The Dragon-Fed Lord

Actually, writing a good female character in a book isn't that difficult. If you replaced the women in the events with men, would you still handle the situation and treat the characters the same way? If you think you would, then you've written it correctly.

It's clear the author wants to write something new, but please don't try to be original with irrelevant words like "village chief" or "team leader."

It's really good so far! I hope the author won't make the levels too complicated. The last book had a messy bloodline registration system that was too disorganized. Also, don't have too many beast tamers; focus on a few that you slowly train. That would give you a real sense of progression, like in those popular beast taming novels where the main team has six beast tamers, and you could add a second team later.

I really enjoyed "Dragon Taming of the Past," and I hope this one is well-written. I'll give you all my recommendation votes!

What I'm saying is that after finishing the story, shouldn't we repeatedly scrutinize whether the plot makes sense? The author could draw inspiration from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan or Shennong Daojun, etc. The protagonist's overpowered abilities are already quite brutal; if the writing is this smooth, the villains all seem like overly benevolent but actually foolish people, and the supporting characters also seem brainless.

This is only the beginning and they've already created so many sealed artifacts. How are they going to write the rest? The previous book was the same; towards the end, there were too many tamed beasts, and most of them barely got a chance to appear, which ruined the story. And couldn't they have better conceived the protagonist's sealed artifacts? They just seal them one by one!

These kinds of novels almost all have one problem: they lose their minds when they encounter women, and they also like to write about humanized dragon girls.

The way Kaneki's camp was handled was poorly. You've already captured one of the mid-level enemies, and the protagonist has also captured one of the high-level sealed artifacts. The protagonist is basically unharmed, and with his younger brother and sister, he can easily annex Kaneki's camp. This would increase the population, and other camps, knowing that the protagonist has the ability to kill and defeat high-level enemies, wouldn't dare to invade the protagonist's camp so easily.

That damned eunuch, let him rest for two months first.

The author's writing is too smooth. When they emerge from the secret realm, their family is merely captured. The author states that Golden Tiger Town is a tyrannical force, meaning their siblings couldn't possibly be unharmed. Their sister might be taken advantage of, their brother killed, the sealed beast destroyed, and even Jinmu's sister might be killed. The author has the protagonist start killing as soon as he appears, making him seem more like a villain, even more unreasonable.