My Weirdness Can Evolve Infinitely

The overall system and Golden Finger seem to be okay. The biggest problem at the moment is the plot. All the settings are not foreshadowed. The jump is too big and the feeling of fragmentation is too strong. Especially around the time when the sister is sent to the Martial Palace. As a turning point in the main plot, in order to add the concept of symbionts, a robbery was forcibly designed, but the expansion is weak. It jumps directly to the body being picked up. This book currently seems to be very likely to be bad. The logic is too poor. There is also a problem. The plot fluctuates several times. , I haven't seen a particularly ideal supporting role. The supporting role is just a tool. They basically don't appear except for giving things away. Most of the supporting roles can promote the plot, or promote logical self-consistency, or add new settings, using the heroine or brothers.

It's a bit messy. Author, please sort out the main plot. Don't write here and there. When it comes to school, just explain it honestly. Just explain the exercises separately. Just be ordinary. The grading of the exercises and the power of the exercises in the early stage are messy and confusing. Write less about the exercises. After all, the title of your book is weird.

Up to now, the plot looks like the Japanese manga Eclipse. What kind of weird level of weird weapons are the investigators? If there is nothing new, why not watch the anime 🤫

You were attracted by the title of the book, but you started to dominate the protagonist, and you were slapped in the face by the academy. Is it interesting?

The social background system is completely inexplicable, what SABCD

The setting of Goldfinger is quite interesting, the writing is good, and the reader is fluent. However, the protagonist's upgrade is a bit slow. Currently, you can only obtain potential points by killing people. It takes 20 genetic evolutions to upgrade to a martial artist, which is outrageous. My suggestion is to kill people directly. By the time someone reacts, they will be invincible.

There are big bosses who have recruited disciples, but they haven't arranged for them yet, and in the end they are all wanted. If you really do it, do the bosses have no brains? Can't even arrange for someone to receive your own apprentice?

I persisted until Chapter 31 and couldn't hold on any longer. Isn't this just forcibly abusing the master?

Hey, the author is really not suitable for writing books, why not move bricks?

It's hard to understand what the protagonist is thinking when the protagonist was fired earlier. . . Didn't you lose your own potential? It's a good thing that the opponent didn't use your time as collateral. . . Still complaining. . . I don't know what you think, but when I saw that, all my good impressions of the protagonist were ruined in my mind. Even though it wasn't there before, it still felt weird.

Brother, your studies are too messy. The settings are good, but the writing is too poor.