I Am the Sword Fairy

The author is writing about swordsmen and swordsmen. I can't stand it when I see the boat going to the capital. I can't control the writing of immortality at all. The writing style is so big that it's useless. Or I can just write about martial arts and add some elements of immortality. It's not on the same level at all. It's just forced and uncomfortable to read.

Uncle Dao has changed, and this book [Sword Immortal] has become more profound. In the past, all the fantasy novels were hot-blooded novels, which were really interesting to read. As a fan of "Sky Blade", I felt a little regretful when I saw the works of Uncle Dao after "Borderless". Finally, Uncle Knife came out of the mountain and waited for the [real world], but many urban legends cannot be written. Even though I have read it and subscribed to the full version, it is still a bit regretful. The rhythm of this book [Sword Immortal] is really natural, very comfortable, deeper, more stable and thicker. I believe readers who feel the same way as me (those of us who used to be readers of Xiaobai Wen) hope that Uncle Dao will make steady progress and create another good work that surpasses the Sky-Slaying Blade.

Knife, come on! I look forward to good results for the new book. After all, Xiaodao's book has smooth writing, clear narrative, and interesting stories with ups and downs.

It is recommended to change my name. I am a businessman.

It looks good, the writing is quite fluent, but it feels like official writing

Those who show kindness to the male protagonist are either women or eunuchs, and both the officials and the great demon are women. The only serious male supporting actors have either died or become a thing of the past. On the contrary, if a villain comes to the fairy world, he must be a male. Even if he is a female, he basically has no sense of existence. Sword Fairy Tutu and Sword Spirit turned out to be the same woman, as well as the true spirits of thousands of worlds. . . I insist that this is not a harem novel, but the problem is that I really believe it! I said a few words, but I was afraid that the author and die-hard fans would scold me😭😥 If I talked too much, I was afraid that Brother Dao would become autistic, and I would be so angry that I didn't want to write anymore🤭 I would have panicked even if I didn't say anything, it was too difficult for me😠

I have read thirty chapters, and the first part is okay. Now that I have reached this point, I don't even need to read the back part. I already know the harem stories. I just go to the chapter list. If I simply don't like the harem stories, I will become an immortal, mother-in-law!

Suddenly I saw Xiaodao's novel again, and suddenly I remembered that I had read the novel for more than ten years. At that time, the most impressive ones were Xiaodao's Sword Lingyun, The Naughty Jianke, The Butler's Peach Blossom, Baihe's God of War, and Chengfeng's Trilogy of Seeking Defeat at that time, etc. I don't know when I started to rarely see them. It feels like the great gods at that time gradually disappeared, as if they were falling one by one, hey.

I think it's real water. If you have a golden finger, you can write something if you don't practice for a day. You can just write romance novels.

I don't know how many people left during the section where I taught the maid the exercises.

I've read a lot of novels where swords are used, and now I feel disgusted when I see swords. To be honest, big guys don't use swords very much. Personally, I think the swords of some of the more awesome TV drama bosses (Xiong Ba, Emperor Shitian, Jue Wushen, and Xiang Yu, Zhao Zilong, Li Yuanba, Li Cunxiao in ancient times, watching all kinds of punches and kicks in modern times...) Seem to be just decorations.

It's already 2023, and you're still feeling bitter and resentful? Do you know that you are going to be eliminated like this? ! 😃

He didn't hold back at the beginning. The family his father risked his life to save was like this. If you still live in a leaky thatched hut, that family is also unfaithful. It's okay to force you to live in it, and it will be over with just a word of negligence.

How can I put it? It's a very standard fairy tale. But the sense of age is very strong. If it were 15 or 16 years, I could still watch it, but now I feel nostalgic. To be honest, I started reading online articles in about 2006 and 2007. At that time, cultivators would poop in their pores, and TM was still shitting in their pores in 2023... In addition, there are also things like a time-travelling sister. All the elements are so typical that I almost suspected that I had time-traveled while reading online articles from the past.

A Waterway Chapter 16: Stop again and again. What you are stopping is not the protagonist but the reader. I almost got stopped. There should be many reasons for the tepidness.

There are several novels that I have read, all of which have authors who constantly revise the plots and forcefully create interesting problems because of unsatisfactory results. This one is the only one that can maintain a slow pace. I personally really like it.

Cultivating immortals in the world of martial arts has a huge plot and background, but the first fifty chapters are all about profiteering, which is too utilitarian and not a swordsman at all. The plot is cliched and cannot be regarded as a slow start, but the golden finger has no connection with the plot and the behavioral logic of the characters.

Although... But... This book calls me the Sword Immortal. Isn't the current plot a little off track? To be honest, Song Yu's Dao Palace inheritance is not mainly about swords. In terms of sword immortality alone, he is not as pure as Li Qingyao. His knowledge is mixed, and although he seems to have created some sword moves of his own, his overall evaluation is far from the image of a swordsman. Even if you say that he is an array master, a talisman master, or a physical martial artist, some people will believe him. How does he look like a swordsman? Could it be that after I become an immortal, I will be considered a swordsman if I just go out and kill people with a sword? Then if I change my stance to stabbing someone with a knife, I will be considered a swordsman?

Ordinary people will become stronger if they exercise every day. The protagonist is a weakling who is not as good as ordinary people. It is really a rubbish setting. The protagonist is in a martial arts gym and will manage the martial arts gym in the future, while his sister is working in his house. This setting is not consistent either. The martial arts gym also had to provide logistics, so why couldn't she find a job for her sister? What a rubbish setting. I guess he has a relationship with the hostess.

This book is so good. It looks like a novel written by an author with a lot of social experience. It is very refreshing and humorous. However, after updating for an hour each time, I still finished the novel within 100 yuan. Why is no one reading it? The author is platinum, and his appeal is not very good.

I was thinking about it. The author said that this is a fairy. Why do so many people ignore the word "xia" and only see the word "xian"? And wouldn't it be good to start with the word "xiaxia"? Or is it because you just like fantasy and immortality, so you turn your nose up at martial arts? The most important thing is that the martial arts writing here is also very good. Shouldn't we look forward to the fairy after martial arts? Isn't it reasonable that you want to be gradual and unobtrusive? How come this is going to soar into the sky?

Isn't it a fairy tale? Grinding and chirping all day long. I don't understand, a martial arts world actually has monsters. Is this reasonable?

The biggest joke in this book is that the main character hides his strength. At least that's the case at the beginning. I don't want to read it later.

After reading dozens of chapters, the writing content is okay, but there are some problems with the setting A person who uses a sword should be pure, especially one who is recognized, with a clear heart and decisive killing. This protagonist is very socially tactful, which feels very inconsistent. It seemed like I could see the end all at once. Also, can a prince's association be involved with a martial arts school? People from the two circles overlap, and the prince is not martial arts, which is too inconsistent. A struggle for power and a worldly life.

About the "Nine-Character Mantra" There are three versions of the Nine-Character Mantra currently circulating. The original version is also known as Liujia Secret Blessing, which is derived from the fifth paragraph of "Baopuzi·Neipian Volume 17·Dengshe": "When you enter a famous mountain, you will be kicked off by Jiazi, and you will hang five-color silk ribbons five inches each on the big stone, and you will get what you want. It is said that when you enter the mountain, you should know the secret blessings of Liujia. The blessings are: "Everyone who is facing a battle should march forward in formation." "Chinese Taoist Canon" has a PDF version that can be downloaded and viewed. Japan learned the wrong version of "those who face a battle are all arrayed in front". You may want to see this version in Japanese comics or some Hong Kong movies such as Zombie. Open word (I tried Word03) to convert traditional to simplified and check "Convert Common Vocabulary". The original version of traditional Chinese will be converted to: All those who are fighting against the enemy are good at arrays. This version is an erroneous version that only appeared in recent decades. Please refer to the author.

In fact, I still really want to know the author's mental journey. It is really not easy to create and innovate. I feel that writing a book still requires an outline, just like a good TV series requires a good script. If the screenwriter is not good, no matter how good Fu Huadao is, some people may watch it, but they won't be able to catch up to the end of the show. How would Brother Dao rate his book? How would you rate this book? Full score is ten points. I'll go first, I'll give it a 6.5.

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Platinum Master's writing is indeed good, but the plot is also relatively classic. Is it necessary to change the situation of killing the master and servant in self-defense? The worst of the three agents found by the mastermind behind the scenes can carry thousands of taels of silver notes in his car, and he does not know the value of the seal and has no idea of ​​​​running away. The family property must be turned over several times. The person behind the scenes must have an eye for everything. He cleans the battlefield and takes away the banknotes for fear that he will not be traced. Finally, he deliberately flashes the money to the guards guarding the city for fear that there will be no witnesses.

It's amazing. You really deserve to be a great author. The plot is arranged step by step and the emotional lines are rare and natural.

In terms of plot setting, in the huge thirty-third heaven, among the three spirits and nine rhymes, only one non-human race is inexplicably claiming the throne. What is the background of the human race? Where is the mighty human race? Don't apply the rules of secular aristocratic families to the wealthy cultivators! A pig can live for tens of thousands of years, and tmd will become a spirit and a fairy! What kind of thing has this great clan of cultivating immortals that has been passed down for millions and tens of millions of years not seen before? Can you fool people just by talking nonsense? Forced wisdom! ! ! The drama in these chapters (the Yu family) looks so disgusting!