You Don't Want to Be a Speed Passer or a Master of Martial Arts, but You Only Play Props Competition?

1. The protagonist's golden finger feels like Doraemon's various magical props. It has a lot of room for development and can be patched later. It is recommended that the author writes more about this aspect. There is no need to forcefully increase the protagonist's attribute values. The prop competition is more interesting 2. The author feels that he is indeed a newcomer. There are many pretense and face-slapping plots in the early stage. For old bookworms, it may be more discouraging. It is a simple emotional pull. Has the editor told you that you would rather be clichéd and make no mistakes than pursue innovation? 3. There are basically no scenes behind the two S-level villains who appear at the beginning, but they are unimportant characters at the beginning. I feel that the editor will not sign the contract. These two characters may be criticized by the author 4. The writing style is very relaxed and smooth to read. I haven't seen any highlights in the plot yet, but the foreshadowing of the cat lady is really okay 5. The time progress is a bit slow, and it feels like a lot of things happened in one day 6. There are many daily subplots, which lead to the main line, and at least the transition does not have a strong sense of tearing (every time I see these contents, I will suspect that the author is a father-in-law) 7. Now the main line has reached the first key turning point, I will add more after reading it. . .

Emmm, it feels like it's hard to get results. Although Goldfinger keeps mentioning it, most of the previous plots are emotional lines. But I think it's a success if I finish the first one. And I really like your Charlotte And the author, are you sure you didn't vote in the wrong category? This should be more suitable for light novels, right?

Foster fathers! Please collect and read it!

Let me add that there were some loopholes in the front, but they were all slowly patched up later. The overall conclusion is that old bookworms will not like it, and the content is rather picky for readers. Those who like to watch "Growing Up and Falling in Love" can give it a try. True comments, I hope the author will not delete them, I will follow them

It looks okay, but the protagonist is a bit annoyed by the Holy Body. Let's try something powerful. These minions are just as annoying as the miscellaneous soldiers encountered before fighting the boss. The main reason is that they are of no benefit. Generally, I just skip to see the result. After all, there is really nothing interesting to see. The protagonist has nothing in the early stage. If you can use some interesting props to defeat these miscellaneous soldiers, it will be somewhat interesting to watch, right? But having nothing is just like garbage time, which is really not interesting.

Su Qingyu

Judging from the character introduction, there should be multiple female protagonists, not just stock trading.

There are a lot of daily descriptions, but the main line can be drawn from these daily life, and it looks quite smooth. I doubt that I am a newbie.

If you have any questions about logic, you can ask here and we will answer them when you see them. Of course, I will cover my mouth if I see some comments that are deliberately looking for trouble or made without reading the previous text clearly. First reply to a few recent questions: 1. Why can characters view each other's panels? Answer: As stated in the first chapter, this is the world background where games and reality blend. Is it normal for you to be able to check other people's panel attributes when playing games? 2: Why does making props require no professional knowledge? A: Do you have to work in a factory for a few years to play games and make equipment? 3: Why does the protagonist's appearance change among other people after hiding his attribute values? Answer: What the protagonist hides is the attribute value of the second job, and the second job itself is a hidden job. After he chooses to hide it, this part of the attribute value will not be seen by others. By the way, the changes that this part of the attribute value brings to him will also be hidden, which can be understood as a drawback.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

What are you writing about the last few chapters?