I! The Immortal Who Returned from the Immortal Martial World!

I just have a question: What is the concept of the third level of Qi training in Chapter 86! Do you still dare to read on? Bold prediction This speed will either be unfinished or the eunuch will have no other results With bold prediction The pressure from the front is so fierce, the mid-term upgrade will either be a rocket or the core will collapse!

The writing style and writing style are too novice, and the things written are the same as those that were played badly ten years ago. It is hard to imagine that this could be written by an author who has written millions of words.

The copy is suitable for fast pace and serves the world of cultivating immortals. The writing is so stinky and long that readers will only find it watery.

It's so long to write about a world of low martial arts, but it's too long and smelly to write about a world of high martial arts.

It's well written, and the writing style is really good. Originally, my cultivation was weak and my progress was slow, which was a poisonous point, but overall, it feels so good. My development in other worlds has not slowed down, and I'm getting stronger and stronger. Now I am worried about the heroine. Although there is no problem now, the author must pay attention to the readers' feedback on the heroine. Come on, author.

I bet 50,000 and 500,000 words that the protagonist is still in the Qi training period.

The old author, I don't need his original pen name, he seems to be a father-in-law who went out to buy things from the palace.

Nowadays, authors make the world in their books very dark. The reason is probably that the reality was so dark in the early days of the Industrial Revolution. But in reality, the Industrial Revolution made many farmers redundant and they were able to consume so much. And after a few decades, the population has basically been growing at a negative rate. In a feudal society, the population has been growing at a negative rate for thousands of years.

It's cool, but I have a suggestion. If some insignificant minor characters want to challenge the protagonist, you can let the subordinates do it. If you are raising money every day, you can't do everything by yourself.

There are too many hangups, one is immortality, two is invincibility, if you can't beat him, you will run to other worlds, the third is time is accelerated a hundred times, and the fourth is the richest, freeing up resources between different worlds. The fifth is to steal the world's wisdom. On Earth, every country you leave has a border inspection, which is expensive and time-consuming. The protagonist travels across planets/universes and can go wherever he wants and arrive instantly. . . . Opening a portal also requires energy and has a cooling time! Neither science nor magic, just a novice YY