Be the Mastermind Behind Tokyo Rebirth

I don't want to say much else, but I really can't understand why the three cat-eye sisters are given to dogs to play with. Could it be that this dog is the incarnation of the author?

Directly isolating the protagonist from reality is indeed a good way to solve the protagonist's overly strong sense of participation. But apart from Noguchi, who is a pure fool, the role of the wife of the police chief is poorly portrayed. He is arrogant, but he was tricked into apologizing by some of his subordinates whom he met for the first time. . This is really too OOC.

When I saw the second picture, I felt a little weird. Is this gangster so awesome? The special forces with guns may not be that awesome, right? You're not surprised at all when you see a monster, why don't you just go for it?

The author's pen name is really correct. Normal people can't appreciate the author's logical thinking at all. There are reasons for poor grades. Others are poisonous in some places. What this author writes is worth reading for the poisonous points.

Did the author wipe it out after going to the toilet?

The ideas are clear and the plot is well written, but the characters are a bit disgusting. The description of the characters in the plot, whether they are evil or good, makes people uncomfortable. I have to wait for a while before reading the book, and I have to wait for a while after reading some books, otherwise I will vomit!

What should I say? The previous book had countless women as the protagonists, but this one has become a eunuch? It doesn't feel interesting

I can read this book. Why is there no one?

It's okay, I don't see any flaws, and the antagonism has been stirred up, just waiting for a big fight.

The writing is quite good, especially the protagonist's pretentious style is not stiff at all, which is really good. Some of the more popular behind-the-scenes articles are either too low-key, or have one image from beginning to end, with a gorgeous mask on their face that they just created, and they want to wear it for a lifetime, just to create group portraits. The other essence of the behind-the-scenes has been forgotten, which is really a pity. Every time I see so many monthly tickets, I have to fight with my own desires. I won't say the name, so as not to offend. But the similarities and differences between this book and the others are the same. They all focus on one end, but the other end is not so detailed. What makes this book better than other novels in my mind is that it handles the protagonist, background, character, and the world view that the protagonist wants to create for the outside world. It is very enjoyable to read; But at the same time, the point that is inferior to other novels is that the group portraits are not so in place: wolf, fire phoenix, and blood. Of the three that have appeared so far, the wolf can be said to be the most well-described. Although there are a few minor flaws, some people may say that he is reckless, say that he has no brains, say that he is too open-minded, or even ask how he is so smart. However, so far, the characters can stand up. The character Huofeng is very problematic. When he first appeared, the author gave us an image of a dean who cares about family, values family ties, has certain medical ethics, and is a good person who also has a certain respect for life. It didn't take long for him to become unkind, cold-blooded, and suddenly It exposes her image as being smart but without any plan (because the protagonist sees it and knows it in her heart, so it is not a poisonous point); in the end, she is written into a selfish and stupid character in the lowest-grade novel. It is foreseeable that this character has no future. I am used to the choice of characters, and discard them when necessary. What I am not used to is the inclination and tearing of the characters. In the latest chapter written so far, I have not seen any changes in Huofeng that are really derived from the character itself (Wolf is very good at writing this). Instead, I only see various labels imposed on her by the author in order to advance the plot (I am not saying that this character is not all written well, I only refer to the dissonance I felt during the reading process, such as thinking about negotiating everything, which fits the image). It's true that when writing a novel, after writing a character, you can't help but put a lot of thoughts on this character, but this really stands out. In addition, some details are actually innocuous. For example, the characters appear very abruptly, but the old bookworm still has some reading ability, although it is a bit tiring to watch. There are also some plots that really lack foreshadowing, but fortunately the author didn't write too much about these plots, so it just looked a bit stiff. It is obvious that in the content so far, the author used the most ink on the fire phoenix in the later period, and relatively speaking, there was some blank space on the blood and wolf. Is it because of this that the role of the wolf did not have any major problems, but the fire phoenix seemed to use too much force. I haven't read the author's previous works, so I don't know. I'm waiting for the following chapters. Generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and the responses of all forces are reasonable and there are no logical flaws (Shuang Wen's perspective). The idiocy and differences in character setting are also noticed by the author. It can also be seen that the author of the outline has written it very well, and all the content is closely connected around the outline. The so-called success is also Xiao He, failure is also Xiao He. The successful description of the character of the wolf lies in this. As a character with a sense of belief, the motivation and development are very reasonable and stable, which is inseparable from The author insists on and improves the outline; as for the character description of Huofeng, I think there are failures. Because of this, the outline is still an outline. For future development, the initial setting may not be satisfactory, so that the author has to fine-tune the details of the character. I hope the author can write better and better. There are really too few behind-the-scenes extraordinary flows that suit my personal taste.

Watch more Japanese comics. Your wording is a bit lacking.

To be honest, you have almost become an immortal in cultivation. There is a small crack in the trapped space. Why don't you just throw a gadget to those little people and ghost guys? Kangkang. What is a big boss?

To be honest, I don't feel good at writing original skills behind the scenes.

It was said earlier that these elixirs are meant to absorb people's emotional growth, and now they are said to be absorbing spiritual energy to grow... Why did they do it earlier (눈_눈)? Just get some qualified living dead and throw them into the cave to grow endlessly. The previous series of actions completely eliminated them and turned them into clowns. However, if the growth of combat power is not the growth of elixir, or the two need to complement each other, then it is acceptable. I hope the author can give a reasonable explanation.

The author's writing style is not good, and each book is not as good as the previous one. At least the plot in the first book is okay, but the middle part is a mess, which is extremely ugly. As for this book, there is nothing that attracts people. The early stage is bland and unsightly, and there is no desire for people to read it.

Aren't those guys who can use knives to perform extraordinary things one by one against the rubbish medicinal materials that have not grown up in the author? Don't tell me that you haven't inherited any of them! Sword skills that are almost subsonic, flame sword skills that are almost extraordinary due to chemistry, sword skills that create illusion effects with physical mirrors and light reflections, sword skills that can cut 9 swords in less than 1 second or even 0.1 Seconds and cut a rift in space...

Light gives peoplekind superpowers. Is it possible to give animals superpowers?

I can't stand it anymore by Chapter 50. When will this stupid woman die?

This author has never written about Liu Bei before, right? It feels much better than what others have written.

Liu Beiwen's writing style does not accept women yet, and the more he writes, the worse he gets.

There are three cat-eye sisters. Let's name Currie's beauties.