes the author's emotional output Readers are here to see the development of the alien protagonist, not to see you output something that you pretend to understand.

There are very few books written about medieval Warhammer, and even less well-written ones can be read, not to mention the alien protagonists. The last one that was readable was Warhammer dwarves. I haven't read enough of this one, so don't be a eunuch. Supported by monthly pass

Now it seems that the first half of the article, except for the niche, the plot and writing can make gods

When will the author release a new book?

Why haven't the new books been released yet? 😭

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