A Quanzhen Novice Taoist from the Start

Because readers said they should remember this plot point and that plot point. The protagonist didn't specifically go to any world to seek opportunities; he first spent sixteen years in Zhongnan Mountain, absorbing Taoist scriptures. For those sixteen years, he mostly focused on cultivating Taoism and practicing martial arts, rather than constantly thinking about seizing opportunities from others.

Seriously, that's enough. Everyone knows your protagonist is a naive Taoist who is single-mindedly immersed in the Great Dao and doesn't care about worldly affairs. Look at what you've been writing lately. Are you just trying to disgust people? You let people who could be slapped to death go by again and again. You're just being stubborn. Are you thinking of waiting for people like Wuming Xiong Ba Feng Yun to come out so you can put on a show again?

The plot is alright, but the author mistakenly takes slapstick for humor. Not only is it unfunny, but it also severely impacts the reading experience, causing the story to plummet from its peak to its lowest point. It's utterly superfluous; it's now considered dry grass. If it weren't for all that nonsensical dialogue, it could be considered a gem.

The story was originally about a kind-hearted Taoist priest who becomes an immortal, but it's really well-written. I haven't read such a refreshing and unconventional book in a long time.

The protagonist seems a bit too saintly. It wasn't obvious at first in The Return of the Condor Heroes, but it became very clear after his first failed ascension in the Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils world. People harm you, you let them go, and then they cause you a major crisis. It's a bit toxic.

First, let's clarify one premise: this book is a masterpiece, if not a divine one. Then I'll share some of my own thoughts. Since I've been following the updates, I think I have some authority to speak on this (please be gentle with your criticism). This is also a brief introduction for new readers. We're currently in the third world.

I don't know what others think, but I'll share my own thoughts. The first chapter of the main story was quite good, but after ascension, the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's level, deliberately made the protagonist blind, and deliberately gave the protagonist an original female character to share both good and bad fortune.

I only read the Legend of the Condor Heroes arc; the later parts got less interesting, so after flipping through the table of contents, I was too lazy to subscribe.

Shennong can go there, and so can you!

I couldn't continue reading when I got to the part describing Zhu Bajie. Zhu Bajie can be bad, he can be lazy. But to portray him as having no intelligence was really hard to bear.