Killing Instantly with One Sword, Are You the Strongest?

🙂 After reading a wave of reviews, it was probably 10% positive and 90% negative. After reading Chapter 20 so far, I think I should let my younger brother know how strong he is, so that he can cultivate harder and more focused. It doesn't matter whether you join the department or not. After all, your younger brother has already joined. If your younger brother gets into trouble or asks for help, your elder brother will definitely help. Furthermore, warriors are rare and invincible in their class, so there is no need to deliberately hide their identities. Then what I want to say is that the label says "pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger." Nowadays, very few people like this kind of plot. Life is boring enough. It is unnecessary to hide in the novel to soothe and soothe. It is really unnecessary. The idea is good. If it can be adjusted back later, people will still read it. (PS: Updated one day ago, I feel like I have entered the palace)

Lj novel, the kind that can be poisonous just by looking at it, run as fast as you can

The relevant departments are so useless. There are not as many terrorists as there are in the third level. Who are the government troops? To be honest, writing a book requires logic, especially the world view and setting.

It's a bit complicated. How should I put it? After all, without mentioning reality, from a fantasy perspective, the characteristics of sword cultivation are high attack, extreme sharpness, and the ability to destroy everything and cut everything. But what I feel right now is that it's a brute style that relies on physical strength to cut hard. That's not to say that the brute style is not good. If you are a warrior, you will naturally have rough skin and thick flesh. But the swordsman type prefers to be the kind of sword madman who uses attack instead of defense, uses attack to break defense, and uses attack to cut the path of attack.

Tell me, what the hell has happened to you? Open the sky at every turn, defy the sky, go against the sky, let's talk about it in detail

I've watched more than half of it, so it's okay. There are just a few things I don't understand about the plot so far (maybe I missed something)... 1) The Spiritual Cult is desperately trying to catch the protagonist's younger brother just to break through to the fourth level. Does it mean that sacrificing the first-level protagonist's brother can allow many third-level priests to be promoted to the fourth level at the same time? If not, why haven't we seen the competition within the Spiritual Religion? To be fair, there would be several third-level priests rushing to kidnap him from the beginning. 2) If I remember correctly, the protagonist's brother is the material for the fourth-level advancement path, but the priests seemed to think it was unimportant and left it to the first-level men to handle it. But after the accident, he sent the second level to finally go up. This also means that the protagonist's brother, the person who is used as a sacrifice, is particularly important, which is too contradictory. So now the plot is a typical famous scene of upgrading and killing monsters, but there is no reasonable reason to explain this plot direction. 3) The official knew that the protagonist's brother was being targeted, so why did they initially send the protagonist's brother to go to his brother, an "ordinary person"? His brother's character is a potential stock who has awakened a very powerful sequence. Someone was sent to protect him from behind, which was also a second level, but it was obviously not enough. The subsequent plot has always shown how powerful the mysterious strong man is. The purpose of the official organization is to guess how powerful the mysterious strong man is. The spiritual sect is rushing to kill people from low to high to let everyone know how powerful the mysterious strong man is. Just Finally, I feel that the current map is a bit small, and now it basically describes the sword hall, back mountain, and park in the suburbs. The protagonist is also summed up in one stroke when he goes shopping in the suburbs.

The protagonist's swordsmanship is the Japanese swordsmanship! You can take a look if you like it! No wonder I saw so many readers talking about slashing! What a pity, I thought it was traditional swordsmanship!

After looking at it for a while, it didn't make much sense. It's not as good as being invincible if you're stuck on upgrades. Every time I try to level up and fight just enough monsters, is it interesting?

If the food is tasteless, it would be a pity to throw it away. Teaching one class will earn you 1 point. Did the protagonist teach 1 class every day? Video teaching is all good, online courses are sold, and even basic teaching is free. At ten o'clock a day, in a month, you can reach level 6 or above When my brother moved in, enemies kept coming, first level, second level, and he also worked on upgrade routines, just enough to fight in seconds... And the protagonist is like a masochist, not leveling up one level at a time, just saving up, insisting on suffering Introducing the background of the world, the woman, wind sequence, is stronger than the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot be found eavesdropping outside the door...

You might as well use Japan as the background. Our Chinese swords are swords and knives are knives. You can chop them here and there at every turn. But here they are knives. Only Japanese knives are called swords. That one is for chopping back and forth

It's a bit like the kendo gym in my childhood. I suggest you check the author carefully.

The protagonist's behavior of saving points is incomprehensible

The lines in this book are really classic! 1 Damn it, your opponent is me 2 Devil, you are the devil 3 How can you be so strong, I don't believe it 4 The villain said after being unable to defeat the murderer: How dare you kill me? You need to know xxxxxx

The hero's combat power is stuck. The protagonist won't come to the enemy unless he upgrades. Then the hero's younger brother says that he is protecting the hero and keeps causing trouble for the hero. Officially, it's not about combat power, but his investigative ability is just too much.

，，，，，,，，，，，，，，，Only two or three moves in the book can be said to be a swordsman, such as knee-lifting. The author can actually use basic swordsmanship as a skill, footwork as a skill, and Qi training as a skill. Only in this way can it be more consistent with the title of Sword Master. With the development like this in the book now, it feels more like an assassin, who pursues one-hit kills with his moves.                                                                                                                                                           but the author may have confused the swords of xiaozhi and our chinese swords. I hope the author can make appropriate adjustments later so that this Juggernaut system can live up to its name.

After reading ten chapters, the island Mandarin language series, the system is embarrassing

I have read a few chapters, and it is a novel with the theme of kendo. However, the kendo described in it rarely lacks the delicate and exciting side, but it is a lot of irrelevant words. Moreover, the protagonist's mediocre thinking and IQ growth process is completely based on the so-called cheat cheats. It has no characteristics of its own and lacks vitality. There is a spirit missing. The protagonist is a completely passive existence. You can watch it.

I gave up after reading the second chapter. The author is probably from Nantong. A teenage high school boy can call me brother or brother by name, but he has to call me brother in a stupid way. I am really convinced that two men call me brother. And his younger brother's female teacher called her Brother Su when we met for the first time. Oh, I'm convinced. Has the author never been out or communicated with anyone? Have you ever seen a girl, especially a teacher, call you Brother Su when they meet for the first time? Isn't this a term of endearment between lovers and male and female friends? And the main character is a kendo gym instructor. This may be due to my lack of experience and understanding. Maybe it is a stereotype. The scene of wearing that kind of clothes, wearing that kind of helmet, and using a wooden sword to practice, I feel that this thing smells like a little Japanese devil.        ，

It's really disgusting to see that "teacher" mouthing off Brother Su.

This book is particularly beautiful. The protagonist has a changeable personality. One moment he is upright and upright, and the next moment he is playful and smiling. In the morning, he said he wanted to be a good person, but in the evening he stole money. The reason was that he stole the other person's money to give him face.

This book is no longer about the plot of the novel. Regardless of whether it is subjectively good-looking or not, there are a lot of wrong sentences and typos. The author should write the composition first.

The protagonist has no character at all, he doesn't look like a protagonist at all.

There are really too many prefaces and subtitles. While talking about how awesome he was, he turned around and changed his mind. . . .

If you change the story address to Area 11, then what you wrote makes sense. Unfortunately, the swords here are not mainly used in your way. It is better to change it to sword fighting.

A good-for-nothing protagonist, if he has a right mind, he will find ways to get more points, such as secretly killing cultists to get money to open his own martial arts gym and take more classes. . .

It felt very watery in the middle, and became more watery towards the end. The plot felt like it was developed for the sake of development, and the character portrayal was also weak. None of the characters could leave an impression, which was quite disappointing.

The author's name shall be used, including but not limited to the name of the force, the name of the character, and the name of the skill. Now that there is an AI, it would be a good idea to describe the characteristics and let the AI ​​name it.

The more you write, the more messy it becomes. If it doesn't work, you ask deepseek to polish it for you. The writing is so messed up. After I read Chapter 271, I feel like I can't understand it anymore. White Lotus, things are getting tough. I have to improve myself quickly and have a hand in everything. I really feel that the author's mind is too messy and he doesn't understand what the readers want to see. You want to write a novel just to write what you want to write. You don't care about the grades or what the readers think. I didn't say that. The problem now is that I am less and less interested in reading. The fundamental reason is that Chapter 2670 is written in such a way that I don't understand why you care so much about the life and death of the Crow. You are still writing on a mission. What are you doing? A sense of mission? I am speechless. I should write or not, but I should keep writing. You don't understand that if you create a group, you usually take a look at the thoughts of the readers in the group, and then you have to think about it and listen to the advice before you can eat enough.

It feels like a running account, no emotional description, no character portrayal, basic upgrade, enemies come, fight is over, then one or two chapters of nonsense, then upgrade again and again

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