Gao Wu Huanyu

After reading ten chapters, it was all about setting the background, and there were basic logical flaws. For example, the sentence "The powerful warrior crossed the galaxy 😰" only took sixty years, not six thousand years. Isn't this too fast? It's not that fast from 2 billion people to 6 billion. This is a problem of numerical values. In a precarious situation, pig farming is not so fast. Then there is the background of the original identity of the protagonist who must be a brainless person when traveling through time, and he also brings a genius sister. What is the description of the original protagonist? I hate warriors, so I don't want to learn martial arts. This is not a purely retarded thing. My mother resisted the beast tide and died for mankind. She was glorious. This son doesn't want to avenge his mother and kill all the monsters. Hey, he doesn't learn martial arts. Isn't it just disgusting to write like this? Furthermore, there is this golden finger, which is extremely complicated to write. It takes more than half a chapter, and then summarizes it in more than twenty words. Unlimited mana recovery, double attack? And then there is resistance and so on, why? What about writing a paper? What happens next is even more outrageous, what about cultivating immortals? Just forget about the Xuanhuang in the world of kung fu, huh? Formation, elixir training, spells... Sixty years of martial arts, so look at it, six billion years...

The setting is not pleasant and the writing is fluent. If the protagonist was as obedient and well-mannered as Pei Jinye, we would still be able to watch it. It's a pity that the author of this book doesn't have the writing power or the thinking. I quickly read 30 chapters. There are too many settings, the story has no progress, and the protagonist has no personality charm. So far, I only see a screw who is practicing step by step under the system. Nothing exciting at all. Condensing these 30 chapters into three chapters is almost enough, and then quickly enter the copy within ten chapters! My story-telling ability is not good at first, and I am still so weak that I saw several times where I just copy and paste a paragraph of text three times in a row. No wonder there are so many words. After reading this book, I have to change my concept of searching for books. It is not safe if the number of words exceeds one million!

Zhan Fengyue Silver Evil Halberd (disassembled and non-disassembled version) Tianfa Sword

Why are so many paragraphs repeated in your book?

The plot of Jiangye is not good. It should be over soon.

The pace is so slow. The three golden chapters are not attractive at all.

Come on, come on, let's have a big fight 😄

Not bad, I just hope to arrange a few opponents, it is too invincible and will collapse later!

I just started watching it. If I don't call it Holy Demon Heavenly Emperor from now on, I will have to give a bad review 😍

Is this writing a book? Narratives dominate

Monthly Pass

I'm speechless. The protagonist in the previous book was clearly sane, but why in this book... I couldn't stand it after reading chapter 146. A normal person is forced to become a disciple, and yet he succeeds? ? ?

The author suggests that Western martial arts should have the original Western way of reading, and what the true scriptures are, our interpretation. They should be Holy Light Divinations!

Has the update time fluctuated so much recently?

Apart from the well-written fighting, this novel has nothing good about it. The Holy Demon Yuan Fei has been able to perform NPC operations such as self-aware clones, and it also steals the show without prioritizing it. It's really outrageous. This kind of vest style is being done, and it is still a vest style that has never been exposed. In the later stage, the secondary bodies were transformed into the form of the Qi Tian Emperor. What does this have to do with the protagonist? Does the protagonist of this book have any meaning? It's really hard to resist, the plot is so messed up, the main character's pretense is not rounded, and all the bad things are done by the secondary body, it's really disgusting how it's written.

I can't stand it anymore, but I always feel like the author is writing a running account.