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Let's talk about the advantages first. The logic is tight. The protagonist's strength is reasonable, but not too strong but not too strong. There are no plots and intrigues, and there is no annoying forced pretense. In addition, it is an unsystematic article, which is very suitable for me. Let's talk about the shortcomings next. The first bad point of this book is the emotional scene. The other points are nothing. The heroine and the emotional line appear too abruptly, and it feels like giving away the daughter forcibly. But the biggest poisonous point of this book is not the emotional line, but the plot of the protagonist participating in the National Olympics for the first time. The protagonist was directly blamed for being unpatriotic just because he did not participate in an unimportant event like the Four Nations. He suffered so many grievances, but just because of a deep bow and so-called various memories, he let it go so easily and returned to his country to enter the Olympics. It felt like the protagonist was too much of a virgin at that time and had no self-esteem at all. Even if the above is ignored, in the case where the National Olympics is only a theoretical possibility, if the protagonist returns to the country normally, he can only be a fig leaf or a scapegoat, and cannot even earn the reputation of bringing glory to the country. The protagonist who knows this in advance agrees to return to the country, which simply sets the lower limit of IQ. Even if the protagonist couldn't think of it under the circumstances at that time, this is unacceptable to the readers. Of course, the author probably couldn't accept this, so he had to forcefully write what was only a theoretical possibility into reality. Moreover, due to the wrong timing, there were a few more chapters that the author didn't want to write, and the readers didn't want to read, about the intrigues within the Olympic team for status. This poisonous point is not only extremely poisonous in itself, but also affects the development of the subsequent plot, adding two more dissuading points out of thin air. Comprehensive evaluation: Although it is anticlimactic, it is worth reading. It is especially suitable for readers who hate systematic writing. However, it is recommended to skip all the emotional lines in the first hundred chapters and all the plots in which the protagonist returns to China for the first time to compete.

I don't know if you can see me talking here or in the comments section. This is my first time reading a football article. If you read my comments in the book, you will know. What you wrote makes me want to watch the Premier League. Then you told me that I was going to finish the book? I almost cried, brother. I also hope to play in the Champions League for a few more times. Your breathing and rhythm are very good, and you explain some history and background very clearly. I never expected you to tell me you don't watch football? Please, write more, write more. And if you want to learn, I recommend you and his books, Big Eggplant with Minced Pork, "The Ace Godfather in Sports" and "Invincible in Basketball". The breathing rhythm and competition life of these books are all very well balanced. The same sentence, brother, write more, write more. 🙏🙏🙏

After this Olympic Games, can we write less about the national team? First of all, the reality of Chinese football is so disgusting and uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, no club would let its main goalkeeper go home every now and then or go all the way to Asia to participate in the so-called World Youth Championship, National Olympic Qualifiers, World Cup Qualifiers (and N-Tournaments later), Asian Cup, Four Nations Invitational Tournament. The experience at Chelsea is actually very obvious. Don't let you go home despite the league and Champions League. It would be strange if they don't replace them.

50% Write emotional dramas about women 😰

The word count is too few! Keep it first...

I don't know what the author is thinking. . . While talking about being a bestseller, he also asked the protagonist to compete in the National Olympics. . . Isn't this contradictory? Anyway, I won't order it for the time being.

You've already written a YY sports article, and you haven't given the protagonist a golden finger, so how can you feel any sense of expectation? Even if you add a super flexible talent, dynamic vision, or rewind time by five seconds or something, it will be fine.

I tell the truth. I feel like I've been cheated. After subscribing, you will enter the plot of the huge pit. I'm autistic. Purely personal opinion, light spray.

Emotional scenes don't matter, just don't be pretentious. I'm a man who doesn't watch football to watch pretentiousness, right?

A very good goalkeeper article, I hope I can keep writing it. Judging from the foreshadowing laid in the early stage, it seems that he will be on the same team as Ibrahimovic? That should be the 2006 Calciopoli, which happened to be another decisive battle for me in the 2007 Champions League. I remember that Liverpool limited Kaka very well in that game (there was also the reason why An Pang used Kaka as a cover to cover Pippo), but Liverpool actually had a lot more opportunities than me on the field, but they lacked a terminator who could seize opportunities. However, at that time, Ibrahimovic was far from his peak. His ability to grab points and headers in front of the goal had not been developed very much. His shooting skills were actually average. He could score fairy goals, but he would miss some difficult goals. His body had not been strengthened. In the slow pace of Serie A, he could still solve problems with a flash of inspiration. In the fast-paced and strong confrontation environment of the Premier League, he would probably be as invisible as playing in the Champions League...

I think it's very well written. I just discovered this book a few days ago. I gave a reward of 5,000. I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. Also, does the author have a QQ account or group?

This heroine is off-putting, please replace her with Nangong

First time posting on Football Articles! Hope you can stick with it! The last book I read about goalkeepers was about atypical goalkeepers, and they can be appendixed! Hope you can persist! Daily recommendation votes for you

These chapters of National Football League really made me vomit. I'll read it again when I finish writing this chapter.

Cherish football and stay away from women

The emotional scenes are so disgustingly written. Can women not write those two points?

Brother, please don't let these two bitches appear again, okay? 😭 How can they help you play football? A man who is so decisive in playing football should not be left behind in his feelings. Since he has made a good choice, don't show any sunshine to this Nangong, unless you have a harem.

To be honest, there are not many novels about goalkeepers on Qidian and other websites. They basically rely on the system. This book is quite normal, but too many descriptions of the national team, youth team, and Olympic team are too annoying. We all know that as a Chinese player, we cannot avoid the bad things of the national pigs, and we understand the author's patriotism. But since you don't rely on the system, be realistic. Can you lead the national pigs? How can we always rely on fantasy? Originally it was fully booked, but the increasing number of descriptions of the national pig makes people feel powerless. Just keep it for now and see when you can finish writing about the national pig. Skip reading.

I gave it up, there are too many chapters about the national football team, it's a very good book. This approach of the author and the protagonist is nothing more than to protect a corrupt bastard who has been involved in match-fixing. An old fan who has been heartbroken by the national football team for more than 20 years advises, write less and do more! Goodbye author.

😰This one. . . . After reading a hundred chapters, how can I put it? It's not that you can't write emotional scenes in sports and competitive novels, but you have to grasp the proportions, and as a romance, the emotions are still relatively rough, because there are too few descriptions of the woman's psychological activities. You can only write about the heroine from the perspective of the protagonist in one word. "Making" separates the previous passion that readers got from sports and suddenly brings them into a third-rate youth drama. It's hard not to be offended by this kind of writing. It's like the author is forcing you to realize that she is the heroine of this book, but he can't write anything about her that makes her endearing. The result is that the feeling is not completely satisfying, and the emotions are hard to relate to.

In fact, Dehua was a complete rough guy when he first came to the car. His ball-stopping was really at the national football level (even after the technology was improved later, it could only be said to be adequate). A large part of the reason for his technical growth was due to the arrival of Sheva (Dehua said in public more than once that he and Sheva He was most comfortable when playing together, and he learned a lot from Sheva). After Sheva came to the car, Dehua's shooting, grabbing points, and ability to involve the opponent's defenders in moving positions can be said to have improved by leaps and bounds. That's why he later surpassed Rooney to win the best in the Premier League. But he really has nothing to do with Vidic and Lucio. He will become invisible when he encounters these two people...

In fact, it's not impossible to write emotional dramas. You can write about a big star with her own fans, but a passerby heroine can't attract people, and it's okay to write about daily shit, but it's uncomfortable to write this.

Can you really become awesome without cheating? ? ? How did you get involved? 0

I can't remember how long it's been since I watched a men's football match, but I still felt heartbroken when I read the plot about returning to China in the book and wanted to curse. There are indeed many football people who work hard and put in a lot of effort, and those of the older generation are admirable. The reality is that the player base is getting smaller and smaller. . . With fewer people playing football, there will be fewer talents. On TV, there are still those free-for-alls because there are no good ones to choose. I am waiting for ** to have fun reading the book and the pictures. I just ask the author to write less heart-breaking plots. The national football team does not need to be written too deeply. At least those who read the book are pseudo-fans.

I really like the goalkeeper type 1. This position requires the most experience. Most good goalkeepers are trained from bad teams, and European goalkeepers have solid basic skills. As long as they play more games, their talents are easy to discover, so major leagues will not lack two or three goals. The protagonist is only 18 and can already make his mark in the Premier League. How can he upgrade in the future? Apart from a few wealthy families, is there anywhere else to go? 2. When defending, the goalkeeper has the greatest power and needs the cooperation of the defender the most. Therefore, in the team, the most stable positions are the goalkeeper and the defender. The three goalkeepers take turns to rest. What is the situation? Do you still want the defender to live? 3. The goalkeeper can only be used as a surprise player when participating in the attack. After all, when the ball is passed to the frontcourt, the offensive team has fewer people and is at a disadvantage. It is easy to lose the ball and cause a passive situation on the scene.

Looking at the cover, I thought it was a book from five or six years ago. Take a look and come back to comment.

Labor certificate, Ranieri looks after Chinese people, etc. There are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain...

I subscribed for 100 chapters first and found that there were many who didn't write about football, which was a waste of money.

If you really don't understand, it means you don't understand, so don't enter.

Goalkeeper article? Is it the kind of novel where a super goalkeeper leads the national football team and scores a penalty shootout by stalling for time? And then you get the Hercules Cup?