System, Stop Deducing the Techniques.

Write well and don't worry about whether there are people. Once you've written it, people will come naturally.

The fairy world in novels has been really miserable recently. It was either bombed or invaded. It was either polluted or parasitized.

Is anyone there

I have to say that the writing style is a bit too white, but the flow is very good, and the character creation is not bad at the moment. It's just that there are too few details and descriptions, so little that I had to make up the relevant scenes in my own mind-what kind of terrain does the protagonist walk in the sect? Take the official road or climb the cliff? Why did Jiang Qingqing suddenly appear next to the protagonist? Pass by on foot or fly by with a sword? How did you arrive at the sect with the protagonist after you appeared? Walking or flying? What is the selection scene like? Is it the Monument Square or the Valley Rock? ,,, After reading ten chapters, the protagonist has moved to several places. However, there is basically no description of the scene and the connection between the scenes. The transition is basically a forced cut from one place to another. As a result, I cannot construct the scene image of this Dao Sect in my mind. As a result, this sect has not established any impression or character in me (Jiang Qingqing's character has established a character) There is almost no world view development. Yes, the narration has always been around the protagonist. I read some classic online articles. In the first few chapters, you write around the protagonist and then insert some setting introductions at the right time. You seem to be talking about the division of realms, and you also vaguely introduced the "Collapse of the Immortal World" and "The World of Great Controversy" from the side,,, I have seen the protagonist running to the mission hall to learn how to take the mission, but I still don't know what kind of sect this Dao Sect is? A wealthy family in a continent? Mainland second rate? Or is it authentic in the world? I don't know why the protagonist wants to worship this sect, why he comes here to worship the sect, what is going on in the mental hospital at the beginning, what is the protagonist's level of cultivation during the Qi training period, and how did he get it,,, There is also the prince who can obviously expand on what the "Great Xia Dynasty" is. Is the current political power divided among heroes or unified by the world? The difference between it and the fairy tales we often read is that it lacks something that needs to be "slowly unfolded", and the characters are forced to push the plot. It is just "a group of characters talking and doing things." Other narrations, background introductions, and story settings have all been cut away. It is like a grassroots team. After reading ten chapters, I still have a vague understanding of the world of this book.