From Mechanical Wasteland to Holy Terra

So far, the author's writing is pretty good, but I have a suggestion, that is, you don't need a woman to write Warhammer, and the protagonist doesn't need an emotional line. It's best to write the protagonist as a character who is not close to womanizing, and focus on development.

The author's idea is good, but I don't like that the system belongs to the void creation category. Moreover, most of the golden fingers in the Warhammer world are Tzeentch's tricks, and the golden fingers of Warhammer dare to be used randomly.

I was really impressed by one person in the comment section. The author wrote a sentence in the novel and he rebutted it, which annoyed me to death.

The writing is good, but I personally feel that the protagonist should establish a base as soon as possible to start developing his power. At least he should build a camp before it is released, and when it is released, he should explode troops and establish supply lines to prepare to regain the planet. Now the old man Huang invests the protagonist with soldiers, hoping that the protagonist will develop and grow in the future to counterattack 40k. Not to mention killing the four gods, at least let humans have a normal country as a backing option. Then the old man Huang definitely does not want the protagonist to just use his investment to build a game with the same structure as the empire. After all, the old man Huang himself cannot stand the empire, but there is no way. Since he invested, he must have thrown it into such a place without the interference of the four gods because he hoped that the protagonist would create a serious three-dimensional balanced development national system integrating industry, academia and research, independently constructed, instead of just making do with it like an empire. In this way, after the protagonist counterattacks, 40k humans will have two survival options to choose from. Even if the Empire and Chaos are deadlocked, there will be a way out. The old man Huang is concerned about mankind. If mankind has a better future, even if the Empire loses the Emperor, he will not frown, because this is a reasonable metabolism for mankind. What the protagonist needs now is to take the currency invested by the emperor, establish a branch (a new system country), and after it grows, go back and transfer 40k of the empire's assets to the new company, and then use the empire as a shell company to attract firepower and continue to grow, and then annex the empire and give mankind a new life.

New Warhammer book? I'm here to help out.

Why isn't there anyone? It's pretty!

"By calculation, you will not win this battle. The Emperor's greatest victory will not be achieved in your lifetime." "Yet, every second you resist the enemy's fire, you are draining their resources and weakening their strength. Your life is worthless, but you can exchange it for so much more." "This is the meaning of your existence. It is your duty and your destiny: to die heroically, to die resolutely, knowing that the smallest sacrifice you make will be recorded and will atone for the heresy of your ancestors." "Your actions will hasten the arrival of that great and inevitable moment when Krieg's sins will be exonerated, and Krieg's sons will be redeemed in the all-seeing eyes of the Emperor." "At this point, your short-lived existence will eventually become eternity."​

Your life is the Emperor's gold coin, and the Emperor has hundreds of billions of throne coins above you. But remember - if you are a human being, you will be loyal to the emperor; if you are an army, you will serve the empire. We are the Astral Militarum, the Emperor's Hammer that travels in the star sea - the tomb of our lord is the cornerstone of the empire! One day, in a certain generation, the descendants of mankind will stay safe, free, and peaceful in the sea of ​​​​stars all night long. For this great goal, the empire still needs a million-mile Great Wall made of the blood, flesh, and faith of all the kings. The glory of the country is burning, and the dead soldiers are angry...​

To be honest, a planet-level battle has been going on for so long. It's not like Holy Terra has so many black technologies. It makes me vomit.

There are so many new books recently.

In fact, Void Creation is much more impressive than Tzeentch, Huang, Old Man, etc. These also require the loss of subspace energy or matter. Void Creation directly embodies the abstract concept.

The Emperor is above, Slaanesh is below, long live my loving father.

The update is so slow. I read "Astartes of the Bear School" from beginning to end. I turned around and saw that 25 chapters have been updated. Did I read it too fast? 🤔

I'm too tired to read. There are still prerequisites for reading.

For ten thousand years, aliens, heretics, and traitors tore the galaxy apart and defiled the land of the Holy Emperor. For ten thousand years, mortals fought against demons and evil gods with fearlessness and courage. For ten thousand years, they fought against the bloodthirsty greenskins, against the greedy insect swarms, against the ancient undead and the Ada, against the arrogant Tau, and against the despicable traitors For ten thousand years, they continued the glorious and glorious empire with their short and humble lives. Praise be to the Emperor, in your name we will fight to the death.​

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I've written 720,000 words and haven't signed a contract yet. I feel like I can do something wrong (do you like to delete comments?)