Two Worlds: The Strange Immortal!

How should I put it? The setting of the protagonist is very complicated, but an ordinary modern person in ancient times would stab a wolf in the eye without saying a word. How can I describe this technique? It's like studying mathematics with Wei Shen on the first day of learning mathematics. And the protagonist's so-called controlled knives are sold online in large quantities. It's just that they won't let you shoot them. If you need them, you can just find someone to shoot them yourself. Compound bow, what kind of compound bow do you play? You can't carry it on your shoulders and your hands can't lift it when you play with the bow. How many pounds do you play with it? Can you shoot accurately?

It is recommended not to write emotional lines, it is very poor

The author is not writing about the eyes at all, but about the back... Secondly, modern compound bows have a labor-saving function, which allows even less powerful users to draw heavier bows. The labor-saving ratio of compound bows is between 60% and 90%. As for whether it is easy for novices to open, they can learn a little from online tutorials, and the author also said that it is just for psychological comfort. If the situation is not right, they will hide back in modern times. Is having a weapon in hand the same as having no weapon in hand?

The five immortals of heaven, earth, humans, gods, ghosts, are the Danding Dao, which appeared in the Great Alchemy Chapter or the Enlightenment Chapter. They are different ways of practice. The heavenly immortals are the heavenly immortals, which are the highest. The ghosts and immortals are not Yangshen, so they are called Qingling ghosts and immortals, which are the lowest. It has nothing to do with metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. However... These are just settings in themselves, it depends on how you write them.

I hope that when the author compiles a modern background, he will not rely on the prehistoric ones (this makes me vomit) 😰, and either make up his own one, or prefer a classical one.

Falling in love takes up too much space. We are watching Cultivation of Immortals.

Whether it's a trick or a fairy, there's no such thing

After reading it, let me sum it up. The fantasy genre is very well written and interesting, but modern emotions are a mess.

This plot has no impact on modern life at all. In fact, it can be designed to travel to that world; after all, it is necessary to revive spiritual energy in modern times at the same time. I feel that it is difficult for the author to have such writing power.

The overall layout and relationships are okay. Author, if you are not suitable for writing emotional dramas, just write simple ones. I thought it was a pornographic novel. You have to understand that your pleasure lies in the revenge of geniuses from other worlds, and the modern only way. These two points should be focused on. You are simplifying feelings, especially in modern times where there are so many useless tricks.