One Person: I've Already Tried to Fight Against the Heavenly Master Before the System Came

Pretentious and slap-in-the-face flow, nothing interesting. Bad review

The main character is said to be invincible every day, but after writing so much, there are no fighting scenes, and he hangs out with Quan Xing all day long. Even though the whole family is almost wiped out, he doesn't feel much enthusiasm. It's cool to watch someone like Zhang Zhiwei. . . That's it, G

It can be said that one person has such creativity, but relying on the system is a bit too much. He has been Long Aotian for decades, and the 100-year-old guy is proficient in various stunts. As a result, he cannot solve any of his own problems. He relies entirely on system recovery, and the invincible flow has to suppress combat power. The plot also relies entirely on the system to advance. I feel that there is still a problem with this setting.

It should be said that I jumped to read the latest chapter. I can only say that skipping does not affect reading at all. Generally speaking, it is an urban supernatural novel from 15 years ago that pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger. In terms of writing method and plot arrangement, it is to write a lot of the plot of the original book itself and add a sense of participation of the protagonist of the book, and then arrange a big enemy who is not mentioned in the early stage to dig a so-called big hole to promote the subsequent development of the protagonist's plot. But this so-called trap is nothing more than the collusion between the big boss in the original work and foreign forces After reading it, I felt like: Renaissance, I wonder what year it is today!

At the beginning, you also wrote about the behavior and thinking of a 130-year-old man. However, as soon as Chapter 6 passed to modern times, he immediately turned into a young boy. After living for 130 years, pigs will become more stable and mature. However, you ended up writing an 18-year-old fool.

You don't treat the company as a human being.

Evaluation: It has the feeling of being pretending to be a slap in the face since ancient times, and it feels like the return of the Dragon King. Put on a systematic skin, put on invincible makeup, come out and look like a joker.

Is it my imagination? Why does it smell like an urban domineering president?

Reading the introduction made me laugh. The first alien from a hundred years ago, his first task after his resurrection was to beat Zhang Chulan.

In a world of low martial arts under one person, Naruto was brutally killed as a chuunin

What? Western what? All I know is the western scaly rattlesnake

The idea is good, but it's a pity that the charge turned sour after just a few chapters.