1979: Starting by Saving a Female Educated Youth

Let's talk about the reason why the author's last book was good but made people feel frustrated. I hope the author will pay attention to it. First, the protagonist's plot is too weak. After getting involved with the noble girl from the capital, the gap between the two is too big. It's not that readers don't like the noble girl from the capital, but they don't like that the gap between the two cannot be filled even if there is a plot, and they even feel helpless when encountering obstacles and difficulties. The protagonist is within the system, and the protagonist will really die if Feng Xue's father moves his fingers. Even if many things are resolved in the end and are not within the protagonist's ability, it will be very frustrating. Second, the character of the protagonist is brave and resourceful at the beginning, and he is also bloody when fighting with others. Later, when he meets the second generation of Yanei, he is not only shocked, but at least he is not inferior to others! Later, when the protagonist encounters difficulties, the first thing he wants to do is to find someone for help, especially when he asks a woman for help, which is really frustrating. Third, the harem can be reduced and established at the same time. When reading novels, the most important thing is to feel happy. What's the use of logic when you're unhappy or even aggrieved?

Does the author like to write about the protagonist so much? In the last book, he forcibly took in a widow with a daughter, and this one has to take in a section chief with a son. If you want to write RQ, there is no need to take care of the family like this.

Another one that creates conflicts without resolving them. Is it fun to torture readers?

One look at the weak character of the heroine and she is completely submissive to the protagonist. It is also a harem, currently there are 3

The layout shouldn't be so small, and the heroine shouldn't be so few either.

I just want to know when I can drink milk directly

This kind of setting where several women agree that the male lead and one man has multiple wives is too intellectual... And one by one they are honest and truthful. This is too poisonous... The section chief who took care of the children in front of him designed the milk drink very cleverly and moved, and his reaction was like a normal person. After it was put on the shelves, it suddenly became intellectual. My sister-in-law, the fairy mother, gave it away for free like a retarded person. So why do you write about Siheyuan? It's because those little widows can continue writing without having to have their status and without resorting to wisdom. You two directly said to the woman that I want more than one partner. If you accept it, we will continue... It is really indescribable.

The plot of the story goes back and forth between the protagonist and the three women, and the plot can no longer unfold.

The MCA book gave up halfway through, which shows that the author has become more motivated.

It's very well written, keep it up! Vote for you at the end of the month ✊