Pixel Simulation: I Can Take Out the Game Magic Weapon

Author Baby, the following is not a criticism of you, just some suggestions. When a book is written, the important thing is not just the results, but the growth. I am thinking about writing this subject for me, how should I write it? How to write if you haven't watched "God Simulator", and how to write if you have watched it? When you haven't read it, you may write it like the author, focusing on one game...😂 But you may find out after a few chapters that there is no interactivity, no tension, and no depth of plot... So writing it like this is not an excellent way of unfolding it here. Comparing the two books, the biggest difference is the world view and the positioning of the protagonist. God, the reality has changed from a stand-alone game to an online game, so that both reality and the game have plot tension. On this point, Lu is an old author. Many readers say it is poisonous, but he is firm. Because if you don't write it this way, the plot will be half as deep and not exciting enough. Better poisonous than plain. Being mediocre is a capital crime, being poisonous is not. The protagonist is the god in the game, and his villains worship him in various ways. To a certain extent, the particularity and uniqueness of the protagonist are satisfied. Xian, the world view unfolds slowly. The protagonist is basically a camera and observer in the game. Lack of effective interaction with villains. It does not reflect the identity of "library owner". Without interaction, the villain NPC feeling will be very strong. The worldview is already like this, there is nothing we can do about it. Only slightly strengthens the importance of the protagonist. The author is so honest and writes strictly according to the game flow... But games and novels are different. The number of words is still short, and the text can be revised: Increase the protagonist's specialness and operability - There is a character in the game, and he usually retreats in the sect. It is the legend of the sect. He slightly follows the Dihua route, and everyone's imagination~ In this way, there is a deterrent, and lazy villains can quickly correct themselves. The magic weapon may also be used in the game as the sect's trump card. (The biggest problem is that this setting can only take out magic weapons + the protagonist has no strong needs... It takes things that are not helpful to the construction of the sect and are dispensable and have no alternatives in reality. It's very useless.) You can't slowly cultivate the villain like the game does, it would be so boring. Or the time flow in the game needs to be accelerated. And what we want to see is the immortal sect, not the low martial arts of mortals. Of course, so much has been written, the tone has been set. I won't push it anymore, because it's useless. As a newbie, it's not easy. Come on, baby~

1. Don't write about reality. Bringing self-aware creatures from games to reality is actually quite toxic. Especially since it is not yet completely loyal to you. It's even more poisonous to be able to speak. 2. Increase the protagonist's choice. The main character's involvement so far is too low. You can add a library owner suggestion option. For example, when Ye Bufan encounters a certain opportunity, a suggestion from the museum owner pops up. The protagonist can choose one or none of them. Ye Bufan can choose not to listen or just refer to it. (Be careful when writing this, it may become a poisonous point) 3. Take a few representative characters and describe them in the first person. Contrast the protagonist or increase the authenticity of details through description of character environment and psychological description. It's a bonus if this is well written.

No, I've been a eunuch for four days, and I can still read the daily guide. I'm speechless😓

Most authors in this type of book put the cart before the horse There is no need to focus on reality and no need to make money. After that, get a house magic weapon, clothes magic weapon, and various magic weapons Now that the house is sold, you can directly use the magic weapon to go wherever you want (even to the universe) As for food, spiritual beasts, monsters, spiritual fruits, spiritual rice and other various seeds Eating it can also strengthen

Just finished voting and became a eunuch? I feel like I can write it well.

Most of them should be directed at your simulated business. If you don't write down your simulated business in detail, the proportion of reality is too great.

I don't understand, is it the same whether there is a protagonist or not, is he just a spectator? The operability is too low

What is the role of the protagonist in the simulation? Except for some basic low-level decisions that can be interacted with, most of the events you describe are just cameras without any interaction. In the simulation game, except for mentioning the identity of the protagonist from time to time, there is no interaction consistent with this identity. What's more, you, the owner, are still the player himself, and the result is that there is no game interaction that is consistent with the player.

I have read a few chapters and found it to be a good Taneda-ryu novel. The plot and dialogue between the characters are good. I just hope that the plot in the real world will not fall into clichés, such as live broadcasts to show off, heroes saving beauties, intrigues and other cheesy plots. You can have holy manifestations in front of people, but not too many.

I don't understand why I need to bind the exercises when taking elixirs?

Why eunuchs😡

The title of this book has been changed. It's better to just call it Immortal Sect Story than the current title.

If you want to put aside other novels and get that magic weapon for climbing mountains, the second chapter will be about climbing Mount Tai.

The author's naming skills are really good, but I have to say that it's getting worse and worse.

Let's take a look at the strongest founder of the game. Although he is a bit tough, he is more mature than you

I'm speechless, why would you recommend a book that has been updated to me?

Please support this kind of business simulation novels