Breaking Through the Limits Starting with Archery

Tsk, the crisis has arrived. This kind of desperate attempt to survive is a bit unbearable.

The character of the protagonist is set, and I really have no desire to read on. The author is really verbose, summarizing it in a few sentences, and explaining it all the time. The plug-in is added to the account, and some improvements are added. If the protagonist adds some archery skills, then he cannot develop into hunting. I have written a few articles and am still grinding. Be more agile and firm.

The update is a bit slow, can't it be updated faster? If this keeps up, no matter how good your writing is, no one will read it!

It looks great, I love reading it, please update more often!

The starting point routine, survival in a desperate situation, the whole family worshiping the heaven, and the golden finger arrives.

It's okay. Is your update like this? You can update one chapter during the day, around noon, and then update one chapter around eight o'clock in the evening. Personally, I think it would be better to update separately.

Overall, it's good, food and grass, right?

So-so. The advantage is that the level is struggling, but there are many great masters at the starting point, and those who are not picky can take a bite of food and grass. The lightning points are not explosive, but they are very intelligent and can barely be explained. The writing style is also mediocre. There is no simplistic writing, but it is not distinctive, stunning or culturally appealing. It doesn't feel exciting at all. The protagonist's personality is just normal, but the novel's protagonist is finished if he has no characteristics. Looking at it from the point of borrowing money, others can understand it even if they don't borrow the protagonist, but what you wrote is very bland, at least it seemed bland to me. Maybe it will be better later, right? But now I really feel nothing. It is a mediocre book that I don't want to read if I add a bookshelf, but if I don't add a bookshelf, I feel that the book actually has some highlights. The introduction also has no sense of culture. For this type of book, the introduction looks tall and cool at first glance, and the first impression is very good. There are also parents. They all talk about Qidian Orphanage. Is it because they don't want to write about parents? It's difficult for parents to handle. You have written everything, and you have memories of it. You are really a parent, but you have not killed all the people you killed. At least write that you first try to upgrade and gain points and then try to kill the other party in the past few days, otherwise it will be over once you come out. At this time, you did not mention your parents at all, only about yourself. You are still a handyman, and you are not sure whether the academy will protect you. Qinglonghui also mentioned that the academy is not very clean, so how do you get the confidence that the academy will protect you? Why do you believe so much. At least you can pave the way by hearing from hearsay that there is a person in the academy who values ​​talents and has a high status. It's not a problem that you didn't mention it, but the protagonist deliberately asked his parents to appear before entering the mountain. He can't really be a money-giver. These are minor issues, not really explosive, but they feel like a waste of time. It seems that he is a new author. Except for the reincarnated Lao Deng, the standard of new authors is normal.

It's too watery and too wordy. I have to jump to read it, but I can't listen to it.

Why do so many novels contain a lot of negative energy at the beginning of their first chapters? To make people empathize? Disgusting to watch.

Weak, pitiful and helpless, just going back and forth like this

It's okay, but it's a little wordy and I have to jump to read it.

I don't know how to write to AI, and what I write is a piece of shit.