Super Different Time Dream

It is difficult to write a group portrait article, but Zhan Ba ​​can write it like this within the space of dozens of chapters, which is actually very good. If you look closely, it may be that trying to cram so many people into such a short space has led to the establishment of characters while promoting the main plot. Of course, if Zhanba can bring a character to life in one sentence, then just pretend I didn't say anything (seriously). In addition, in the early stage, I thought that "killing to upgrade" meant killing one person to advance to a level. In the end, I didn't expect that it was actually a level for each person and could be inherited. In the end, it was a range determination. Is this reasonable? Well, this makes sense. After all, this is not what the author said, but what Bai Yi said - Zhanba can only cry. What does she (he? Heehee) know about "Super Dream"? Laugh. By the way, the arrival of the end is a bit sudden... I only have one thought when I see it: Is it so big? How many kinds of apocalypse have you (not counting me, because I'm not writing about the earth in the first place, lol) caused for the earth? Laugh again. In the end, Lin Mang chose to reset... Without the influence of external factors, if this experience was repeated, the story would probably be similar... However, the open ending was quite good. Who is Fu Guang was not clearly explained at the end. Maybe I failed to infer it or missed it? I didn't write down the reason for the appearance of the superpower... I just assume Zhanba didn't want to write it down. I personally prefer the one with complete logic. It would be more interesting if Zhanba could write this part out, for example... Is this all really just a game, a dream in which everyone participates?                                       Well, I don't know if Zhanba has seen this. If he has seen this, Zhanba might cry again, or maybe he has already cried? After all, can Zhan Ba ​​only cry or laugh? And I don't know what to say. All in all, it's quite interesting. We are both new authors, so let's work together!

Let me introduce it to book friends who don't know it. What you are about to see next is the inward-looking work "Super Dream of Different Time" by the author of Mengxiaogui Mengyu Yiyao.

Zhanba looked over at me 🤓

Can the beautiful girl Zhanba learn from others?

，，          ，（）， After reading novels for so many years, this beginning can still attract me, and it is particularly difficult for me, a person who has not been exposed to this subject, to still be interested in reading. It makes me feel that the words between the lines have been polished, and they are words that I can read into. However, after the previous chapter, the entire plot unfolded too quickly, and each individual name was like a dumpling (it seems to be your high school classmate, very interesting 🤭). It made me want to continue reading in the afternoon but also lost interest in reading. After patiently clarifying the characters, I can feel that the idea of ​​​​Zhanba actually exists. I think the idea is not bad, but I always feel that something is missing, which makes me feel that it is not so interesting. This makes people interested but also difficult to read, so I gave up. Then, after going round and round until today, I picked up this book again and found that it was finished. Looking at the whole story, although the story is stumbling, the characterization is not clear, and the interest is somewhat attenuated, but Zhanba is finished. I have no reason to complain. As he said in his closing remarks, the starting point is the grave of new writers. It can be said that new writers basically make no income from writing books. But he didn't give up and finished the story, which was so difficult. In fact, it doesn't matter whether the story is told well or not, whether the logic of the article is coherent, whether the characters' actions are self-consistent, or whether the plot is feasible. The most important thing is that you can write, integrate your trivial inspirations, and express them in writing. This is enough.       ，，，，， But the author (I won't talk about Zhanba here) has finished writing. Even if there are many problems, he is still a novice practicing writing anyway. It is normal to have problems. As long as he keeps writing, he will definitely gain something. A person who wanted to write a book but failed to write it August 29, 24

Zhanba, looking forward to your next book (although I haven't finished this book 🙂)

Can't the author be a male beam?

Zhanba, why don't you guess who I am 🪖

When I looked at the book circle, I saw that they were all acquaintances.

You released a new book so soon Come on