The Dragon-Fed Lord

In fact, it is difficult to write a good female character in a book. If the women in the incident were replaced by men, would you still handle things and treat the characters this way? If you think you will still handle and treat it this way, then you are right to write it.

It can be seen that the author wants to write something new, but please don't write irrelevant words and unconventional words, such as village leader, team leader, etc.

It's really good so far. I hope the author won't make the levels too complicated. The previous book was too messy with the bloodline registration divisions and too many beast-controlling classes. I mainly write about a few that are slowly cultivated, which is very nurturing. For example, it is similar to the very popular beast-controlling novels. The main team has six beast-controlling teams, and a second team can be added later. .

"Dragon Riding in the Old Days" is quite to my liking. I hope this book will be well written. I will give you all the recommendation votes.

What we are saying is that after writing, you are not allowed to think over and over again whether some plots are reasonable or not? The author could learn from some of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan or Shen Nong Daojun. The protagonist's behavior is already quite cruel. If it is written so smoothly, it feels like the villains are all the same as good people and fools, and the supporting characters also seem to have no brains.

I have just obtained so many sealed objects at the beginning, what will I write next? The previous book was also like this. There were too many beasts at the end. Most of the beasts had basically no chance to appear. The writing was broken. And couldn't the protagonist's sealed artifact be well thought out? See each seal

Almost all this kind of novels have one problem: they lose their wits when meeting women, and they also like to write about people transforming into dragon ladies.

The way the Jinmu camp is handled is not very good. You have captured a middle person on the opposite side, and a sealed object from the upper level has also been captured by the protagonist. The protagonist is basically unharmed. With his younger brother and sister, he can directly annex the Jinmu camp. This will increase the population. Other camps know that the protagonist has the ability to kill and defeat the upper level, and they do not dare to invade the protagonist's camp at will.

This damn eunuch, take care of him for two months first

The author wrote it so smoothly. When he came out of the secret realm, his relatives were just captured. The author said that Jin Huzhen is a domineering force, so his siblings cannot be intact. Maybe the younger sister was played, the younger brother was killed, the sealed beast was destroyed, and Kaneki's younger sister also had to be killed. The author wrote that the protagonist started killing people after he came out, which is more like a villain and even less reasonable.