
Conqueror of Ice and Fire
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Baelon, a fun-loving man who wants to see the Seven Kingdoms burn.
I have to say that I was blown away by the author's cunning manipulation of these two chapters. Before commenting on Baelon's crowning of the protagonist, let us first recall history and look at the two protagonists in the Dragon family's first struggle for the throne: Aenys, the eldest son of Aegon the Conqueror, and his brother, Maegor the Cruel. The following content comes from wiki: "His (Inis) main shortcoming is that he is eager to please others, gain recognition, and is easily influenced by others. Therefore, he is often half-hearted and hesitant, which caused great trouble to his rule. Grandmaester Gavin said Inis He believes everyone, but Maegor believes no one. According to his observation, King Aenys is easily influenced by others, and his actions are like reeds in the wind. He often adopts the last opinions that come to his ears. He always wants to please others, and always speaks softly when encountering obstacles. " Does it look familiar? Yes, Aenys' character is just like Wei Yi in this article, and after Aenys' death, Aenys' brother Maegor killed his two nephews and took the throne himself. After Maegor, there was the third son of Aenys, the father of Belron, the human king Jaehaerys I, who overthrew his uncle and sat on the Iron Throne again. Although Belon was born after King Renrui had been the king for almost ten years, the civil strife in the Long family could not be said to have happened that long ago. Comparing Aenys and Maegor, today's Viserys and the protagonist Aegon are even worse. Let's compare them next. Legitimacy: It seems that Viserys is the eldest son of Belron and has a legal advantage, but the protagonist is only the third son, and the protagonist does not have an advantage. But we need to note that the protagonist was personally canonized by his father before Viserys and crowned with the Conqueror's Crown. This is a very bad political implication: my youngest son is the most outstanding of all sons, and he is the only heir worthy of the crown of the conqueror. When we continue to think along this line of thinking, we will find that it seems that the ownership of the Iron Throne is not justified. Combat strength: Wei Fang: Daemon (Blood Worm) Rhaenys (Red Queen), and Guoguang (Syrax) if you support me to death Protagonist Fang: The protagonist's Bronze Fury, his wife's Dreamfire, and a silver wing that has no owner but can be commanded indirectly. Three versus three, the numbers are even, but the dragons on the protagonist's side have all drank the magic potion, and their size and combat power have been increased, so they are considered superior to the protagonist It can be said that Bellon did almost worse than Viserys in the original work. Baelon legally provides the protagonist with the right to claim the Iron Throne; in terms of force, it gives the protagonist an independent territory; the protagonist's marriage is more in line with Targaryen orthodoxy than his two brothers: intermarriage within the clan means that the blood of his descendants is purer. And the protagonist was even crowned before Viserys, which means that if the protagonist wants to fight for the Iron Throne, it can't even be said to be a rebellion, because the protagonist has no loyalty to his brother at all! Of course, Baerron (or to put it bluntly: the author) claims that everything he did was just to bring a sense of threat to Viserys, and that he had good intentions. But from the logic of a normal person, everything he did was unreasonable. Berron took the initiative to set the stage for the family civil war. Everything he did to the protagonist was laying the ground for civil strife. Even if he did nothing, the seeds of ambition were already growing quietly. But that's not enough! Baelon made the most joyful move. He committed suicide. He committed suicide in a land far away from Westeros. He committed suicide after a night conversation with the protagonist that no one knew about. He died in a foreign country without his legitimate heir, his council ministers, or other nobles from the Seven Kingdoms. There is no doubt that this once again weakened the legitimacy of Viserys's inheritance, because no one could prove it for him. In other words: If the protagonist is willing, he can kill his brother now, fly the dragon back to the Iron Throne, and announce his coronation. And even if the protagonist has no such intention, the nobles of the Seven Kingdoms can still use this to attack Viserys' legitimacy. Summary: Everything Bellon did was deliberately provoking civil strife in his family. If he's not a fun-loving guy who wants to see the Seven Kingdoms burn, as the title suggests, then he's just a lunatic. The person who caused him to be so insane was none other than the author.
I feel pretty good after seeing it so far, and I also hope that in the future, we won't force God to fight for the sake of God's war, and use magic for the sake of magic. The later plots of "Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon" and "I Became a Dragon Mother" are too abstract The IP of Ice and Fire is very popular. It is about these ordinary "mortals", not to mention all, but most readers also want to read the stories of these "mortals". However, many ice and fire novels like to write boring "wars of gods" in the later period. Is it possible that the gods are just seasonings in ice and fire, a hidden thread? Not every ice and fire novel has to beat the god in the later stage to be called an ice and fire novel.
Interesting, but not much
The protagonist's hang-up from the beginning has not been shown until now, and it does not reflect the excitement. The most important thing is that the protagonist, as a time traveler, behaves like a native, with actions and thoughts. The protagonist knows the original plot and has three dragons in his hand, but it is like a mechanical intelligence, and does nothing. To put it simply, the author's writing skills are not good enough and he cannot create new plots. The content of current novels is just to insert the protagonist into the original sentence and say a few words, just like a passerby.
The people of Myr openly assassinated the king, and the Iron Throne did not directly attack the city of Myr (this was not done by pirates and exiles). It is somewhat funny to use the Westeros nobles as the reason for opposing the war. Should I say that the people of medieval Westeros were too qualified, or that the author just wanted to copy it from the TV series 😒
Fan portrait of Wild Dragon Glutton
Doesn't the protagonist know that the Red Keep has become a sieve? The kind that has someone watching you every time you go to bed. Don't you know the dangers of bachelors and religion? How many royal families have died inexplicably. Dragons and bloodline are the core. Bloodline should not flow out. Just look at the sea snakes. Some people have dragons and are very tough.
Are you going crazy right now?
Do you want to take a look at what is written in the second chapter? Not to mention that it was just a "Hunter's Potion" so far, why did Bellon react like this and commit suicide for a Sequence Nine potion? Fire mage after that? Reaper? Iron-blooded knight? Belron doesn't know that there is a follow-up to the potion, doesn't the protagonist know? Don't you know the terrifying combat power brought by the subsequent potions? Seriously, when it comes to the Sequence 4 stage, you can't fight the dragons, and even the flying dragons are not as fast as you. That's all, Belron doesn't know, does the protagonist know? ? Are you still afraid that the potion information will be leaked? ? ? Oh my god, your "conqueror trait" is really amazing. Is it useful? It seems that there is, but there is no relevant description in the content written about strength. The characteristics of Sequence One are like killing in the world of Thrones. You can forcefully make you have no sense of existence. It is really awesome. I came here as soon as it was released 😅😅😅
The title of the book, Conqueror, was in vain. It took more than twenty chapters to tame a dragon, but in the end, I had to ask my grandmother for help.
In order to seize the Iron Throne, Wei Yi suddenly forcibly provoked a confrontation. How could Wei Yi's character become like this?
Didn't he say that he wanted to change it? This Baerron has changed from a wise master to a being even more dim-witted than Viserys I. This wave of operations is comparable to Geng Si. If the author does this, he will definitely not book it again.
Fortunately, I didn't subscribe. I quickly gave up after reading the story in the comment section.
Author: Don't give up
The framework of your book is really great, and your writing style is also great. The main problem is that there is something wrong with the plot design. The Conqueror also fits very well with the world of ice and fire. Don't give up. I'll give you all five monthly votes from my main account. I also think your writing is really good, otherwise I wouldn't vote for it, right? In your statement, everyone also gave you some opinions that you can learn from and continue writing. You can even write it as a hobby, polish the plot and keep writing it with this framework. It will definitely be the first book among Dragon House fans. The Conqueror has such a good framework that you can even polish the plot based on his sequence name. The framework and writing style are not problems, the only problem lies in polishing the plot, which will be solved through time. It's absolutely fine to write slowly without updating every day.
After reading it, let's say something.
The protagonist's positioning is generally felt to be a glue that can bring certain variables, but the overall story line has not been distorted and is still moving in the direction of the "original work". There is a big problem here. If the protagonist has no additional 'help' and can only rely on dragons, it would be okay. However, the author has given a "conqueror" feature. However, the performance of this feature is very confusing. At present, the benefits that the protagonist gets from this feature are only three features. If it is given to three dragons, one dragon will grow and disappear. The protagonist himself doesn't seem to show anything 'extraordinary', let alone the various abilities of the hunter path. So the question is, what is the use of this conqueror trait? Is it going to be a direct deus ex machina in the future? Finally, there is the protagonist's stance, which confused many readers. What on earth is he going to do? Are you trying to conquer the continent of Essos? Or ascend the Iron Throne? Or will he ascend the Iron Throne and then fight for hegemony over the continent of Essos? Or do you want to be a swinger prince? The protagonist is a time traveler, and he is already 15 years old in the last chapter. In other words, I have spent 15 years in this world, so I shouldn't not have enough planning, right? Even if you don't participate in the struggle for power, it is not impossible to study magic or other extraordinary things. However, the protagonist has to show it. He has to have a 'purpose'. Now it seems that he will act when there is something to do, and he will not take action when there is nothing. This is very unreasonable.
To be honest, Wei Yi is not that good! But he is still very good to his relatives. Such things are not like Wei Yi's character.
Why don't you throw away your secrets? Are you using potions indiscriminately? What did you write?
Alas, the author did not grasp the sense of proportion well.
There is a sequence, but if you still play the Game of Thrones without doing the sequence, you really won't stay in Westeros and won't be able to play it.
What can the Citadel do to a Targaryen without dragons?
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After reading Chapter 3, who is the protagonist?
The author writes so well. The epic new book "The Counterattack of the Beggar King of Ice and Fire" welcomes Ice and Fire fans to read and give advice.