One Piece: Summon Characters from All over the World to Start a Brawl

The moment the protagonist came out, I didn't want to watch it😅

Kaido's overlord color wrapped around him and smashed Tsukuni Enichi's head with a stick 😁😁

It feels like an AI work, with no outline, no main line, no protagonist, and even less fun.

Shouldn't he be pointing at the Tianlong people?

There are no detailed descriptions, the continuity is confusing, and the main line of the outline is nowhere to be seen. Identified as inferior to AI

Tsukuni Enichi fights Kaido? He's just an ordinary person who wasn't born in the world of pirates.

What puppet text? Don't Gangplank and Miss Fortune have a grudge against killing their parents? This is how we can beat the aunt together. Pure Puppet might as well write something else, it doesn't even respect the basic setting of the original work.

There are breathing techniques everywhere. Isn't this thing just a martial arts internal skill? It's also a magic skill that can hurt oneself. It's been mythologized like this...

It's AI. Basically, you can tell by looking at the introduction. Sister Luck is unlikely to be with the captain. They are mortal enemies.

Who will Yuanyi hit? Kaido? , Why didn't you say fight Frieza?

The sharp blade in Tsukuni Yuan's hand pointed at Kaido, Akainu, Big Mom, Blackbeard, the Five Old Stars, Im, Crocodile, Doflamingo, and the Golden Emperor, roaring that you are treating your lives like nothing.

I pooped a big poop, which made me →_→ disgusted. My dog ​​didn't even look at me. I never want to see this kind of poop again.

I can't understand it, I really can't understand it, my aesthetics is lagging behind 🙂🙂

🐔Kunibuki, also referring to Kaido, let's talk about Aaron first

🧠：History 👁：Indeed

Look at me, I feel confused and confused

Gangplank seems to be just a pirate leader, nothing awesome.

What is this? It's a mess.

You wrote Dr. Roman, I am very happy You threw the doctor into the trash navy, I just want to scold you😡 Why do you do this to the doctor, can't you just let him be an ordinary doctor? 😡

It's a mess, there are too many typos, I can find dozens of typos in the first chapter, it's rubbish

It feels so messy and I can't stand it

No, the compositions written by elementary school students are more readable than yours.

I don't know many of the characters you write, or have even heard of them, so you will definitely get poor grades, and your profile will look very messy, with a lot of unfamiliar people. In this case, you can just fill in one or two. If you fill in a bunch, if you don't write the popular ones, how can you attract people? Just rely on literary youth

The World Divides Pirates?

I was quite interested at first, until the main character appeared

I can't even understand your introduction. Who wrote it? What's the first sentence?

After reading the introduction, can a demon slayer defeat Kaido? Is it so outrageous?

Even Yui Yi can't break Kaido's defense