He Traveled Through Time and Became a Villain, so He Tried to Transform the Brave Man

I've only seen Chapter 50, the classic protagonist Asashi Nikgaru, the plot is pretty straightforward and there's nothing serious about it. The problem is that the protagonist basically has nothing to praise and enjoy, and feels more like a tool for the heroine's evolution. . . . There are also situations where various associations have to pay membership fees like crazy. . . The world has not yet perished? The part about the president of the Alchemy Association is even weirder. Did the Alchemy Association starve to death? So is it really so easy for a profitable industry to die? With this talent-hungry industry coupled with monopolistic supply, will it really be impossible to make ends meet? It would be better if the protagonist could take a break from time to time. After all, auxiliaries also have auxiliary writing methods, instead of being beaten and scolded every day (tears) Protagonist: I have traveled through time, and I have Goldfinger, and I am still so good, so didn't I travel in vain?

The writing is pretty good, but as for the plot, well, it feels quite immature. I hope the author can stick with it, but it's really not to my liking. The protagonist of Asa Xixiang, if you say one thing, is really disgusting to me.

The idea of ​​the book is very good. The writing style is a little immature but has unlimited potential. I hope the author will continue writing according to his own outline. Come on! To be honest, for me personally, the theme of this brave man is very good, but the description in the book is still a bit lacking. So far, I have only seen the pig's feet take out a goblin fireball and a double skeleton summoning skill to kill elite monsters. The combat effectiveness of the brave has been basically blurred. The concept of fighting six bandits is very vague, and I can't see the ability and potential of the brave. Author, what kind of world do you want to describe to us? You should draw key circles in your outline. Now I am a little unclear about the main line. I can't see the goal or the main line. The world view has not been clearly revealed yet. Well, I like the sweetness of the brave very much 😌 For currency issues, it is best to make a table and calculate it. When you go out, you can probably count the value of 1,000 silver coins. The price of 10 silver coins for a person to stay in a hotel for a day actually quantifies the value of silver coins. At present, 10,000 silver coins are not enough to make the president of the Alchemist Association frown. It can bring 1,000. His suggestion of 1,000 is really not very good. The purchasing power of 1 silver coin is very problematic and has a great impact on your world view. The price of magic crystals, including yours, cannot be expanded. The perfect quality of fireball 1st level pig's feet is 60 silver coins. If you set a high price for a high level, it will be like slapping the president in the face. In fact, if you look at other books, the author can also work part-time as a game planner. You can try to make a world map yourself and set up the world step by step. With the settings and reference, you will have no worries when drawing up the outline. Otherwise, it will be too disjointed and difficult to immerse. I very much hope that you can open the curtain of a Western fantasy to us in their next adventure, reveal all kinds of novel magic, and bring a brave man with a bigger pen! Drawing a brave man into the sweetest love

The appearance of the villain president in Chapter 37 is one of the most common mistakes for new authors. The Brave Manga is not a big problem, but the novel is not. What cool stories need is reversible coolness. What is popular right now is to avenge a grudge on the spot, or slap him in the face in the second chapter, rather than develop silently after being slapped in the face. There are many forms, whether it is burning down a house or shop overnight, poisoning or poisoning in a sneak attack, sabotaging various business policies, or beating up the soldiers who summoned the protagonist. In short, it must be innovative and slap in the face. All the traditional heroic storylines are just your material, focusing on a flexible reversal.

The combat power system is written differently. There is no clear level division, and the character design is also a mess. As a demon king, his level is not as good as that of a dog. As mentioned above, he can use A-level or even S-level magic. When fighting, he doesn't even use defensive magic. As a king, don't you bring some high-level magic crystals to defend yourself? How could a man who could directly fight with his bare hands be so easily attacked to death by a man who had been fighting the heroine repeatedly with his bare hands? Moreover, he was still wearing armor, and three high-level warriors were killed almost at the same time, unless they were all transformed. People can get closer within half a step, but the difference between those with armor and those without armor is much larger. According to the previous description, it is impossible for a shape-shifter to have this speed. I really can't think of how to achieve the level described in the description of the shape-shifter. Or did the author not consider combat power at all when writing? Just writing characters for the subsequent plot?

Is your currency a bit inflationary?🤔

Come on, come on, your friends are coming to support 🤓

It's actually pretty good-looking 🙂 You can really cheer up

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? It's not enough.

After seeing the latest chapter, this book looks pretty good so far. It uses the old-fashioned world view of Japanese RPG to unfold an anti-conventional story. The character creation is also pretty good so far. The protagonist is a little weak in terms of strength, but it is understandable. There are various professions in Japanese RPGs. The protagonist is a semi-auxiliary and semi-output profession, and he also needs to grow. It's a good start so far, and I hope it can be maintained in the middle and later stages.

The writing is quite good, although the writing style is a bit immature. The protagonist's battle gave me the feeling of a world view where the prop fee is not reimbursed 🙂

The twist at the beginning is very interesting. After a series of blind guesses, the heroine was gradually tricked by him and took another path. I just don't know how the male protagonist will attack the female protagonist later🤭🤭

It's quite good. I read it in one go and I'm still not satisfied with it. Please keep reading.

There aren't many plots that make people feel relaxed, but it feels good when writing about the heroine.

It feels weird, maybe it's because I've read too many novels about decisive killing.