Even a Copycat Can Be Righteous

It's readable, but I personally found the first few chapters a bit confusing. My literary skills are average, this is just my personal opinion, please forgive me.

Every bandit they write about is a paragon of loyalty and righteousness, treating their men like sons. Can't they come up with a more realistic bandit who is ungrateful, two-faced, and utterly wicked?

This is roughly what it looks like: fierce-looking, with a slightly droopy left ear.

There are so few people here! It seems well-written!

After reading the first three chapters, I couldn't help but exit and rant. The entire opening is just chaotic. The author's writing is chaotic, the protagonist's actions are chaotic, even the minor characters' actions are chaotic—it's all completely inexplicable!

Anyone have any stories about Shennong?

Honestly, what was written after that? Do you not know how to write when it comes to high-level games?

The first three chapters are like prose; I couldn't understand what they were about at all. What is a "golden finger"?

How should I put it? Why does such a small matter have to be divided into several chapters? And each chapter is so short!

Overall it's not bad, but the sentences need some revision; there are quite a few typos and grammatical errors.