After Practicing Pure Yang Wuji, I Realized That It Was a Strange World

Good-looking, good-looking, eye-catching

By relying on the vision of cultivation, one can make powerful Weird people unbearable. He himself is also very powerful, and can easily light a fire, but in the first few chapters, on the way down the mountain, he encountered a steep road and had to climb down. It felt like he was just a normal person with a strong body, and the performance of the dragon fish was just like some novels about me being just a farmer but a top boss in the world of immortality, which were distorted and exaggerated. Also, if your clothes get wet when it rains, you can't use steam to dry them. This is too inconsistent.

Rt, the so-called Taoist heart of the protagonist is too abrupt, and your foreshadowing is not enough. Just seeing a picture makes me want to die, as if I have entered the state of a sage. Your turning point is too stiff. I could hold back this kind of blunt turning point in high school. It is very unsmooth. This is the biggest poisonous point I have seen so far. Lastly, I would like to say: The above is just my personal opinion, you are the one who criticizes me.

In the first picture, when others come to offer incense and pray for blessings, you ask them what happened at home. 😥😥😥

Tai Chi. Isn't Tai Chi Yin and Yang? Why did Tai Chi become Pure Yang?

The writing is good, it would be better if it was less pretentious.

I thought I would travel around the world and write stories about those people, adding some pure fairy feeling. The result is no, there is no such grand narrative and epic feeling. Well, I can watch it, but it's a pity that it doesn't have that carefree, natural sense of immortality and a popular story. It's a pity that it didn't go that way. There seems to be a book called Lan Ke Qi Yuan. The front part is quite good, but the back part lacks the ambiguity and story. I can see it, but it's not interesting. It's a pity. It would be better if I didn't become a mountain god but traveled down the mountain.

Every two chapters, the protagonist's actions must bring some fun, even if it's one or two saucy words or counter-routines, no matter how simple happiness is. Any plot that is divorced from the joy of development, showing off in front of others, or pretending to be a slap in the face will become a piece of writing and become unhappy.

By Chapter 78, the style of the novel changed, and it didn't feel like it was written by one person. It was quite a strange novel. I'll leave it for now, it looks pretty good in front.

I'm almost going to be a eunuch. I can't understand what's written more and more.

The protagonist of this article is very happy when he handles weird things that others can't handle at the beginning. Xiao Xiao is weird, bold, and dares to resist. Unexpectedly, I know Pure Yang Wuji This technique is a bit difficult. Don't worry, let me watch for two more seconds. I don't underestimate the difficulty of the technique. Add one second. There can't be any more The part where the county magistrate's daughter discovers the talisman can also be added to the diary. On a certain day, I thought it was an ordinary day. In the next plot, developing the city and resisting foreign enemies are the main plot. Now there are two small questions What are the cool things about urban development? "Quiet" "There is no living creature within a thousand miles" The only living creatures left are the fish in the sea The grave is full of graveness The most shabby place in the whole mountain is the mountain temple What are the cool things about resisting foreign enemies? Learn from me? You can't stay here! Taunting me? You can't keep this kid! Have big ambitions? You can't keep this kid! Sleeping on fuel and tasting courage? This child must not be kept! Bottom line? This child must not be kept! Basically, it takes more than a month of preparation to write a book, including the establishment of the basic power system, the world background and the national economic system. Of course, the superstructure and economic foundation are not the focus as long as it is not a historical text. The key point is the outline and the detailed outline Basically, you need a flow chart of the plot direction and a large number of browsing novels of the same type. Take notes, circle the hot comments and various ideas, and then turn them into inspiration and use them in the novel. If you have an inspiration, just hit it in your head and write it down. After a month, your inspiration will basically be gone, and you will fall into a very painful state.

I'm a eunuch. I haven't followed you for so long and I won't explain why. My quality is extremely poor.

Is the author a eunuch? Should he still write? If you don't write it, explain it so I can take it off the shelves.

Don't want to write about it anymore. I'm tired of chasing.

The only weird novel with clear explanations. Different worlds have different laws, and the rules of non-interference are the weird logic that cannot be killed 😁😁

Shouldn't Weird be unkillable? Weirdness should have a certain entity that comes to reality as a medium, and there are fixed rules for choosing someone as an agent to kill people. When the agent gains Weird's power, it also helps Weird expand Weird's influence on reality. Weirdness becomes stronger and grows in the direction of absolute saints and wisdom.

Be patient and have your own ideas! ! Keep calm

It's so confusing. My language skills are poor. I can only jump through it, but I can't read it at all. It's not coherent at all.

There's a fairy spirit, and the atmosphere of another world is very good

I knew I would be a eunuch, but I didn't even dare to book it.

According to my previous reasoning, plus the emergence of the Danxia Sect, I have reason to suspect that the protagonist and the Danxia Sect actually have a romantic relationship. I once thought that the protagonist's Taoist temple was a Taoist temple built by a Taoist priest who was doing meritorious deeds in the secular world and had an occasional insight to prepare for a retreat and a breakthrough. Then he randomly accepted two Taoist boys to pass on a book of pure Yang skills and basic etiquette. However, except for accidents, the two Taoist boys were not taken away, and the Taoist temple was passed on to the protagonist. Then looking at the protagonist's Chunyang Kung Fu, I feel that although the level is not high, it is not one of the Tongzhuan Kung Fu commonly circulated in the world. In addition, the Danxia Sect also practices Pure Yang, so is it possible that the protagonist's Chunyang Kung Fu is the introductory Kung Fu of the Danxia Sect? The first-generation Taoist priest who built the protagonist's Taoist temple might have been an elder from the Danxia sect, so is it possible that the protagonist could be considered a Danxia sect in terms of identity?

Power outage? It's okay, it's free if there's lightning outside, update soon 🤓

In fact, even if The Supreme God is finished, it is worth a monthly ticket, and the follow-up is equivalent to another book.