Even a Copycat Can Be Righteous

I can read it, but I personally found the first few chapters a bit confusing. My literary literacy is average, just my personal opinion.

Everyone writes that bandits are righteous and care for their subordinates like sons. Can't there be a real bandit who is ungrateful, duplicitous and does all kinds of evil?

It looks like this, fierce, with the left ear a little flat

There are too few people! I feel like it's well written!

After reading the first three chapters, I couldn't help but quit and complain. The whole opening is a mess. The author's writing is messy, the protagonist's behavior is messy, and even the supporting character's behavior is messy. It's completely inexplicable!

Can any Shen Nong tell me how it works?

To be honest, what is written next? You won't be able to write it once you get to the high-end game?

The first three chapters are like prose. I can't understand what is written. What is the golden finger?

How to say it? Does a small matter have to be divided into several chapters? Each chapter is so short!

Overall, it's pretty good, but the sentences still need to be revised, and there are a lot of typos and bad sentences.