League of Legends Comes to Douluo Continent

There should be another Kyle in Wuhun Palace

It feels like there is no protagonist, just adding some special characters and developing new routes

Why do I feel so much like Wang Situ's style...

Outrageous, according to Sword Demon's temperament, shouldn't he just take over his body? He keeps talking about trading. Sword Demon is not the kind of Layaste. And even if he is a Rayaste, facing a weak Zhuqing, he would have already taken over his body. The reason why he didn't take over Kai Ying is because Kai Yin himself is a dick, let alone the Sword Demon. He couldn't stand it anymore and quit.

The idea of adding Douluo to the Alliance is quite good, but adding Scarlet Moon feels like a failure The information in the book says that Scarlet all came from Valoran, but there are many heroes who are set to be Douluo natives, which is not true. What a big problem, but Scarlet starts with level 99 combat power + more than 10 Scarlets, and directly begins to conquer the continent. How do you let a hero who is set as a local Douluo develop? And Scarlet's combat power is too high, and he quickly conquers the continent. There's nothing left to write about Lu, right? If I write it like this, I feel like 300,000 words will be enough. Even if I include the God Realm, it's probably only 500,000 words. In the book, Nian Scarlet doesn't even take the God Realm seriously There's also Yatuo in the book. Kes, the Dragon King, and the Protoss, there must be other Dark Descendants. If we force the story to go back to the present, if the Dark Descendants, God Realm, Scarlet, and Giant God Clan (Star Spirits) fight, the theme of Douluo will be completely divorced It is a pity for such a good idea.

The writing is not good, there are many typos, and there is no messy foreshadowing for the change of perspective. I can only read it through my imagination.

There are so many characters in a group portrait novel that I would like to write about them all in one chapter. The idea is good, but the writing is really poor

How can the combat power of Douluo Continent allow you to sublimate him from the mud in the smelly ditch to the floor tiles of heaven!

It would be too confusing to not have a protagonist. Even if you have a protagonist behind the scenes, at least there is a general direction.

Isn't it only the princes who write about this subject?

Writing this kind of article is just a novelty, it's so cool, basically all League of Legends characters are the protagonists

I thought it was a horse-drawing novel, a group portrait novel without a master. This kind of novel is the most difficult to write. If you can't substitute it in, the entire protagonist will be used as a background version, which is better than without a master.

This, I thought it was fine when I read it before, but suddenly when I wrote about Tang San, I felt like I was being fed a mouthful of shit. If it is black, it is black. If the writing is reasonable and black, it is okay, but it is embarrassing to follow the trend. This is

The subject matter is good and it should have been a hit. I read it for a long time and the author did not clarify the main line or the protagonist. It made me dizzy.

New book for newbies! Quality is trustworthy! Updates you can trust! Everything is trustworthy! Who is faster, concealed weapons or guns? When Tang San led the sect soul master alliance and held the Zhuge Crossbow weapon against the soul-guided artillery of the Wuhun Palace coalition, he was dumbfounded and said: "Impossible! The Tang Sect's hidden weapons are the best in the world!!!" Seven steps away, gun fast! Within seven steps, the gun is fast and accurate! When the Douluo Soul Guidance Fleet drove its aircraft carrier past the Sun and Moon Continent, which had not yet drifted, the small sampans in the Sun and Moon Continent were frightened: "Impossible! The Sun and Moon Soul Guidance is the orthodoxy!!!" Seven hundred million steps away, the cannon is equally fast and accurate! When the soul master of the sect met the soul mecha of the soul hall, the old soul master was horrified: "Impossible! We are the best!!!" The protagonist was furious: "Come here! Chop them up!" This is a somewhat abnormal world of Douluo. The people in it are not normal, the protagonist's mental state is not normal, and the author's mental state is not normal either. But this is also a scientific Douluo world that condenses many detailed research reports on Douluo. The martial soul is scientific, the soul power is scientific, and the IQ is scientific. Come on! Let crazy reason occupy the high ground of wisdom!

It's only 480,000 words, but I feel like the author has written a lot

The first part is fine, but the rest is rubbish.

It is recommended to have Baron Nash plus Jax, the kind who can defeat all the invincible players in the world. It is the same as the lol story that has been circulated before.

I really thought about WOC Gouba, Iron Man hammered Tang San

A little too watery

It's all finalized. I'll have to wait for a while. I don't like chasing updates.

"I have picked up the sharp sword to judge evil, and I have the determination to be righteous." "Only sinners will care about the past. Torture creates suffering, and repentance will have a future. Suffering will intensify torture. I will end this endless cycle in the world." "I will purify my heart. The darkness rises in glory." "I am both a guiding light and a purifying spring." "The eternal burning wings take me away from the sinking of this world." "I have handed over everything to the light, and the light gives you salvation." R> …… "The humble people are burned with flames, and the humble ones deserve death. The unjust are burned with fire, the deceitful people are burned to death, and the holy fire washes away the darkness." "The sharpness of thousands of blades and the fury of tens of thousands of flames are stirring in my heart." "Their words The deeds should be weighed on the scales of the stars, and my desire for justice reaches the sky. I am here to answer the call. "My perfection will make people tremble."

The bear and the ice bird should also have some roles...

Thinking too much leads to messy writing