The World Restarts

I don't know that there is something wrong with the logic of this novel. The official will still tolerate such people. People with talents but mental problems are more harmful. Will they not prevent and deal with them in advance? Later, I saw a group to train them. This is the official screening of talents for villains and then adding obstacles to themselves. There is a bug in his logic. No normal person would think like this.

There have been too many books published by old authors in the past few months. Now Qidian is not the same recommendation mechanism as before. If the book is not good, it will really become popular.

A new book has been released, but there is no news at all. Is Seven Points planning to abandon some established authors?

Is this platinum? No one

Xiaodao is an old author. Very cool. The books are not bad either. I read his novel a long time ago. But I can't read any of his books without exception. No surprises. I couldn't even get through five chapters of this book. Maybe the radio wave is wrong. Come up and kneel down to thank you for saving your life. It's actually quite normal. But it just feels awkward.

They always emphasize that the protagonist's country is the strongest. Why do they always write about other countries that cause trouble in the country and kill geniuses and slap them in the face? I don't see anyone fighting back. How powerful is this country?

After reading the first five chapters, I deeply realized how wise the orphan setting is. It's not that you are violent, but the reality is that no matter how you deal with it, you can only achieve "non-toxicity". Once you make a mistake, it will be a big poisonous point. It's better to be set up as an orphan and be complained about. It won't affect anything at all, and you can still lie about what this chapter says.

Ignore the disgusting sensationalism, especially the protagonist and his mother, they are still edible

In fact, the author writes according to the atmosphere in the previous dream, the secret realm is dangerous, and then compresses the human living environment to give people a sense of tense atmosphere. What he is writing now is purely a secret realm equivalent to a copy. The pig's feet are casually entered, and the theme is not clear. It is like a running account. The plot develops painlessly and the pig's feet are followed step by step. It feels a bit broken.

Your readers are older and more experienced. But you are still writing nonsense...

Nowadays, novels are full of plots like this, where you are jealous of the protagonist for no reason, and then look for trouble, while the protagonist is pretending to be cool. It makes me sick after watching it and I can't stand it anymore.

Book friends, when did the villain die in the beginning? Please @ me for a moment. I'll come back to see 🙂 He's still a little bit unbearable. It's so disgusting.

1. The protagonist has a bad personality and does not fit in with Goldfinger (referring to the dream) 2. The plot advancement is blunt, the villain's insertion is blunt, and the protagonist's methods are not good (this is because the dream is too cheating, which makes my expectations too high) 3. There are too many daily life, although Zhang Lin wants the protagonist to be gregarious, but it is too gregarious. Those few people are like licking dogs and taking the protagonist with them, emmmmmmm

If it doesn't change, it will become a thing of the past.

I'm a little disappointed... If it was written seven or eight years ago, it would have been good, but now... It's hard to describe... I was poisoned by the zombie secret realm summoned by the three villain monks at the beginning. Such a weak villain didn't know why they summoned the secret realm... Then they summoned an absolute crusher? ? Huh? ! ! Your opening is not an invincible article, right? You are contradicting yourself. You are poisoned to death.

No, author, what's the point of writing about Zhang Qi, a psychopath? ? It's just disgusting, right?

Originally, the book was quite good, but if I had to maintain such a high ratio of spirit stones to money, it would cost more than 1,000 spirit stones to upgrade to 5, which is a small target in RMB. I then obtained nearly 20,000 spirit stones before I could reach 6. Upgrading is so difficult, how did other freshmen and sophomores advance so quickly? And if you have 20,000 spirit stones and you can't buy elixirs, you have to suck them directly? The monetary system is in chaos

In the 2009 routine, a person like Zhang Lin is too low-level as a villain. The villain also needs his own charm. It is not interesting to write him as an unjust and unfilial person.

Boss, I've read more than 20 chapters of your book's formula and I've already guessed the next 400 chapters. The writing is very good. This content must have been written more than 10 years ago. Subscriptions will not be high and data will not be good. It must be changed drastically, otherwise it will only be a eunuch. That glare brings hatred, and the whole world is targeting the protagonist. It's so embarrassing to watch now. The talent is too strong and there is no possibility of cultivation. In a word, your writing style is too dull and uncreative.

No, this Zhang is so disgusting, kill him quickly

I feel like this ability is refreshed every day, which is too redundant.

Damn it Platinum Pogai

Are you starting a harem again? Will you die if you don't have a harem?

As long as the book quality is good, your grades will definitely improve. Just like Chi Xin Xun Tian only had a few dozen subscriptions when he first started writing hundreds of thousands of words (the author said it himself). Now it is a five-star masterpiece plus the number one in the category of immortals and heroes, and one book canonize gods.

It's better to start with Orphans. Your mother is writing about a person from the old era. After living in the new era for decades, she has experienced life and death and is still thinking about the old era. It's really sad. Writing this kind of stuff will only disgust people. My husband died in order to protect the family and didn't want the child to practice. The child almost died in an accident and still didn't want him to practice. Real people know that physical exercise is good. If you write something like this, this novel can only be classified as a mentally retarded novel. Damn, go away.

The author who often stayed up late to read in high school

What a pity, is the Platinum Master so worthless now?

Sir, how many words do you plan to write?

There is a saying that the writing style is relatively immature and not good enough.

Look at the introduction, is this unlimited streaming?