Comprehensive Martial Arts: Starting with Li Mochou

Whether it is martial arts, fairy tales or fantasy, nature has always been superior to nurture, but you wrote that nurture is superior to nature. It is really an ancient and modern anecdote, I admire you.

There are more enemies than when playing Fairy Sword. Ordinary people without cheats don't even have time to shit, let alone practice martial arts. The character of the protagonist is not like a modern person, but more like Zhang Wuji.

This opening will dissuade 99% of readers. You are a fan, not original.

Is it Feng Qingyang again? If Feng Qingyang's feelings leave the protagonist, will he be unable to do anything else? Becoming mentally retarded?

Nowadays, when these authors write mixed martial arts, they rely entirely on sexual immorality. They insist on having Zhang Fei fuck Qin Qiong and Xia Ji babble. The son is in the same generation as his father and is facing off against his own ancestors. It's such a hodgepodge of characters that it makes your head hurt to read it.

After nature comes the day after tomorrow, that's bullshit

He holds Yun Zhonghe in his left hand and Yin Zhiping in his right hand 😁

I've read a little bit, but I don't seem to have read it. It's mainly because it's a bit confusing, or there's something wrong with the author's outline and major topic branches. I feel like there's no theme, so I just write whatever comes to mind. The second is that the branching plot characters cannot advance the plot at all. You are doing very poorly. In the first chapter or the golden three chapters, you should have the theme, and then start using branches to promote the plot and the protagonist to slowly move closer to the theme. In this process, it is eye-catching, and then slowly close the branches. It is necessary to close and fill the holes left by each branch, and finally reach the climax. It is necessary to close, fill the holes, and reach the theme. As for the ending, it can be happy or regretful or poignant. You must consider these before writing and then start to fill them in, instead of making people look confused like now.

Author, I have read dozens of chapters and there must be at least one main quest. There are too many people appearing in each chapter, but there is no corresponding plot advancement. The protagonist is a time traveler who should know about the Happy King, the Four Ambassadors of Wine, Sex, Wealth, and other relatively famous characters. It would be strange to know a relatively unpopular character like Master Gu Hong. I hope to launch the main mission as soon as possible. Like upgrading monsters, each branch mission will have a few martial arts characters, instead of forcibly adding a few martial arts characters in one chapter. The writing is more confusing. Come on.

Everyone who writes about mixed martial arts has a problem: the plot is confusing. I don't know what it means. It would be great to read only one of the ten books on mixed martial arts, but the writing of the others is not enough.

A mess and a waste of time! Novel written by AI

What a waste of time, messy stuff,

Already poisoned to death! This book is poisonous, go away!

The plot is too confusing and there are too many characters. As a time-traveler who has never read the original work, I should at least listen to the main characters of the plot. The result is the same as that of a native. The most important thing is that there is no main plot. I can't keep being hunted down like this until the end.

The constant pursuit makes me dizzy and dizzy! What a mess!

I finished reading it in one go, update soon 😰

Comprehensive martial arts can only be combined in one era. There are many dynasties, and there is no one who does not rush into the street.

Anyone who is tainted by the words Zongwu or Zhutian must be a spicy chicken novel.