Hogwarts Entertainment Guide

I really didn't expect that the author who wrote Douluo fanfics would switch to Harry fanfics, and the writing was unexpectedly good. Because Harry Potter's own world view is large enough, and Rowling writes children's books, many settings are not too strict, leaving the author with a lot of creative space. It can be seen that the author must have done his homework on some settings about magic and can achieve relatively strict logic and self-consistency. I think this is still very important unless it is a pure spoof. Also, there is almost no OOC in the character creation. I feel that the main characters are very consistent with the original image, and the image of the heroine is also very lovable. Some people say that it combines the advantages of Lily and Harry, and it seems to be true. I actually read the last one, and I don't care whether I have a harem or not, but many of the book lovers who are willing to follow it must like the author's emotional dramas, so I definitely can't hold back on this aspect. The main plot is probably to build a "magic Internet" in the magical world, use magic to create various entertainment products, and then defeat Voldemort. It feels like the atmosphere is difficult to be tense, because the protagonist is invincible in school in his first year, and he is invincible to Voldemort in his second year, right?

The author spends five chapters describing combat training, which roughly includes: 1. Pushing the house renovation plan to Hermione 2. A large introduction to the Iron Armor Curse and related extended applications 3. Testing several people's combat awareness, the power of spells and correcting bad spell-casting habits 4. Introducing the three unforgivable curses that have "little practical significance" 5. Briefly introduce the relationship between magic magnetic field (but not explain why it is a magnetic field) and the power of magic 6. Duel and post-war review 7. Give others fighting style suggestions 8. Avoiding Wood's training should be a small foreshadowing So, let's look at Chapter 103 again, what the author did in a chapter 1. Mountain Introduction to the combat attributes of monsters 2. Spellcasting restrictions in the castle 3. The role of transformation in combat 4. Categories of spells - jinxes, curses, poison spells and black magic 5. Effects of obstacle spells and stun spells 6. A cool move should be a foreshadowing of combat moves Obviously, in 174- 178 There is a possibility that the description of these five chapters is too protracted. For example, is it necessary to describe the Iron Armor Curse in such a large space, because most of the fandom's related descriptions after the early stage only have three words: Iron Armor Curse... Or the duel between rookies takes up almost two chapters, but the battle scene is not much different from the one with the giant monster. Is such a description necessary? The above is just a personal opinion. Everyone has their own favorite rhythm, just like someone next door likes Lian Shizhang to get engaged at the age of fourteen...

The author must be going through the most difficult moments in his life. First, he lost his job, and then, worried about his girlfriend who otherwise lived with him, he went out and dazed in the park every day, and then looked for a job online. I finally found a job and wanted to share it with my girlfriend, but because I came home early, I found that my girlfriend was sleeping with her best friend. Losing two of the most important people at once made things more unstable. As we all know, patients with depression just can't sleep at night, can't get up in the morning, and have no energy to do anything.

I read the original book. Hermione in the original book looks very ordinary, but the casting in the movie is not good-looking. The behavior of the characters in the movie is obviously an exaggeration of the original work. First of all, there is no room for any sand in my eyes. Even if it is a trivial matter, I will cling to it. It is undoubtedly disgusting to be friends with such a person, because she is too critical of the people around her. The second point is that Hermione blindly believes in authority, which has been seen endlessly from the previous books to the Half-Blood Prince. Even repeated lessons cannot cure this. And from the perspective of talent, although her talent is not bad, she obviously lacks innovation. It is difficult to reach the extreme in magic. It is simply nonsense to want to rival Dumbledore. Personally, I feel that brothers Fred and Percy are on the same level. With such a character flaw, Hermione is almost unable to bring any help to the protagonist. She just unilaterally lets the protagonist act as a nanny. Putting aside the feelings of the original novel, I personally feel that there is no point in sticking to Hermione at all. The above is purely my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

Three unfinished books, one eunuch and two books 👍

174, So far it's chapter 180. How can I write six chapters about novice chickens pecking each other? It took three days to write. You can write like this in the Douluo book because you are creating a new combat power system, and you have to rely on this to overturn the Douluo God Realm. What do you mean by writing like this in this book? A lot of campus websites are writing new things at least, what do you mean by using a few magic spells to get the best of them? Those who came here from your old book want to read Shura Field, those who came here from your new book like Alice's daily love drama, and those who came here for imaginative articles are interested in how your campus network will change the world. It lasted three days, and one chapter was not in the reader's tune. If you want to take leave directly after the Mid-Autumn Festival, there is no need to deal with everyone.

The advantage is the exciting creation of the heroine and the character control of various characters, without OOC. I really like Alice's confident and decisive image. But as a book with the title of entertainment guide, I really can't get a sense of satisfaction from replicating the magical version of the Internet. Maybe it's because the achievements the protagonist has made so far have been achieved in reality using technology, and the degree of completion is even higher. In this way, it lacks the sense of fantasy of imaginary magic, and secondly, it is inevitable to feel that it is unfair. Thinking about it, I still prefer the feeling that repair spells and apparation can do things that cannot be done in reality. The above is just my personal opinion, you can discuss it if you don't like it.

The portrayal of the heroine can be said to be the best among HP fanfics I have ever read. The author keeps up the good work.

There has been no explanation at all for so long, and now no one even scolds me. The author should at least give an explanation The book is quite a pity.

It is said that the original novel of Hermione is average in length and the movie is good to watch, but who told you that you will definitely travel through the original novel? Have you ever seen those who write about Marvel? How many of them write about time-travel comics? They basically start from the movies! And do we like Hermione? We like Hermione with Emma's face

I hope there will be no harem in this book 🙏🙏🙏 The author's writing style is very good and the plot arrangement is super interesting, but too many harems are a bit too much. I hope there will be as few harems in this book as possible, and I wish you a good story. In addition, monthly tickets are provided.

This book is a pity. There are really not many HP fans on this type of subject on the Internet. The creativity is enough, the plot is okay, and the writing is also good. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot, but it is a pity that it has not been updated for nearly a month...

Not very professional, just take a look

The author's word count is just bad. After one chapter, the plot has not been advanced. He describes the spell duel in detail. The author is happy. After the readers leave, they will be honest.

The plot, characterization, and writing are all excellent. It's just too short. Hope it doesn't get tricked. The male protagonist is a transfiguration genius and a magic genius, and the heroine Alice Potter is smart and considerate.        ， There is no disgusting plot about picking up an 11-year-old girl at the beginning. The identity of the heroine has been decided at present, but the relationship between the two parties is just friends. This kind of writing is really rare. If you can keep from going astray later, this book will be among the best among HP fans.

To be honest, this book is not popular at all. The IP of Potter is not suitable for the author, and this book is not suitable for starting a harem, causing the author to lose most of the readers of the previous book (including me). I have read more than ten chapters of this book and it is not as interesting as the previous book. I hope the author can win back the readers of the previous book for the next book!

Are Harry Potter fandoms still popular now? I don't know, but right now Douji, One Piece, Conan and the like are still very popular. Isn't writing fan fiction just about following the popular ones? The author can make money and we will be happy watching it, isn't it good? The author did not get good grades last time, so he abandoned many readers who liked you, and now he is working on a niche subject... I hope you can write about it. Finally, I still hope that the author can follow the hot topics and write fan fiction, so that everyone will be happy, or he can settle down and write original works, write a complete book with his own style regardless of grades, and sum up experience, so that the grades of the next book will definitely go up. The above is just my personal opinion, please ignore it if you don't like it. Come on!

Do you know how much I'm looking forward to the Qingqiu book?

Alice

My first impression was that I was a brainless author who writes fan fiction. But after reading this book, I found that I seemed to have made a big mistake about the author. He is very knowledgeable.

Alice

The female characters written by the author are very spiritual. I really want to read millions more words 😭. No matter what, just write again, I can do anything 😭

The author's female characters have always been very successful, and he is really talented. Although I have been reading Harem, I personally prefer this book to have a single female protagonist☝️ (Gou Su Cheng is such a scumbag, and why not accept Bo Saixi😭)

It obviously feels like there is more writing, and the perspective and characters are also very interesting. Pity. Buried, buried

Responsible for appearance

It's pretty good-looking, at least the heroine is lovable

It's very good, although the volume is a bit small, but it's been a long time since I've been able to read a novel to the end.

I want Alice! I want Alice! Give my heart to Alice who has the best time!

The original plot and characterization are quite attractive. The one drawback that I can't accept is the improvement of the protagonist's combat power or magic knowledge, which is a bit too outrageous. For example, if you get the Chilo magic perception experience card, you can write most of the ancient magic texts in one day, and your knowledge of transfiguration has directly increased to above the intermediate level of transfiguration, and you can also understand some alchemy. And I went to the restricted book area to get more than ten books. Being able to read one book in one day is already awesome. I don't know if the author's setting was to read them all on that day. Furthermore, the protagonist's golden finger is obviously a magic magnetic field perception, but it does not improve the protagonist's understanding ability. Moreover, even if it is true, is Quirrell's understanding ability that strong? There is another point that I have always been concerned about. The author said that Harry will appear, so if he is not in Hogwarts now, is he in another magic school?

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