
Just After Clearing the Ending of Demon Head, the Two Worlds Are Already Connected?
刚通关魔头结局,两界就互通了?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 226k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It is recommended to improve the IQ of the supporting characters to the level of normal people. Don't treat life as a game.
This whitewashing is not as powerful as making others think you are white.
They really have to forcefully clean up, bully their teachers and destroy their ancestors, slaughter their entire clan, and train others like dogs. The protagonist actually does these things. Do you think they might still like the protagonist? Why not go all the way to the dark side and have some new ideas?
You failed when you skipped the first heroine in your writing.
The opening chapter is well written, but the story of the first female protagonist is very important. It is either cool enough, evil enough, subversive enough, or upright. The current protagonist is written like a disgusting person who has committed a crime and is trying to cover up the truth. I am convinced One character is not written well and another one is found. The constant substitution of characters is really aesthetically tired.
The eunuch is really happy when it is released😆
The book is very interesting, but the gimmick of the book is the exchange between the protagonist and his previous girlfriend and the crematorium plot, but until now, only Luo Qingyi has exchanged one or two sentences. To be honest, it's a little bit like selling sheep's meat to others. I hope the author can add more of this kind of plot and don't always hold on to it. I've got goosebumps after reading these recent chapters. It's so pretentious.
Isn't it nice for the protagonist to go all the way to the dark side? Why should someone come and do meritorious service to the human race? Even so, what the protagonist does to the heroines is true. Author, unless you use your wisdom, how can the heroines give up killing the male protagonists? Don't let the male protagonist have difficulties and the female protagonists will forgive me. If that's the case, I will give up the book. Anyway, based on what the male protagonist has done, it is impossible for all the female protagonists to forgive the male protagonist in the end, at most some will forgive, and the rest will not kill the male protagonist because of the male protagonist's strength or because the male protagonist fights for the human race against all races. In short, it cannot be a happy ending for all heroines, unless the author has some wisdom.
Did the author die at the beginning of school?
In order to explain the good, the description is a bit far-fetched. Is there any difference between the behavior and the devil? You don't care about your deeds or your heart.
Bah, 🐶 eunuch, you made me waste my money and book it all.
I want to know what's so cool about it, why I feel nothing at all after reading so many chapters? I originally wanted to see the Shura Field, but what Shura Field? The female protagonists all want to kill the male protagonist, how can there be a Shura field?
It's boring. It's all about romantic stories. It's really meaningless. It's disgusting to use emotional lines to push the main plot. Even if it's really exposed, so what, not to mention it's just a game. It's draggy. The plot is really smelly and long. I could have killed it with one knife. If you have to go into a long chapter, you can develop honestly. If it doesn't work here, just change it. If you have to fight somewhere, return to the devil? I think it's a pig's head
There is no need to whitewash it. Both the protagonist and the person involved know that the protagonist is CS. It is better to directly implement the protagonist's monster character and the whole life. Anyway, the people who come in after reading your introduction basically want to see the whole life. The whitewashed plot is too template. Someone has already written it. Your heroine's character coincides with that one. Just write about the conflict between them wanting to kill the protagonist but not wanting to kill the protagonist, and then start a fight. In the end, either the protagonist gets up and kills them all or the protagonist is set on fire.
They were cut after a few pictures were put on the shelves.
Just keep it, there is nothing exciting so far, there is no selling point written in the introduction, what do you want to see, blood is flowing like a river. When I was writing that memoir, it was pretty good, so I'd better keep it for now.
The biggest problem for me is that the author is obviously writing about time travel, but the problem is that he seems to be writing about a game. Many of the other time-traveling characters described by the author act like they are playing games. They do not consider that except for the first time-traveling, they can only travel once in a 20-year life span, nor do they consider that they will travel in that identity after success.
No sense
I would rather kill the wrong person than let go. In this cultivation background, I suspect that this person is the protagonist. Even if there is only a little suspicion, I will kill the protagonist directly. They are all top monks. Isn't it easy to kill just anyone? How can I clean up this memoir? The heroines all know the inside story. Just to unlock things and then fly up to suppress everything? Why don't the heroines of top monks just kill the protagonist, a low-level monk?
Dude, have you written a female video? ? ? Do you still want to put it on the shelves? Want to make your first order? Still so cool? Still so brainless?