My Upgrade Path in Douluo

I'm almost tired of seeing it. Like an iron sword, just make it harder and sharper. Don't add elements or anything. The name of the weapon shouldn't exceed three words.

I got heatstroke while practicing driving. , Hahahahahaha

This system is just to exterminate the soul beasts. It is completely redundant to have a system. Just give the innate soul power to level 5 or above, and the rest can be done according to the routine. Secretly steal the fairy grass, pick up a girl and then upgrade to a god. It can be completed in one assembly line.

I suggest you give it some twists and turns, don't make it too smooth, that way it will look better.

I don't like Ning Rongrong very much. For no other reason than I write too much.

When writing a book, you can't write invincible and smooth sailing, otherwise there will be no waves at all, and it will seem uninteresting.

Two martial souls, but not full soul power? ? ? ? Strange! ! ! ! !

There is something wrong with what you wrote. Twin martial souls are at least innately full of soul power.