Darkest Dungeon: Hellfire

I think it's a bit distorted. You are a lord, you can't find someone for ten copper coins. Your time is dozens of times more valuable than ten copper coins, and you still help others find their daughter. You are a saint.

Halfway through, I couldn't help but say, the author should stop describing the appearance of the protagonist. He always uses the words handsome, young, handsome, especially beautiful. He uses them too much. Author, have you fallen in love with the protagonist? Stop it, stop it.

You have to be a lord to develop farming, and you also have to participate in battles, explore and push maps. How can you go to a town to recruit people and then become a detective and flush toilets for people? It's okay if you let Leonard do this. And the content of more than ten chapters is all about this. A new book of more than 100,000 words is the golden stage of vigorous development. You are doing multi-line operations with a hammer and a stick here and there, and the plot is particularly fragmented. How many subscriptions can you get after it is put on the shelves? For the lord article, you just need to recruit people. After recruiting two NPCs, come back quickly to clear monsters and farm. You can expand the world view and develop NPC feelings. You can write it while farming. Don't lose the big for the small; if it is a secret When written by a fan of Black Dungeon, the farming content needs to be compressed, and exploration and monster killing are the big ones. If you want to balance the two, then the content in other places must be streamlined and discarded. This is the detective content. Do you have any posts on these chapters? There must be trade-offs before the content is put on the shelf. You cannot have both. That is the right of a big player. I would say that the recruitment part is really a mess. The detective fight at the end is also smelly and long. The content of the four people fighting monsters in the early stage is not as long as the part where the detective fights monsters. Can your small mission boss be harder to fight than the big boss at the beginning?

Shennong is here, and my evaluation is quite satisfactory. Let's find faults first 1 First of all, your character design collapsed from the beginning. This is fan fiction. You stepped on the biggest red flag from the beginning. I don't know what to say. You didn't write the character of the fourth team correctly. Boss Lei was written as an ordinary wandering knight, and the second master was written as a mercenary who had to go out and work hard to save his wife. Please, they are not so weak, okay Hey, you haven't played Darkest Dungeon 2, you can watch the video Boss Lei is at least a legion commander. The soldiers of the warlord boss he fought were frightened and fled when they heard his name. At this point, he cannot be just an ordinary knight. As for the second master, he is also a strong man. He dares to hijack a convoy alone. As for the wife and children you mentioned, he doesn't have them. He really doesn't. Yes, the pendant around his neck belonged to the two people he accidentally shot and killed when he robbed a convoy alone. The double kill directly broke Disma's mentality, so he stopped doing his old job as a robber I really can't say that the character background of the fan novel has not been written well 2 The way you write is not good for the audience, secretly Dark Dungeon is written as a novel. The main content is exploration and grave digging. The other directions are only auxiliary. There are too many things about your territory. If you write ordinary lord stories, then don't get involved in Dark Dungeon. The plot of your lord is well written, much better than the main story. You can even write a separate book. But, this is Dark Dungeon, you are really inappropriate Then let's talk about it a bit The writing is good, really good... No more...

Speaking of the author, have you seen another Darkest Dungeon fan novel on the starting point called "Our Family Has Fallen". That one was pretty good. The fantasy realm and the background world of the game were well created, and the fighting scenes were also good. Author, do you think you can learn from some of its advantages? But, I feel like it's still limited to the game mechanism. If you can kill you with a single shot, why play with a sword? It's not a mechanical limitation. Every time I download a dungeon, I only take four people with me. I write more than 700 chapters and more than 2 million words. Only one year has passed in the novel?! But the development of the territory directly from a small fishing village to a marine city is a bit too fantastical. In short, I hope the author can write well, please give it a try 😁

The author is very talented in writing novels. Through the description of the environment and details, he has constructed a believable quasi-medieval world. Regardless of whether it is completely consistent with historical facts, it is enough to be able to build such a self-consistent worldview. It has a platinum investment and is very interesting to read.

The author was fired due to pressure, everyone should leave.

It won't end here 😥

The author died in the battle with his ancestor 😭

Didn't the author use the original game design but modified some of it? The nun's character is very different from the original game design. The plot of the plague has also been changed. To be honest, without these painful memories and experiences, can these two cute girls with modified experiences really be able to withstand the pressure of the adventure?