1979: Starting by Saving a Female Educated Youth

Let me explain why the author's previous book, while well-written, left readers feeling frustrated. I hope the author will take note of this. First, the protagonist's power-up is too weak. After getting involved with the noblewoman from the capital, the gap between them becomes too large.

Does the author really enjoy having the protagonist take on unwanted roles? In the last book, they forcibly took in a widow with a daughter, and now they're taking in a section chief with a son. If you want to write a romance novel, there's no need to drag in so many families!

Another story that creates conflict but doesn't resolve it; is it fun to torment the readers?

It's obvious from the female lead's weak personality and complete obedience to the protagonist that it's another harem story; currently, there are three.

The scope shouldn't be so narrow, and there shouldn't be so few female leads.

I just want to know when I can drink milk directly.

The premise of several women agreeing to the male protagonist's polygamy is just idiotic... And they even seriously come up with their reasons one by one, which is just too cruel... The scene where the section chief with the child gives milk is cleverly and touchingly designed, and his reaction is like that of a normal person, but after the story is released, he suddenly becomes idiotic, and the…

The plot revolves solely around the protagonist and the three women; it has run out of steam.

I gave up on the one by Ma Hua halfway through, but this one shows the author's increased stamina.

Well written, keep it up! I'll vote for you at the end of the month ✊