
Difficulty: Giving a Gift Ten Thousand Times but Getting It Back
苦境:赠礼万倍反还
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- Ongoing
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- 1.5M Words
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- Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's still a cuckold system
It's ridiculous to call it an investment system. Who can invest only in women? Is this worthy of being called investment? Investment depends on whether there are benefits, whether you have potential, etc. In this system, you can only invest in women with a score of 90 or above. If you dare to invest in a man, the protagonist will be killed.
You are more, you are more,
,,90,,? Harem novel? After reading it, it was okay. Although I am a bitch, I haven't started a harem yet. The writing is quite smooth, so I can continue to read it. In view of the cheating characteristics of the protagonist, it is possible to open a harem just because it is written. Every female character in Perak has obvious personality characteristics, so it is not recommended to write that the protagonist recruits female characters to open a harem. It's OK to invest, it's OK to be a dog licker, but it doesn't have to be a harem. As for the female characters in the original plot, the protagonist can take on apprentices, maids, and make friends, all of which are written in a way that maintains her character traits, is logical, and allows for continuous investment and returns. Finally, I hope that the author will not engage in some manipulation to lower his intelligence, and he will have a good grasp of the limits, and do not start a harem without thinking. The female characters in Perak are really not suitable for writing harem stories. The misery fandom is already a niche, and if you want to open a harem, you have to screen some people, and in the end no one will read it.
Why do you have to give gifts to the female characters? There are not many people in Perak who are generous with their wealth, but they are not like the protagonist here, right? A reasonable investment does not necessarily have to be for a beautiful woman or look like a dog licker.
One thing is very annoying. You can just use the things in Zhetian. It has to be secretive. The Dao Jing and the Western Emperor Jing all have the same name. What is the purpose of changing the name of the ruthless empress to Devouring the Fairy? No one is blind and can see who is writing about it. If you insist on superfluous efforts, it is really a piece of mouse shit that spoils the whole pot of porridge.
I feel like there are too many exercises now, it's too confusing, I can't master them anymore, I'm still adding more, and they basically revolve around women all the time 😅😅😅😅
After practicing a bunch of advanced skills, the result is that the strength is acquired, and the pressure in battle is too harsh.
The harem, the harem, the harem must be enjoyable.
The harem, the harem, the harem must be enjoyable.
I also made it free to watch for a limited time. It's hilarious. Someone will read it because it's written so viciously.
The clone has begun to fall in love... It seems that the poisonous point is not far away
The original characters are a total failure. Who would care about your original characters when looking at fandom?
It is true that there is no limit or exemption for hanging. . .
I watched it for free for an hour, and then I got a bit depressed and couldn't watch anymore.
Some people have always said that the protagonist is a licker, but the benefits the protagonist gets are real. And when I saw Chapter 33, because the protagonist was so generous, there were already women wandering around the protagonist's yard. This is not a dog licking, it is obviously a fish breeder.
Too watery
It's all adjectives, and it's a few hundred words to introduce the image and temperament. After three chapters, we talked about the plot for a while.
To be honest, the title of this book is quite interesting. I clicked on it and found out that it is huge. It is written in such a way that you can do all kinds of things for the sake of strength and give gifts to bosses. It is great. Focus on doing things. You know what others want and what they lack. You can grab it first and give it back to the villains. The upright people can improve their own strength. They can walk between good and evil and see how comfortable they are. It turns out to be a dog-licking system. The author is a god.
I found this book ranked over 100 on the out-of-circle list. I was very curious, and suddenly a book about misery appeared on the list.
Watching Pili is like watching Jianghu in a Misery. The plot has not progressed for many chapters, and the strength is beyond innate. Still here, do you want to wait until the strength is close to a god, or a god before going out? 🤔🤔🤔
Thunderbolt, but the New Three Kingdoms
Su Huanzhen: Xiaochai, it was not me who harmed you, it was this troubled world that harmed you One page book: Lao Na is the most miserable person in the world, as miserable as the weeds under the wheel, as miserable as the coptis in the cracks of the stones Tan Wuyu: I have been in charge for 10 years, who is the master of this glazed fairyland! Is the surname in Fairyland Su or Tan? Ouyang Shangzhi: I went to talk to Wuyu and asked him to appoint me as deputy director. Qin Jiaxian has already replied to the message - and he didn't allow it! Qingyangzi: The life and death of the heroes in the Central Plains are unknown, that is death Qin Jiaxian: Good to change clothes, good to change clothes Jianzi Xianji: From this moment on, Jianzi Xianji understands that Longsu is no longer the original Longsu Fo Jianfen said: My sword has long been hungry and thirsty Shulou Longsu: That's good! He violated the Tao rules and I also violated the Tao rules Hen of the Wind: The whole army rushed to kill the demon camp and went straight to the four-wheeled ghost chariot of Yama Hanba Zhi Xin: (Lou Zhiweituo) Dad! Your old man died so miserably! I can't help you, kid! Oh my God! Gua Crazy Sword in Troubled Times: Yan Mo Hanba is still a loyal person Aoxiao Hongchen: Juexian Valley is the most powerful pass in the realm of misery Yinzhu Zhuwu: I love him to death (referring to the abandoned emperor) Tan Xielang: Confucian classics are nonsense, and the righteous way of martial arts is vulgar. Worthy Questioning Heavenly Punishment: What a fire, better than the fire of Burning Industry Tower Buddha-Swallowing Boy: The Alien Demonic Dragon is extremely delicious, you must try it Feathered Man Fei Deer: Let me cut ten thousand transparent holes in Yanmo Hanbao Mu Shaoyi: The roar of the Mad Dragon is so powerful! What do you think we should do? Six Disasters Canglong: With my purple dragon formation, 1,000 minions from the demon world will kill 1,000 of them Assault on Destruction Tianlai: How can I, the overlord of the demon world for many generations, recognize you rat people from the Central Plains? Pardon Boy: Want to get rid of them. To follow the right path, you must first lose your virginity The dragon laughed: I am thinking about my sins that deceive people, and they are all sentimental and righteous Zhu Wencangri: The courage of ordinary men in the righteous path of the Central Plains is extremely stupid Sword in the flute: Who is Zhu Wu of Yinquan? That is my brother's favorite battlefield war god. As long as my brother gives the order, he will not frown even if he is asked to kill his own father and mother Welcome to add to it, fellow Taoists.
I admit that Pili is a high-level martial artist, and I like well-written plots. I also like to read novels that use Pili martial arts to disguise themselves as low-level martial arts. But is there no one writing novels that use fantasy techniques to suppress everything in Pili? Pili has a destiny. I want to see the protagonist change his destiny against the will of heaven. The system feels too fragmented.
Too many repetitive system rewards
Repeatedly brushing a bunch of super weakened versions of the Sanqing magic power and the Zhetian Emperor magic power and physique are speechless! In addition, the so-called most powerful emperor magic skill that Ye Fan practiced is also a reward for the system. It is not the magic skill that is invincible. An invincible person can become the great emperor. The magic skill he or she creates is not bad. It is the emperor who has achieved the magic skill. It is the most suitable great power for him. Ye Fan cultivates it as What is the so-called strongest part of each great emperor's magical skill? It's just chance. Only when you get that point do you engage in the hodgepodge training mode. Later, when you reach a higher level, you create your own great emperor's magical skill and become the emperor who suppresses all enemies. You, the protagonist, still learn the hodgepodge training mode of Emperor Ye, and you are speechless! The plot arrangement is always a bunch of repetitive modes of obtaining various system rewards, which is not interesting. It is also speechless to make a bunch of super weakened versions of magical powers because I am afraid that the protagonist is invincible!
To be honest, I tried to persuade him to quit in the first chapter, naming a lot of incomprehensible people and making it incomprehensible.
What is suffering? I have never seen this kind of fanfic, and some of the other fanfics have not read the original work, which does not affect my reading. I feel that this thing is too confusing to read.
It's a pity that I can't rate it, otherwise it would definitely be a two-star masterpiece.
Pull within pull
I am chovy, you write Pili well for me, why not make a bunch of monkey versions to cover the sky? No matter how abstract the plot and writing style are, the things that should be original are not original, and the things that should not be original must be original, especially the two maids who have no impression, and they have so many plots. Also, the main character's name is Ye Chen, don't you think it's awkward? . .
Why is there no one with a picture? The original picture is ugly and can be edited using AI. I haven't watched Pili, and I have to search for many characters I don't understand. It's difficult to substitute without pictures.
Thoughts after reading 100 chapters
First of all, the main plot is very unclear. Logically speaking, a fanfic with a strong main plot like Pili should not have this situation, but the fact is that it is still writing a hundred chapters here and there. The protagonist is almost a god, and Shi Yanwen has not even made his debut. Secondly, the author, don't worry about your Zhetian. The better Zhetian's physique is, the more resources it consumes. Can you break through the Three Immortals after absorbing all the suffering?
Parallel imports
You are so strong, do you still want to travel around the world? You can also participate in various major events. How long do you want to hang out? So far, Su Huanzhen has not appeared. It's boring.
For those who have never come across it, it's better not to read it. Just say that the audience it is written for is too narrow. Think about it, Perfect World is written for the game Perfect World. Anyone can read it. There is no reading barrier. This is the gap!
I am not the author, and I am not saying that the Queen Mother of the West is not good, but compared with Tianzun, is it not enough? ? ? How can the exercises be hybridized? ? Doing so much? ?
Just start reading from Chapter 7. What are the first few chapters about? World settings, system settings, character relationships, are you just throwing out the outline? There are a lot of settings in Luo Liba. How many readers would be interested?