BOSS Type Player

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When I read Chapter 8 of Volume 2, my feeling was that it was confusing. The transition was too abrupt. I always switched from one scene to another suddenly without any foreshadowing.

Loneliness is an eternal proposition.

It was written too hastily, and the expression is incomplete and confusing.

I don't know why it feels so fragmented and confusing when I read it.

To be honest, this is like a novel written in the country in the novel. It does not introduce the background at all, as if the readers have a complete world view by default. No matter how the protagonist does something that feels unreasonable, it is just brushed aside, as if it is a normal operation that is accustomed to that world. How should I put it... As long as you are happy

It's so confusing. Can the author explain the background of the Federation and what the protagonist has done?

Come here and mark it, and take a look if you can survive 🙂

If you want to play bugs, you can refer to Tyran and Thorin. You can also refer to mechanical nano bugs.

I haven't watched it yet, I want to ask, only the protagonist is a player, many players

Two monthly votes have been cast This book has the potential to become a fairy tale, but I hope the author can improve the narrative structure. Sometimes the transitions written are too abrupt. I think the story scenes and character details can be written in more lengthy and detailed terms. You can refer to articles such as Initial Evolution, Thriller Paradise, and Apocalypse Forecast. (The author can also let other friends read it first after writing. Sometimes it seems that the plot begins before the explanation is finished. The author may understand what is happening, but the reader will have a little difficulty reading it.)

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

Sorry, I can only stay away from pest control. Goodbye

Forget books with 40 chapters, just keep them, usually no more than 100 chapters will be written

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book: Mental Patients Have More Happiness "Old Man in Time Travels to Scavenge and Survive by Making Bad Movies"