Demon!

I don't know if it's a real demon. I've read a lot of devil's books, but the writing looks like shit. I'm looking forward to it. I'll take a look first. If it's not a real demon, I'll just start complaining. I don't know how much the author understands the concept of demon. I hope the author can write the concept of demon well. In my understanding, in the later stage, demon is like a virus. As long as the creature has been infected by the demon's information, the protagonist can know it at will. Everything about them can be transformed into clones at will. Even if the protagonist is killed, they can be resurrected in the bodies of these people. In the final stage, it is even more terrifying. Even if you just know the name of the demon, you can be infected by the demon. However, these demon-tainted people are no different from ordinary people. They will be made into clones when the protagonist needs it, or resurrected in them. If the protagonist cannot defeat the enemy, he can directly disperse his body and live in everyone's thoughts.

In the universe, God's will and human principles are the eternal topic of confrontation. I cry to death, Lord Fang Yuan, please take us to fight again.

This dungeon is stinky and long. All the supporting characters and protagonists in the plot have disappeared. The previous dungeons of Zhutianliu with a low power system don't have so many words.

Let the readers know first what the protagonist does. Talking to himself is the lowest form of writing. It cannot capture people's imagination and is boring.

Demons are not evil beings,

The biggest problem is that the pace is too slow, not exciting enough and not magical enough. The current world is full of supporting characters, and the plot of the main world has almost been forgotten. The writing and logic are okay, but the pace is slow and not easy to follow.

It's not like we'll be eunuchs before the first world is finished.

Chapter 6 feels a bit like immortality. Come on, author!

It won't be written as the main plot. If this is the case, then returning to the main world will be very tearing.

The first copy was too slow.

I just said that the introduction is so good, why are there so few collections? After reading it specifically, I found that the author really likes adjectives. Adding a bunch of adjectives to an action can be expanded to four or five lines. The amount of information given on one page may seem like a lot, but in fact it is all useless and makes the reader tired from reading it. Would you like to use your time on the character and plot of this devil?

I saw more than a dozen of them, they were very good.

Just update this in one day. One chapter has 1,200 words, right? If this is the case right after it is released, I won't continue to read it, it's boring. Wait for your eunuch and I will come again

The overall logic of this book is smooth, there are no big flaws in the setting, and the plot structure is reasonable. However, the protagonist is not magical enough, and his behavior is a bit like a conventional underworld cultivator. There is still some fairy spirit in the new world.

Bush, Gomon... 220,000 Words and 100 chapters, but only 40 discussion posts? A little scared 😰