Beautiful Man Paiwa Man

Chapter 20 is written in an incomprehensible way. In the first chapter, it was said that the protagonist had time traveled not long ago. In Chapter 20, it was said that the protagonist had time traveled as a baby. The protagonist was given bloodline by the system not long ago. In the end, it was said that the demon discovered the Spartan bloodline when the protagonist was a baby. So what kind of thing is the system? An enemy is forcibly assigned to the protagonist for no apparent reason, and it completely conflicts with the protagonist's previous settings on how he got his abilities and how he traveled through time.

Ask the author if he could change the main character's name like this. Because the protagonist has a homonymous name for Vergil and the Yama Sword, but his personality is very inconsistent () How can I put it, it makes me feel weird.

Emmmm, if you travel to Marvel and can't surpass the Infinity Stones but rely on the Infinity Stones, it feels like it's all in vain.

I like the subject very much But the name is really too unbearable. There are several problems with this name First of all, it is a homophonic joke. The names are all homophonic, which gives the protagonist a natural funny style, but it uses the ability of a serious, cold and unscrupulous person like Vergil (the name is added with the Yama Sword), which gives a strong sense of fragmentation. Then, I know that there are Chinese people in American comics, but the obvious one is Dante and Tony talk very happily Virgil and Tony talk very happily The two feel completely different, okay?

You might as well change it to Dante, either don't use Virgil's name, or write it in a colder way, with the feeling that he would do whatever it takes to pursue power.

You actually wrote about Pao Wa, okay, no matter you are 💩 or good grass, I have to try it

Well, Capcom has collaborated with Marvel. Vergil's combat power is at level T1. He can single-play Thor without taking any damage and easily destroy the earth.

This kind of subject matter is not something that newcomers can handle. What's more, I don't understand that you always have to use the diaosi character as a persona, instead of speaking seriously. The character of DMC is not a loser but a ruffian with a sense of taste and handsomeness without any embarrassment. What's more, we still apply the Virgil template. I have seen foreign creators such as Dante and others working as live broadcasters or online, as well as AI dubbing. Dante and Nero are very accustomed to electronic products, but I am like an old man at home who is unfamiliar with new era things. It's not easy for my brother to buy a computer. Dante and Nero invited him into the room to chat. It turns out that his microphone was plugged into the wrong hole or he bought a bad product. Dante and Nero taught him how to deal with it. But in the end, my brother was so embarrassed that he chopped the computer into pieces with a dimensional chop. There is also Virgil showing off his own joke like Dante [I am the coming storm], but the result is that the microphone is not done properly, either there is a cacophony or the music is intermittent. Dante said that there was something wrong with Virgil's microphone, but Virgil didn't notice and thought that Dante was shocked by his own exclusive music. In the middle of the game, Virgil disconnected himself, leaving Dante confused. There are also the reactions of Dante and Nero showing Vergil the DMC jokes and so on. This is called fandom. If you want to apply a template, just say so, instead of deliberately blurring the lines and trying to write the original character and create a new personality at the same time. This will only please both sides.

The protagonist is too controlled by others. He is a complete task machine, and there is no detailed information about the protagonist. At the same time, the protagonist is so familiar with Marvel plots that he still lacks money by trading stocks? Forcibly weakening the intelligence, right? Why don't you just wait until Tony kidnaps and buys up his company's stocks? As the title says, polish it again. Recommendation Index★★★☆☆

I'm very sorry that there were a lot of problems with this book in the early stages, because this is the first contracted novel by a new author, who is not very proficient in plot, character design, etc. I can only try to make up for this while learning while writing. However, due to practical factors and ability issues, my response may not be timely. I am very sorry for this. Then, the author also made some modifications to some of the problems in the early stages of the book, including the problematic original Chapter 20 "The King of Demons" and the timeline that appeared in the early stage, the logic of character behavior, and several others. It is only because the author is too naive and his brain is too slow that the modifications are completed today. I deeply apologize for the displeasure caused to readers. Of course, even if it is changed, it is obviously not perfect according to my level. I hope readers will forgive me for this. Ahem, by the way, let's talk about the reason why the update was interrupted for no reason on July 25th. It's very simple. I forgot to time it. But I definitely wrote it, but for readers who have missed a day of reading experience, I have to say that it is a bit ignorant to say nothing. So I added an apology chapter the next day, I hope you can understand. Above. Thank you readers for your companionship and guidance. This is Cat Name Eleven. It will continue to be updated in the future, so it is not a eunuch's declaration.

A serious protagonist, but a gimmick in the beginning, a fashionable and handsome Devil May Cry scoring system, and suddenly during the battle, he started to explain the difference between ground dimensional slashing and aerial slashing 😅

You may say that the two characters of Pig's Foot are strong but still reluctant, but they have to deal with Virgil, and they can't make a show.

Don't understand its content. After reading it, I don't know why I felt uncomfortable. At the beginning, he told a bunch of gangsters who wanted to ask the protagonist for money: If you want it, get it yourself. I just feel that the price has dropped Also, it is for the classic work for SHIELD for money. The protagonist's character does not look like Dante, and it is understandable that he does not look like Vergil, because the protagonist's name is Vergil. There is also the classic addition of mutants Quack, run away

I was looking forward to seeing the fusion of Devil May Cry and American comics, but after reading more than thirty chapters, the plot basically followed the movie, with nothing new, so I won't say more. I mainly want to talk about the combat part. Basically there is no description, just holding a knife, flashing, phantom sword, flashing, space shattering, nothing more. . . When using gloves, I write the name of the skill, and then the enemy falls, and there is no description of where the enemy is hit. The whole thing is too rough, and the battle scenes are all left to the reader's imagination. . . I hope the author can make corrections in the subsequent parts. I won't read it for the time being and wait for readers to reply after reading it. If the subsequent writing is good, I will continue reading it, otherwise it will gather dust on the bookshelf.

You use a brick-throwing man to seduce readers, but the protagonist is not subversive enough. Why not use the power of magnetic field to sway the reader, but the protagonist does not speak the language of the strong?

Why not write about Devil May Cry➕Bayonant Angel?

Why not write about Nero? Ghost hands and gloves are perfect. Don't even need gloves? Ha ha

I insist on complimenting my favorite character, but I don't want to say anything when I try to suppress it.

After seeing Chapter 20, I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away.

There are too few gaps between the background and events, not enough connection, and it looks very messy.

A professional cosplayer of Vergil, right? Vergil, don't say it, don't say it, the cosplay is pretty good! 🤤

Traveling to DC is just like changing the author, there is no plot at all, it just keeps killing and killing.

Does the author feel that it is strange to use the book title number to write the system rating? You can try this [] or .

I recently read a pretty good comic book

I would say, it doesn't feel like a novel, but more like a Devil May Cry speedrun.

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing and has many joys. "The old man in time travels picks up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious...

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!