I Became an Immortal by Farming in Ancient Times

It is very similar to "I Am an Immortal", but the protagonist is not as good-looking as the protagonist in "I Am an Immortal". The writing at the beginning is wonderful and very attractive, but the writing at the end makes me feel like I have returned to ten years ago (especially when I introduce the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist is using the script of the male protagonist of Diao Siwen), because there is a systematic original. Because, the protagonist's daily behavior is very abrupt (for example, cutting grass, etc., Disappearing with a wave of a sickle, falling into a cliché), and the pretense is a bit inexplicable, especially when the protagonist invites the old man in, he brings out a non-existent master (but this master is not very good) , the author should be writing in Dihua, but the author does not seem to have set an ultimate goal (for example, the protagonist of "I Am a Immortal", his ultimate goal is to return to the space station, so the plot revolves around this, whether it is repairing a power station or something), but the protagonist of this book does not have a final goal. The ultimate goal, or the goal set by the author, does not make people want to read it (it feels like it is all for completing the system task, which is not interesting at all). If the author wants to write this kind of article, group portraits are very necessary, so the protagonist does not need to have many roles, and the personality of the group portraits must be well established, which is still difficult to write. In fact, the writing style at the beginning is really good, leaning towards the ancient style, but the writing style at the end is very different from the previous one (too novice). If the author's writing style can maintain the level of writing at the beginning, then this book really has hope to become a hit. The protagonist should not be such a loser, be more upscale and cool, and there should be a way to pretend to be a ghost. One of the cool things is that you can write about the protagonist's gradual impact on the outside world. The pace should not be too fast, just take your time. The role of the system can gradually fade away. It's useless to talk too much. Come on, author, write a million words first! Monthly tickets are offered!

In fact, what I am looking for is strength, but in the end, you come up to recognize a senior brother and find someone to be your equal? Is that still the only way to do it? The whole place is shattered

I felt bored watching it. First of all, the protagonist is in an absolutely safe situation. In order to create conflicts, the protagonist is forced to disrupt the world. Others provide the protagonist with only materials. Later, he can practice martial arts to improve his physical fitness. In farming games, in the later stages, there is not so much material that the warehouse explodes.

There is no immortal flavor, only a forced flavor. It is said that I am the only one who can do it, but in fact this world is also a world of extraordinary martial arts. Let me say it again, there is only a forced flavor.

Author, you are wrong. The protagonist of your book is self-sufficient and has no needs from the outside world. Under such circumstances, why is the protagonist stirring up trouble outside? You also create a rebirth specifically for a woman. You really can write whatever you want.

Return to Junior Brother? Asking for trouble and lowering one's status

I suggest you check out I Am an Immortal, Only I Can Do It, written in a pretentious and slap-in-the-face style. No magic at all

Note that the most important thing about this kind of writing is box B. Second is safety. The highest state is to control everything

Why do you have to give to others when they come to ask for immortality? If you make a noise, you should be slapped to death.

Has the book been cut? The author has entered the palace?