Fellow Taoists, Please Respect Yourself

Hello, I would like to express some of my own simple opinions. I like reading your book very much, but I personally feel that your description of some big scenes, confrontations with great supernatural powers, and narration of major events are a little thin. For example, in the recently updated part of the siege of Lingshan, soldiers versus soldiers, generals versus generals, it is understandable to highlight the protagonist, but it lacks the shaping of some other characters. For example, you can appropriately describe the details of a battle between powerful human beings, the hearts of heavenly soldiers and generals, etc. Maybe the whole big scene showdown is more fleshed out. Are you still a little dissatisfied watching it now? Or is it anticlimactic? Of course it's just my personal opinion. For reference only.

If he is dead, why can the protagonist violate the precepts and not be punished by appearing as a saint in front of others and not kissing juniors? And signed a contract with the Six-hole Demon? It's really disturbing to watch

I was lured in by the introduction. Then the more I looked at it, the more something seemed wrong. Then I looked at the comments section. It is found that there is usually one less horse, and then many girls are stillborn. I can only say that Shinroku is a person who deceives people to kill people and kill their hearts. What a waste of my monthly passes and coins. Too angry. Complain about it

I think the author had better change the title of the book. Most of the people attracted by your book title are those who prefer to read about harems, but you don't write about harems, right?

The reincarnated Jade Emperor Jiang Lin and his little brother Ziwei who holds the red thread

Similar to the local forces and internal and external troubles that can be referenced in the background of Chinese mythology 😉 The White Lotus Sect, Wutong Shen, the great demon forces in Chuci's "The Soul Conjuring" and "The Great Move"... The ancestors and gods of local forces and ethnic minorities can be used as inspiration😊 Nomadic Immortal Barbarian God System. The evil forces of the White Lotus Cult 😄 The lich forces headed by the Wutong God😄 The Northeast Shaman Baojia Immortal Gods😊 The evil forces in Chuci's "The Soul Conjuring" and "The Great Move" The ancestors of our Chinese ethnic minorities Some of the Ancestral Gods and the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are related to each other (the ancestor god of the Shanha Gods is still the son-in-law of the Emperor Ku), and some are the extension of the local power of Heaven (Central) in the human world😎 Wu Nuo Gods Chong'en Saint Emperor's Tribe (Heavenly Power)

I beg you to read it, dear friends! ! !

Cut? Sure enough, it was really good. I saw that the book was covered with harem but didn't write about harem, so I knew that this book was going to be finished!

I've only read about 50 chapters, and I listened to books a lot of the time. I have to say that it's so poorly written. In fact, when it comes to the part about the princess, you really heard it and saw it, and you just shake it. The token is for you to see and play with. In this section, you were invited into the mansion and forced to leave. It's like 3-4 chapters. It's so stupid🤢

If you meet a female on the roadside, you have to have some connections, right?

My introduction is a scam, so I'd better wait for the new book. This book has been completely destroyed...

Is it a harem? If not, just give up

I just finished watching the plot of the Emperor, and my feeling is getting worse and worse. From the beginning, I was vomiting blood and jumping over levels to fight monsters, and then I couldn't beat the shakers. In the end, it was still like this. It was really boring to watch. A routine is bad from beginning to end. I thought I had to solve the problem myself to improve the protagonist's ability so suddenly, but in the end, I still couldn't beat him by vomiting blood. And fighting is no fun. Just chanting mantras feels dry. There is no feeling of fighting.

I also saw that poor people must be hateful. This sentence is pure fart! A fallacy uttered by some idiot, but it was regarded as the truth by a group of brainless people! The victims who were robbed of their belongings by robbers are all hateful, right? The dead killed by murderers are all hateful, right?

To be honest, the writing is too strong. It's too outrageous for a human being to take care of the battles in the sky. No matter how the sky fights or fights, the protagonist's current strength and power can't control it. It's no problem for you to kill the dragon mother. She colludes with evil spirits. Why do you use her to investigate the gods? As long as the plot is written with some daily emotional lines, it is better than playing dungeons all the time.

This book should be renamed The Unkillable Zhou Mei. How many times must Zhou Mei be beheaded before she can be killed? If you can't survive, don't force her to survive. If she continues to behead Zhou Mei, she will become the heroine.

"I can tell at a glance that you are not a human being! You are a daring evildoer with little skills, and you dare to do anything with an axe! The mighty heavenly dragon! The great magic spell! World Honored Ksitigarbha! Prajna Buddhas! Prajna Bama coax!" Jiang Lin held up a sword flower, made his hands into sword fingers, and pointed in front of a young man wearing overalls, with his hair parted in the middle, and holding a basketball. "Hey, what are you doing! Not a buddy! Why am I no longer a human being?" The young man rubbed his midsection, angrily, "Besides, do you really think I haven't seen it? You are a Taoist priest, why are you talking so much about Buddhist moves!" Jiang Lin was unmoved, raised his sword and stabbed. Seeing this, the young man's expression changed. He threw the basketball in his hand towards Jiang Lin, stepped back and started his hand, assuming a Kun Fist stance. Jiang Lin saw that the young man easily dodged his attack, his expression remained unchanged, and he raised his hand with his backhand, but he was also dodged. Jiang Lin had no choice but to return his sword to resist the young man's attack - when he raised his sword, the young man also made a Kun Fist stance. The young man protected the middle goal with his left hand, stretched out his right hand, and kept shaking in front of Jiang Lin, trying to interfere with Jiang Lin's sight. Seeing this, Jiang Lin had to pull away temporarily, but he did not dare to pull away too far. After all, the basketball had returned to the young man's side, and the young man's long-range attack methods Although the damage caused was average, it was enough to disturb Jiang Lin. Once the boy got close... When he was about to take the Tiangang Step, and was about to pull for a while, a strong melody sounded from somewhere behind the boy. Jiang Lin's face instantly became serious when he heard the melody. ""Kun is too beautiful"!" Jiang Lin subconsciously said the name of the track. This song is known as the repertoire of the Kun Sect. If performed by non-Kun Sect masters, it will only make it nondescript. Not only will it be difficult to enhance Kun Fist, but it will be interfered by the repertoire. But the young man in front of him was obviously a master of Kunmen. He was muttering words in his mouth, accompanied by the inexplicable accompanying music. The two complemented each other. The young man's body danced with the rhythm of the music, and the lyrics he read seemed to be some kind of spell. For a moment, Jiang Lin couldn't hear clearly. "No! Ha!" Jiang Lin shouted violently, trying to interfere with the young man, but it was too late. ——The young man did not use Kunquan in conjunction with the music, but relied on the music to perform trance. The young man's dancing posture was exactly the sacrificial posture passed down from the Kun Sect, and what the young man said was not the lyrics, but the sacrificial words used in the sacrifice. A shadow slowly emerged from behind the young man. It was a statue of an extremely majestic (hua) and stern (kun) god. "God Kun has arrived! Who are you?" Jiang Lin couldn't suppress the doubts in his heart and blurted out. "I will not change my name or surname. I am the chief of Kunmen who has been in office for two and a half years, Xu Kun! I like singing, dancing, rap, and basketball." The young man straightened his head, adjusted the straps of his overalls with both hands, and bowed. Xu Kun stood up and bowed to the statue behind him. After standing up again, Jiang Lin's words made Jiang Lin look gloomy, "Music! Kun, you are so beautiful, baby~Kun, you are so beautiful, Baby~Kun, you are so beautiful~oh~ Kun, you are so beautiful! Baby~ You walking towards me make me so ready to move I have never felt this way before Cause I got a crush on you who you You are mine, who am I yours One more look and you will explode Get closer, get closer and you will melt..." At first, Jiang Lin was able to parry Xu Kun's attack, but the bonus of the idol and Kun Qu to Kun Fist was too strong. Jiang Lin, who had difficulty getting out of the way, had to choose the best point to bear the force and hit Kun Shan's attack hard, and at the same time, he used the force to distance himself from Xu Kun. Seeing Jiang Lin being repulsed by his own Kunshan support, Xu Kun didn't stop and said, "Practice more, don't fight if you can't beat him!" This caused Jiang Lin's body to be activated by provocation, and he involuntarily chose to get closer. He was about to break free when his shoulders were held down by a pair of strong hands. A slightly older voice came from behind Jiang Lin. "Young man, stop until you click. Peace is the most important thing. Stop fighting!" Jiang Lin was shocked. There are many people who can break free from provocation, but there are not many people who can rely on strength to suppress the person being provoked. Who is this boss? He looked back and saw a middle-aged man wearing training clothes standing behind him with his hands behind his back. When Xu Kun saw the third party intervening, he temporarily stopped attacking and looked here not far away. "Young man, listen to my advice and give me some face. Let's stop here!" The middle-aged man said this slowly. Jiang Lin shook his head, "That's it? What about my losses? Old sir, I think you are also a practicing master, please don't interfere!" Seeing that Jiang Lin was unwilling to give up, the middle-aged man sighed, "That's all, let me try it with you, old man." For a time, the yellow sand rose and the beacon smoke filled the air. The outside world could not see the ending of the three people's fight, only a video of the middle-aged man was left: " "Hey... Hello friends, I am Ma Baoguo, the leader of the Hunyuan Xingyi Tai Chi Sect. Just now a friend asked me, what happened to Teacher Ma? I said what happened. Send me a few screenshots. I took a look, oh, it turned out to be Zuo Tian, there were two young men, one in his twenties and thirties, one a fairy and the other a master of the Kun sect. They said, oh... One of them said, please don't interfere, what's the loss for him. I said that's fine, I said you want to try with me, okay. ugh... As soon as I said that, he rushed over, very quickly. ! Then came a left kick, a right whip, and a left jab. After guarding, I put my right fist on the nose until the point was reached. I smiled and prepared to stop punching, because if I hit the point with this punch, he would have lost. His nose was covered, and he didn't hit him on the nose. He also admitted that I hit him on the face first. He didn't know that I hit him on the face first, ah! He suddenly attacked me with a left jab, ah. I was careless, and I didn't dodge. His left fist hit me, ah, my right eye, and I didn't have the guts. It doesn't matter, Ta also said in the screenshot. After more than two minutes, I shed tears and covered my eyes, and I said stop. Then two minutes later, uh, after more than two minutes, it was fine. I said, young man, you don't understand martial arts, you don't understand. He said: Teacher Ma, I'm sorry, I don't understand the rules, ah, he said he was beaten randomly. > He is not a casual fighter. He is very well-trained in Zhengdeng, Huitei and Kunshan. He later said that he has been practicing Kunquan for three or four years. It seems that these two young men have no morals and are here to cheat! Is this good? I advise this young man to think about it in the future. You must be so smart again! Ah! In martial arts, peace is the most important thing and martial ethics should be respected. {"TopicId":"1034764555052122112","The summer is long and I am playing abstractly"}

Where does the protagonist of Hunter actually think that monsters can legitimately take revenge, and that beasts are worthy of human life?

Don't you find it awkward to do deus ex machina every day? If it really doesn't work, can you just scare the emperor to death? He also said that Emperor Ziwei handles things on behalf of the Jade Emperor, and he didn't just shake people. He also used mechanical magic to move himself.

1. At present, it seems that Buddhism is one of the masterminds behind the scenes 2. The Great Heavenly Lord is being restrained by evil spirits from outside the territory. At present, it seems that Changsheng Gouchen is also resisting, and then Yang Jian is forced to stay in Lingxiao 3. Buddhism confuses the heaven and humans to provoke internal struggles in heaven and consume the strength of heaven 4. Imprisoning Jue, who is related to the Queen Mother of the West, makes the Kunlun line stand in line or unable to take action at will 5. Lay out the journey to the west and let the monkey change from a Taoist disciple to a Buddhist. At least for now, he will not take action at will in the dispute between Taoism and Buddhism 6. Ksitigarbha lays out the underworld and uses the hungry ghost path to contain Houtu 7. The human world is Ruyi and the heretics, and the layout is based on the previous emperor 8. The Taoist chess piece that breaks the game is the protagonist, let the protagonist do things to flip the table

So-so. The plot arrangement is far-fetched and cannot withstand scrutiny. It feels like a joke, as if it is a farce specially arranged to accelerate the growth of the protagonist.

It was quite interesting at first, but after a while I couldn't stand the feeling of being forced into a second-generation game. Every few chapters describe how various great gods admire the protagonist, and then the Riddler expresses how powerful the protagonist's background is. The other characters basically didn't leave a deep impression, so they were used and thrown away.

The early part was better than the previous one, but the middle part fell apart, and the ending was too sloppy.

My two major hobbies are Taoist mythology and harems. I came in after looking at the introduction, and then I looked at the comment section, and it seemed that it was not a harem. I was deceived. At this time, you thought I stopped reading. But it doesn't matter, because I found out that this is not a book about Taoist mythology, and then read 🙂

It keeps killing and killing without stopping. The plot design is too tight. Even if it is interspersed with a few scenes of daily life, it is tiring to watch. The emotional line is too abrupt and there is no foreshadowing. I can't understand what it means for a character with only a few lines in the plot to turn into his wife immediately after a few scenes.

Why did it go astray after raising it? It was so sudden, and there was no daily emotional line behind it😧

It was written too quickly and hastily, and some pitfalls were not added. I feel like there were many things that were not written and were simply deleted. The emotional scenes were also very far-fetched. The little dragon girl from Novice Village was also taken care of and will not appear in the follow-up. If I want to expand the content, I feel that there is still a lot of content to be written. After I came to Heaven in the middle of the book, I wrote it too quickly without settling in many details. The finale is a bit anticlimactic and unsatisfactory. Modern vocabulary explanations always appear at the end of the writing. I wonder if someone else wrote it.

If you win the prize, join the lottery group and write the group number on the post. If you don't contact me within half a month, I will treat it as giving up 😏😏

I thought it was a light-hearted harem story, but it turned out to be so professional and beautiful.

I came here to watch it after seeing someone recommend it on Longkong. Com. To be honest, I came across this book on Daily Poison Recommended before. When I saw the title, I didn't even click on it. The author's name is really useless... Put some thought into choosing a title for the book. I voted for the monthly vote, come on!