My Cultivation Narration Really Does Have a Problem

Every fantasy novel has this habit of shaking their head and giving a wry smile at the drop of a hat. They sighed helplessly and shrugged. They awkwardly touched their nose. I was speechless. 😰Can't they just talk normally?

The opening narration was quite interesting, but there was too much female character storyline, making it seem like the male lead's storyline couldn't progress without them. It would have been better if the male lead had become a rogue cultivator early on. 😅 Is the male lead going to be another unfinished story? Perhaps it would be better to avoid writing so much female character storyline.

The writing is alright, but the plot lacks logic. For example, the sect rebellion is treated like a joke. Without deep-seated hatred, immense benefits, or a sure-fire victory, it's just a comical, sudden life-or-death internal struggle. Don't people value their own lives? Also, isn't this supposed to be a cultivation sect? The fighting is no different from that of a martial arts sect.

I think it's great. It's obvious this is a newbie's work, and they should be encouraged as they progress. Plus, the large-scale, coherent, and fast-paced flow is really good.

First of all, I've read at least 80-90% of this book and actually paid for it, so I feel I have the right to say this: the author doesn't know how to write satisfying moments! Yes, no. Some might say this is a slow-burn novel, but I think a good novel needs a good balance of pacing and relaxation. Clearly, the author hasn't managed that balance.

I realized that it wasn't that the male lead didn't treat the female lead as a woman, but rather that he didn't treat himself as a man. Is the author from a female-oriented genre?

Having read the first 50 chapters, it's quite interesting. No matter how old the formula, as long as it's well-written, people will still read it (like me). During the Chinese New Year, I gave the author a 5 yuan tip. I hope the author continues to work hard! 😁

One issue is the incredibly slow progression of over a hundred meridians. With so many opportunities, how could it be so slow? (The author seems to be deliberately suppressing combat power.) This makes the ascension to the Tongyou realm feel abrupt (though it's good that the author recognized the problem).

After reading dozens of chapters, it seems to be a novel where all women are included, with all sorts of women: yandere, a cultivation-version Wu Zetian, a time-traveling woman chasing her husband, a naive and innocent girl, etc.

When I saw the fight against that Lu guy during the return to the Helian faction, I couldn't hold my ground. All that power I built up earlier seemed pointless. Even if you say the protagonist's aptitude is lacking, he's only a small realm below Lu. Where's the effect of cultivating the five elements simultaneously?