The Sword Comes Out of Songshan

This book is considered a good source of food for martial arts readers.

The first few chapters completely ruined the protagonist's image. Let's just say that the protagonist and the original Faxiao met a tiger together, and were betrayed by Faxiao's misfortune. It is normal to kill someone because he is unable to do so, and it is not considered poisonous. But soon the two of them encounter a so-called "thousand-year Ganoderma lucidum" that can change their destiny. At this time, the protagonist's cool move comes. Let's kill Faxiao to monopolize Ganoderma lucidum. I'm not so cruel. Use the threat of force to dominate Ganoderma lucidum, you don't have the shame. Give up Ganoderma lucidum and give it to Faxiao, Holy Mother, I don't have the heart to do it. Go ahead and pick Ganoderma lucidum yourself, I don't have the courage. In the end, the protagonist was trapped in place by his incompetent and courageous nature, unable to move. Seeing that Fa Xiao, who did not know martial arts, mustered up the courage to climb up and pick Ganoderma lucidum, the protagonist's psychological activity at this time was "I hope Fa Xiao will slip and fall". In this way, he does not have to bear the psychological burden of killing people, and he can get a Ganoderma lucidum for free. Is this kind of protagonist worthy of hanging around in the "martial arts" world? Do you have a little bit of the courage of a warrior and the dash of a knight? A fly is like a dog and a dog is like a dog, and it is indifferent. I was so angry that I couldn't help but type a comment for a long time.

There is no need for the author to make the protagonist stupid and delay the chapters, which will make the impression worse. Let me analyze it for you. First, let's talk about a thoughtful person who gets the token and learns the martial arts swordsmanship. He can immediately think of a civet cat for a prince, and your protagonist needs help from all parties before he bites the bullet and pretends to be the prince. Secondly, as a serious sect, the Songshan sect is also large in scale. For the second-generation direct disciple, there is no high-level internal strength, and basic internal strength should be available. As a result, your protagonist really has no internal strength, and he has to go to rob the nun. It is too outrageous, and the plot is not good. That's how it happened Third, when a nun was found to be having an affair, the general gangster would have waited for the nun to finish, followed and arrested him, but the protagonist didn't do anything, waiting for the nun to get back safely. This was an even more obvious drag on the chapter, and even stupider than the previous two situations. Do you really need to treat your protagonist so badly?

The sword comes out of Huashan, the sword comes out of Hengshan, the sword comes out of Songshan, the Five Mountains Sword Sect is still two short

Come on, there are many high-quality fans of "The Swordsman", and most of them who write about Huashan are a little tired of it. The Hengshan School's "Sword Out of Hengshan" has been very popular recently. The author has written a new idea (upgraded version of Jianghu to ward off evil spirits, Yinpu Yangpu), and it is full of details. Many sword moves on the peaks of Hengshan and Songshan are original and can be used for reference. The characters in the original work are not subdued either, and the master of Zuo Sect has a heroic demeanor. There are very few that write about Taishan and Songshan sects, but there are female videos about Hengshan. I hope the author can come up with new ideas,

The protagonist is an idiot, even worse than an idiot. At least an idiot would not treat the cheap kid who had tricked him to death several times as his ancestor. This pig-like method of designing conflicts directly made Shen Nong vomit blood.

To join Songshan as a peripheral disciple, you need to have a clean family background, good martial arts skills, and a membership fee of one hundred taels of silver. The background of the times also said that ordinary people have to save for decades. I only saw this, and I don't know how the author got it right later. Come on.

This writing style is quite different from the one next door, Sword Out of Hengshan!

The handling of the relationship with the child is too poor. It is not like an adult. If you are a child in age, then your soul is that of a child.

I have been immersed in Internet articles for many years, and I have made some discoveries: those who use a lot of exclamation points, use punctuation marks indiscriminately, and most of them have a rustic atmosphere.

This kind of brain is still time-traveled. You are not doing it to make money, are you just disgusting? The beginning is like this: Brother, you are a master, how many brothers are you spoiling you? How can such a person live in the world of martial arts? What's even more disgusting than the Virgin is that the Virgin is not thorough enough. It disgusts me.

A little bit poisonous. If the protagonist's IQ is a little low, don't add the identity of a time traveler. How does the protagonist stay at the beginning? If he is a native and has never seen the world, you can still analyze it.

The author wrote a book about his poisonous points, which is awesome

I have always said that I am not a holy mother, but everything I do is.

The protagonist's IQ is not online and he always feels passive

Chapter 10 poisoned me to death. The character of the protagonist can't be a reflection of you in reality. I also criticized the protagonist's unnatural behavior when I read the book. Don't write a book and put yourself in it. Even if you are more hypocritical, you can create a more anthropomorphic protagonist.

Wang Tiandong cannot arouse my sympathy, so I will not subscribe.

It's too grinding. Let's just say it's watery. The author has something in it. But it's not watery. The story seems to be relatively ordinary. Wait for the author to write a few volumes in the online literary world and his writing becomes more sophisticated, and then read it again.

Is there a Shennong? I can't stand it after reading the first ten chapters.

To be honest, I really have no feelings for Wang Tiandong.

First-class, second-rate, and third-rate. The first-rate is divided into first, second, third, and fourth levels. It's too ridiculous. It's not a game, but it can be upgraded. In traditional martial arts novels, there is no unified standard for the classification of first-rate and second-rate. It is based on performance and reputation.

The three views of pig's feet should be those born in 10's. As long as you don't do it yourself, it's clean.

This is not even a poisonous word to describe it.

I have only read eleven chapters. This novel is really terrible. There is a reason why there are so few reviews!

Joining the Songshan sect and getting the Songshan sword technique can be regarded as a self-defense ability. I went to Fujian to get the evil-proof sword manual and sent it to Dongchang. Which factory boss doesn't need this kind of technique that can turn the entire eunuch system into martial arts masters? It's not greedy to have a hereditary imperial guard general banner.

Is the author ready to finish it? The protagonist is really difficult to create and has no charm. However, I personally think the plot is pretty good. I hope he can write more and not finish it too quickly.