I Set Off a Mythical Resurgence in Tokyo

It is recommended to hide in China directly. No matter how you write this, it is wrong, and there is a high possibility of being blocked.

Before the Eight-foot Bird didn't reveal his identity, those extraordinary beings forced Lai Lai to do nothing. If his identity was superficial, and the Fengcheng hero still dared to force Lai Lai to do it, then it was because the mythical character was not qualified enough! Author, do you know what the power of God is like prison? There are also characters in Greek mythology who are more willful and, to put it more seriously, petty. Once angry, a city will be destroyed. For details, please see the Trojan War.

Behind-the-scenes writing is very taboo about losing control. In the end, the protagonist cut off his waistcoat and got out of control. It really made me feel stupid. He suffered the consequences and created a lot of opponents for himself.

Don't write Thurse as the main content, it's best to just use it as an embellishment when the protagonist's incarnation ends. For a behind-the-scenes scene like this, it is recommended to describe more supporting characters and write group portraits, so as to facilitate subsequent development. Finally, for the abilities of various supporting characters, you can actually refer to NetEase's Onmyoji mobile game. The monsters in it have different abilities and are also Japanese legends.

I know you like Napoleon, but please restrain yourself, your protagonist is not Napoleon. As a behind-the-scenes group portrait article, the length of the war you are writing is already very cumbersome. The protagonist does not do anything, and the plot keeps filling in for Napoleon. The look and feel is really bad. If there is no change, I will have to wait for you to finish writing this paragraph so that I can skip it directly.

The protagonist, the cause of all effects, is really unqualified. All the clones he creates have become his own opponents, a bit like Brahma in Indian mythology. As the god of creation, he has been ignored by the god of protection and destruction. He has no sense of existence in Indian mythology. He has been watching Vishnu and Shiva perform from the side. In the end, he even lost his status as the god of creation. Will the protagonist still have to sacrifice to heaven in the later stage? Was the World Tree snatched away by the gods and then suppressed? Are you behind the scenes? Is it a shame?

The protagonists in the recent films have become increasingly weak, and the masterminds behind the scenes have lost all their strength. I have never seen anyone "match wits and courage" with a puppet that I created, and in the end, I was able to get along with it.

The writing is getting more and more out of touch with the topic. I see that now it has changed directly from behind-the-scenes writing to ordinary spiritual energy recovery writing. This is the only person behind the scenes who is so low 😅. When the protagonist cuts off part of the character's soul and goes out, he should actually completely defeat those gods who believe in him. The plot can still be rounded out, but he still refuses to learn the lesson and still plays house with them. He is simply an old general on the stage with flags on his back.

The rest of the book doesn't feel like a book at all, and the protagonist's actions make the protagonist feel stupid.

The author is screening readers. If you can accompany the author to enjoy yourself without thinking, then continue...

My personal opinion is that your layout is too big. A Saint Seiya game might as well be a game about the Seven Demon Kings, Jesus Christ, and the Crusades. Moreover, Napoleon's character design is very unpleasant. How long has it been since your protagonist came out? Do you want to replace Napoleon as the protagonist?

It's getting worse and worse, and it's completely out of touch with the background. Comparing it with the previous one, it can be said that it is not the same one. It feels like it was written by a different author. I abandoned it.

Joan of Arc's mini-universe pig's foot just got a clone, but turned around and made a bunch of incense gods. Does the protagonist want to concentrate on being Zeus? If there are a bunch of gods, the protagonist destroys the other clones and becomes the sole master, and there is a Quetzalcoatl in the harem who has a deep hatred for the master 🤫

Can you change it? The three women were exposed at the beginning, but they were said to be closed later. Is it difficult to change it to less than a thousand words? Or do you have a cuckold fetish?

I really don't understand the use of writing about the Soviet Union. Do you really think that the Soviet Union is great? ? ?

The front is still normal, but the back is flying straight away. The original intention was to collect souls to upgrade the sacred tree, but after the three women came out, they directly deviated from the theme.

Doesn't the author feel that the front and the back are two books? It all turned into a Greek mythology story, and there was no trace of the behind-the-scenes story. It's not surprising that readers have finished running

Self-advocacy writing is not a problem, you can read it for fun to pass the time, but the writing is terrible. The first 10 chapters can be read as a self-titled article. Chapters 10-20 are very messy. It's tiring to watch, and the author's descriptive skills are quite poor.

The plot description is too crude, the dialogue is too little, the pace is too fast, and many scenes are very abrupt and distorted. The author must be a novice. Example: In Chapter 2, you didn't point out that the sound came from the drone, but I thought the person who spoke was there. In the first chapter, the police officer saw the video and believed it without questioning it, which was very distorted. The CIA's appearance so soon is also very distorted. Yamada Ghost did such a big thing as breaking into the embassy casually? All the details have not been polished.

The protagonist is a Teddy, probably the breed is Zeus

Write less fighting scenes and more behind-the-scenes stuff.

I wonder if the author can write such a crude article! Monthly tickets given