Battle Through the Heavens: I’m No Cao Thief

Damn it! Don't listen to this nonsense! Time to shut up! No wonder some other authors would send a girl to Xiao Yan, acting like a perfect nanny, without finding it disgusting.

I don't understand you. You mentioned earlier that it's normal to have many female leads in arranged marriages, but why introduce Yun Yun and Na Ran Yan Ran? They have no background whatsoever. Having too many female leads actually makes people dislike them. Or have you changed the cast or the writing style? 😐

Stop worrying about trivial matters. Just write according to your own ideas. If you're unsure, ask netizens for advice, just don't cause an uproar. Anyway, Xiao Yan is the protagonist; he'll definitely find other female companions when he goes out to have fun. Once you become powerful, you'll never lack women.

You're already writing fanfiction, and you still have to include some martial arts element; it's just a nonsensical, awful mess.

This so-called martial arts path is extinguished. The moment a person with the orthodox Qi cultivation system becomes an Emperor, all those related by blood ascend to heaven along with them. Can your so-called martial arts path, with its marrow refining and blood exchange, achieve that? If it can, then it's still the path of Qi cultivation, just a rebranded attempt at fame and fortune.

What I want to see is Emperor-Ranked Child Core, not Emperor-Ranked Child Core starting from scratch and leveling up by defeating monsters and showing off.

The writing is poor; it's flawed from the very beginning regarding the path of martial arts. The protagonist's ideas outweigh the realities of the situation. Even the process of learning by trial and error requires a margin for error, and the protagonist simply lacks the ability and resources to do so. Even if he refined the entire Dou Qi Continent, he wouldn't have the resources.

What I want to see is a semi-emperor rebuilding his power and rising to power as quickly as possible, like Xiao Xuan who became a Dou Zhe at age 6, a Dou Ling at age 10, a Dou Zun at age 15, and a Dou Sheng at age 20. In battles, he should defeat the strong with the weak and end the fight with overwhelming force, then return to the semi-emperor realm to find another way to become an emperor.

You're writing fanfiction and you're suppressing the level? Can't you just honestly absorb the battle qi? The author keeps insisting that there's no suppression, but don't we readers know whether there is or not?

When writing Doupo fanfiction, stop with all that talk about physical bodies and combat power. Just focus on levels. In the original novel, Xiao Yan was constantly leveling up. After all, the core of Dou Qi Continent is cultivating Dou Qi to the level of Dou Di, not your physical Dou Di cultivation.