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Who wants to see the nonsense about the national football team? It only takes a few pennies to avoid wearing down everyone's patience.
See how to bond with teammates and increase their vision? Does anyone still write like this now?
There are too many articles about national football games. Looking at the water, to be honest, I don't want to read them anymore. Now, why do you still write so much about national football? In sports novels, I don't have the patience to feel the protagonist grow up slowly. Instead, I want the protagonist to grow in every game and win the championship and the golden ball. Anyway, I am quite utilitarian.
Shennong is here
It's good to write about the national team, but this does not increase the status of teammates or reduce the status of opponents, but increases (decreases) the status of the protagonist and an opponent at the same time. This is still a bit poisonous!
The writing style of some paragraphs is online, which is old-fashioned, but some of them really make people doubt that they have sold their account. . 😅 It was good at first, it felt like there was finally something new in the football area, and the old thing was rejuvenated, but the more I looked at it, the more and more something was wrong... The first one was written by a new author with a curse word at the beginning, and the subsequent lines were also very stiff MLG, and There are various words that are replaced with capital letters, which is completely different from the experience of the old author, who can easily avoid harmony by using vocabulary... The other is a large amount of female video content. First, it is set that the golden finger must touch someone, and the protagonist touches the teammates of the National Youth Team in a gay manner, and then is thought to be gay, The follow-up won, the protagonist took off his shirt, wrote about abs, how the female audience screamed, The manager also, smelled like a woman, and then she was a lesbian, teasing the protagonist in various ways, The scene was full, but it was completely disconnected from the overall content of the entire article. It was like suddenly writing an American comic in a football article, about a bisexual female superhero with a chaotic private life. After teasing her, she said to her girlfriend: Yes, the protagonist is so innocent... 🤤 For a moment, I wanted to quit and confirm whether I was there or not. Female channel... There is also the most typical female channel hero, In the interview, the reporter used the word "little milk dog" to the male protagonist... This is really too offensive...🤤 Part of the writing has the smell of an old book , Part of it is very poisonous, and it is so poisonous that it does not match the writing style of some paragraphs. It is a cheat, a joke, and it is rare and far beyond the average level of the football area. The whole article is extremely fragmented, as if several people with different positions are writing at the same time, and they are not interchangeable. , Or I left the scene after the beginning, I wrote a few chapters and the plot was not over yet. After the first few hundred words, the person suddenly went to the toilet, changed to another person, and then changed back again... If it were the original author, he probably put a lot of effort into learning about youth culture. At first, it was like praising the author, but there were so many weird places in other places that it was so fierce that I lost the idea of praising him. From "How can I hide it when it's so good, ah, the football area is so dark", it almost turned into "like a cat". . . First of all, it was supposed to be this author, Wu Mian Zhi Bai. In the previous books, he was almost the best at character portrayal in the football area. The interactions and chemical reactions between the characters in this book were very strange and torn in the description. The more I read, the more I doubted the sales... The most obvious thing is the split in positioning. Like portraying the role of an ugly villain based on the villain, a certain Lin, writes about how ugly the plot against the protagonist is, making people feel that "these sea cucumbers don't deserve to win"... But after a few chapters... He becomes upright, starts to speak tsundere lines, and becomes bonded with the protagonist... 😅? ? At the same time, another certain center also wrote about the protagonist helping the opponent first, but the opponent looked like a big fool, like "repaying a favor with a drop of water", but he turned around and turned out to be a treacherous villain, and then he said all kinds of villain quotes... He disappeared after that, and there was no follow-up. There was no description of the ending. Complete It is completely inconsistent with the normal way of writing evil in Internet articles... The protagonist, in the early stage, was completely described as silly and sweet, just like Ronaldinho. He even clearly wrote in the narration and various descriptions that "the protagonist does not understand the ways of the world" and "the protagonist did not understand and thought that everyone was hugging each other, so he kept passing the ball to himself." Then, when it was the finals, I just wrote "The protagonist is no longer pretending to be cool". When I got back, I called and talked about how to handle the shoes, and I was very thoughtful. . . No, how could your narration deceive the readers by the way? . 🤤 Normally, there would be hints in the narration, right? It implies that the protagonist is actually not stupid... 😅But not at all, it is very weird. . It feels like the character design has collapsed, and even the character design has been changed at random. The female channel is so crazy, regardless of the rationality of the characters and plot settings, it can't be done elsewhere. . Some articles are still online, but there are so many weird contents that people have to suspect that the account is sold again. Same as the previous one, not only the writing style and quality have dropped significantly, but the writing style is not so obvious and has not declined. To the level of a novice, but on the other hand, there is a very abrupt and obvious female-oriented writing stance, and a lack of sense of poisonous points, if it was the original author, he would have been there in a few years Only by writing can the writing style not deteriorate too much, but on the other hand, the smell of poisonous spots has deteriorated so much, and it cannot be explained. There are all kinds of unreasonable things. Either the author was originally a woman, or the man disappeared for a few years to play on female channels...[ Fn=23] Either it is more reasonable, it can also explain that the emerging jokes and various content are well written, that is, the author's niece came over to be a consultant, and also ghost-wrote part of the content, which caused the female channel to smell...
The feud between Dong and Sun was very popular before. Sun was a snake oil, so he came on the bench. The funny thing is that he is a famous player 😁😁😁. Of course, behind the famous players are the vast number of fans in China. Otherwise, he could be a famous player. He is a snake oil. To put it bluntly, he can order everything, but he is not good at it.
It's a retarded article. You write well about the national football team. You write like a retarded person.
Come on, big brother who writes about the national football team 🤐
Author, could you make the protagonist smarter? In this terrible environment of the national football team, write the protagonist as a novice?
It's well written. Anyway, just don't make the protagonist too invincible later on.