Others Are Advised to Imitate Celebrities, but You Start by Pretending to Be a God?

First of all, I would like to encourage the author. The subject matter is novel and the story is well told. Other friends in the comment area of ​​the book also pointed it out. To be honest, AI is very convenient now. It is very simple to use AI to check for typos before publishing every day. There are also some realistic logic problems. It would be better if they could be better handled. Although reading without thinking 🧠 will not affect the progress of the plot, it is still a bit awkward. In short, the book is a good book, non-toxic, recommended, come on!

Is your introduction wrong? You play the Nine Heavens Yingyuan Thunder God Universal Transformation Tianzun. How can you combine the energy of heaven and earth to transform the creation of yin and yang? You also have Thunder God to help you. You are the leader of the thunder god, Lei Zu. This is the real source of thunder! When I shouted, it was also Lei Gong calling Lei Zu to help meah

How to say this book? It is probably the author's idea at the moment, and then he came up with this book. There should be no good outline and details, except for sometimes taking things for granted other than the author's knowledge. For example, the custom-made Cowes clothing was produced the next day, and the only classmates in the same class who are familiar with each other in the same dormitory after a month of school are small logical problems. Then the biggest flaw is typos. If you make a typo at once, or the sentence is not fluent, you originally read it as a white text with golden ideas, and don't want to use your brain. But as soon as your typo comes out, the reader has to think about what the author originally wanted to write. What, if you just think about the content of the book by the way, then the shortcomings will be magnified, and then some people will abandon the book, so if the author really writes the book sincerely, this point must be changed, otherwise you will have to cut the book if you can't write more than 120 chapters.

If awesomeness has anything to do with going to school, I feel like there's nothing interesting about it.

The manifested Erlang Shen runs away when encountering trouble and hides when he sees black smoke. The Thai kid dare not approach to deal with him. He is embarrassed and embarrassed abroad. Lei Zu and Erlang Shen, who are not the ones who punish evil and ward off troubles? They run away when they see black smoke. It is so embarrassing.

The immortal's 10-year magic power was enough to scare away those traffickers. The author is too cheap.

The more I write, the worse it gets! How about making a rich, high-tech villain? ? Delete the bookshelf and say goodbye

You are already a god, why should you read any books? Who in the world is qualified to teach you that this setting is not good enough and you have not written it to make it more enjoyable?

I can't even pretend to be B, it's boring

You still expect him to have a serious and responsible attitude when writing for mentally retarded people? Also innocent and cute enough.

It shows that this is not a cool novel. Novels about pretending to be a pig are still very rare. I suggest you write more.

I've already written about it here, but I think it's a taboo to create a villain with the same powers. Now I only watch it because only the protagonist has the ability. If you give the same villain now, you're just feeding history.

I don't like the appearance of gods in the city the most, because you are the Jade Emperor. When I meet the leaders of China, I feel like a young person. When people treat you as a young person, you still take it seriously.

Qidian's novels are becoming more and more popular

It's quite interesting. Looking at the follow-up development, I just personally feel that the live broadcast text and the language of the supporting characters are not suitable for the theme of gods. You can try to develop knowledge of popular science mythology, and cooperate with inadvertent manifestations of the saints. The style will be much higher than the ordinary pretentiousness.

The thinking is OK, but the writing is a bit rough and needs to be improved.

I feel like the book has gone astray. What was originally a live broadcast turned into a holy show in front of a magician?

Are you sure it's not a studio article? Why are the routines and plots so similar?

This book won't be transferred to the studio for writing, right? Are the settings in the context of the context a little different? In the past, I played two gods who went to the Taoist temple to ask the gods. This time I played Zhong Kui and went straight to it. Although I was a little anxious to investigate the case, I wasn't so anxious that I didn't even have time to do it, right? Also, in the past, whether it was Lei Zu's token, Erlang Shen's three-pointed two-edged sword, or even Erlang Shen's slingshot, you had to prepare it yourself. Now, Master Zhong Kui's sword system is just giving it out directly?

After writing more than 220 chapters of this book, after the videotape incident was resolved, someone else wrote it. It is more likely that the account was sold. The original female police officer became a man; the Black Deer, Leizu's mount that was originally conquered, turned into a strange beast that did not recognize the protagonist. Judging from the comments in the comment area, the plot changes even more, so forget it. The taste has changed and there is no need to continue. See you after it is removed!

I didn't even jump in to watch it. Why do I always feel that the plot doesn't match up to the previous one?

You act like a der, you act like Leizu

I really treat my book friends as Americans

Chapter 1: It's weird. If two people were about to kiss, why would they be considered a disciplinary offender and run away? It's not illegal to fall in love in college.

The name suggests that something is wrong with the roommate, so why not force him to be wise? Don't you have magical powers? You have to go around a lot to see it. I can still watch the previous one, why do you do this?